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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sharmida
Beenz that was wicked.!!! Hahaha so my topic sent you into overdrive.Khanak the seductresss🤣.Damn and the ending was fabulous.I am telling you if Khanak dos this Shan's hormones will reach a very dangerous level😆.He may just faint due to the effect of high hormones.I dont know what will happen to Karishma.Striaight into the ICU for her😆

I just hate it when they have that special night and stuff,the girl sits on the bed all sharmil and stuff and the guy has to do all the work.😆.That is just crapppp.If this happens this will be the first ever on Indian TV😆.

CV'S WE WANT THIS SCENE. NOTHING LESS,NOTHING MORE.!!!!

But there has to be a seductive number playing in the background??😕😆

true Sehju! your article was the culprit!! omg tum bhee sidra kee bahen niklee! all she does is talk about the couple's harmones 😆 you know i should have put in more feelings i just realized, you knoe, rather than what happened. karishma was ECSTATIC i'm so glad i made her happy! seductive number can be zara zara touch me naaaa!😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: m4manju
hey beeni🤗 this hug is for this natkhat OS.......
i m just done with the b'day preparations for ma frnd and i saw ur OS as soon as i logged in😛......

hmmmm so khanak is being naughty ha? 😉..............

i loved full OS and specailly "Khanak placed her arms around Shaan's neck, took her mouth towards Shaan's ear and whispered "Appko sharam aa rahee hain?"

i was like 🤣...........

Manju!! thanksss!! yea that was my favourite scene too! shaan could have died in embarassement!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CapriMe
Hi Beeni..Loved ur OS...sooooooo romantic!! Shaan being his burthal self..ahahaha...awesome really

Hope CVs give us something in these lines :D

Kirthi

thanks Kirthi 😊😊 yes lets all hope for that! 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose
Okay I read this, hoping Beeni wouldn't make me blush☺️.....But it was very cute and not too besharam either😆.....Thanks Beeni, lovely OS😃......

haha thanks May! yaar May besharmi i leave for you know, like Sidra, in the middle of topics taakay they're not too much in the limelight! actually sidra gave me this idea to be a bit suttle with besharmi 😆 apnay hee topic main i would never be besharam...hehe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sexyheels
oh i loved it the whole scene especially the dialogs that you wrote for akshey and shaan i could so hear akshey saying all that to shaan and his responses and the last kiss 😆 awesome

haha yar sexyheels is your name sana? ermm i'm not too sure LOL! anyway thanks! i think i have a crush on Akshay now LOL he just had to be in this! i love how they're shaping up his character!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: *|Heena|*
Muahaha i love itt..i want to read more..trust me it was too short Beeni..i think you should do us all a favour and start a FF hehe...the role reversal worked really well..and we could so imagine Khanak doing that and Shaan being all sharmeela

thank you heenzz :) ok i'll try to do a FF i may have to quit my job but whatever :D

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: yellow_dress
gr8 work beeni...cldnt stop laughing!!...
sharmeela shaan.....very forward khanak...perfect SR!!

a big thnku to karishma, the craziest shanak fan, for being the reason beeni wrote this!!

Beeni, u r taking part in the RBO FF CONTEST, rite??

thankssssss *hugs* heehe yea lets all thank karishma too :D yea i guess i am...i don't know what to write though 🤔

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: shanakforever
beeeeniiii u awesome os writer u just made my day🤗🤗🤗 u know how much i laughed imagining khanak do all this 2 shaan n seeing his expressions in ma mind i just couldnt stop laughimng...the end part was just superb after all shaan did wat hes best at planting kisses😆
ur so good at the os seety u should continue writing moer cause now im extremely greedy 2 read yr os...superb loved it completely thanks so much fr doing this n i love u toooo loads.muah❤️❤️🤗

KARISHMAAAA!!! ok firstly i can't believe you are one of the LAST ppl to comment here!! and secondly THANK YOUU :D hehe even i couldnt stop laughing it as soo crazy! i'm soo glad i made your day!😃🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

omg i just noticed a BLOOPER in my OS!😆 i wonder if anyone else noticed it as well. you know in the beginning i wrote that natasha fled to switzerland! and then i wrote aksahy gave shaan tickets for a honey to...SWITZERLAND!! LOL now why would shanak want to go for their honymoon where nattie dearest is present?!! lol! i mactually meant to write Singapore! (since i myself am dying to visit that place) 😆😆

waisay come to think of it, there could be actual dram if they DO go to switzerland haina? with them bumping into Natie there! LOL