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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hey beeni🤗 this hug is for this natkhat OS.......

i m just done with the b'day preparations for ma frnd and i saw ur OS as soon as i logged in😛......

hmmmm so khanak is being naughty ha? 😉..............

i loved full OS and specailly "Khanak placed her arms around Shaan's neck, took her mouth towards Shaan's ear and whispered "Appko sharam aa rahee hain?"

i was like 🤣...........

Edited by arsh-fan - 14 years ago

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CapriMe

@CapriMe

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hi Beeni..Loved ur OS...sooooooo romantic!! Shaan being his burthal self..ahahaha...awesome really

Hope CVs give us something in these lines :D

Kirthi

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Okay I read this, hoping Beeni wouldn't make me blush☺️.....But it was very cute and not too besharam either😆.....Thanks Beeni, lovely OS😃......

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sexyheels

@sexyheels

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

oh i loved it the whole scene especially the dialogs that you wrote for akshey and shaan i could so hear akshey saying all that to shaan and his responses and the last kiss 😆 awesome

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Muahaha i love itt..i want to read more..trust me it was too short Beeni..i think you should do us all a favour and start a FF hehe...the role reversal worked really well..and we could so imagine Khanak doing that and Shaan being all sharmeela

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

gr8 work beeni...cldnt stop laughing!!...

sharmeela shaan.....very forward khanak...perfect SR!!

a big thnku to karishma, the craziest shanak fan, for being the reason beeni wrote this!!

Beeni, u r taking part in the RBO FF CONTEST, rite??

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

beeeeniiii u awesome os writer u just made my day🤗🤗🤗 u know how much i laughed imagining khanak do all this 2 shaan n seeing his expressions in ma mind i just couldnt stop laughimng...the end part was just superb after all shaan did wat hes best at planting kisses😆
ur so good at the os seety u should continue writing moer cause now im extremely greedy 2 read yr os...superb loved it completely thanks so much fr doing this n i love u toooo loads.muah❤️❤️🤗

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-Veena-

@-Veena-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Awww Beenz.... Loved it.. bless.. I want it all!!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tvrasika
Really gotta rush... running super late... but cudnt stop reading when I saw it was an OS from Beeni! Totally worth the delay! Beeni, this is marvellous! 👏OMG... I cudnt stop laughing😆! So like our Shaan and Khanak!😆 Blimey! Wud love to see this on screen in RBO... and tell u what, I actually think we might get something similar... these two are gonna e having nok-jhok even during their SR, LOL....

chalo... off to work...will try to join u all this evening ..

hehe gaayu yar i can't believe you delayed yourself for this crazy OS! seriously i thot it was one crazy piece of work but the way you guys are loving i actually had to go back and read it myself to see aiss kya hain iss main?! and when i read it again i laughed really hard too imagine!😆 we really DDOOO need a hatke SR for these 2 cuties!😳 thanks a lot!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: itskals
Hey Beeni.........
You are an amazing writer ok........ur os made me feel like i am reading a chicklit book......

I say you could write a book and that could become a best seller........do think about it.....

luv

kals

thanks kal 😊 hehe really i could write a book? aww i'll definitely think about it! welcome to the forum by the way 😃