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Wow Beeni ... awesome ... CVs should have put this sequence on d show tat time ... kya jabardasta rehta ...Shaan ka gussa & Khanak ke desperate attempts to spend time wit him ...

Originally posted by: -Saira-

Helloo...Beeni! 🤗 How've you been? Getting the 'wedding jitters' 😆

^^ok; is this your 1st OS? I haven't read it and why is it posted now! 😳 This was such a relief to read from all this ShaNak withdrawal we are facing. I must say...it was BRILLIANT! very ShaNak types 😳 infact the spraining ankle scenerio happened in the show!

I LOVED it...BUT nothing beats the dialogues in this one,specially the ending how Shaan completes Khanak each sentence at the end 😍 how romantic yaar and the proposal *sigh*.Your one heck of a fab writerl;you should write a FF on ShaNak in dhulwadi!

Waiting for your next one Beeni! 🤗

Originally posted by: rooj-i

My brain is dead!

Beeni!

That was too good! Kya tadpati ho OS queen!!! I loved it!

it was soo simple and so cute!

also Loved it how Karan kept coming in! Kya baat Karan ki itni yaad?🤣 ya phir kuch aur baat hai?🤣

Ok I want another OS now! get on with it!

Rooj

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Wow Beeni ... awesome ... CVs should have put this sequence on d show tat time ... kya jabardasta rehta ...Shaan ka gussa & Khanak ke desperate attempts to spend time wit him ...

Originally posted by: tofeeees

HAHA! thank you rooj🤗LOL yaar i forgot the guard's son's name was Karan! 😆 i wrote this OS ages ago yaar Karan was NOT ill then! :( but SEEEEE you guys got to see karan;s name in this one too! didn't it toatlly make up for karan being missing aj kal!?😆 i'm writing i'm writing thora time toh do yaar!😆

The party was turning out to be drag. Like really! It was one of those that had men in suits standing in a group and talking about business deals and women dressed in sleeveless backless sari's gossiping about the recent divorce in their circle of friends. Shaantanu was irritated beyond measure. In the past he had attended such parties only for the liquor that was served in them and if, at any party there was no alcohol, he would just stay shut in his room. Business parties did not interest him the least bit! But this time it was different. One, Akshay had expressly requested Shaan to be present at the success of his party to get the Khandelwal Industries a huge project and two, he was married and very explicitly ordered by his wife not to let a drop of alcohol go down his throat!

He walked over to Khanak who was dressed in hot pink and silver sari and just like the colour she wore, looked rather hot. She was standing near the catering ordering the waiters to make sure everything was in order.

"Khanak tumko pata hain tum buhat hot lug rahee ho?" Shaan began to do what he did best; flirt.

"Shaantanu, app chahay toh thori madhira pee saktay hain" Khanak said without looking up, placing the tissues on the plates.

"What?! Khanak tum theek toh ho na?" Shaan said, coming close and touching Khanak's forehead.

"Shaantanu aap pee saktay hain!" Khanak said, now looking up at Shaan "Laikin agar aap nay 2, woh kya kahtay hain? Pints ? Say zyada piya toh main aapsay wada karti hoon kay main 10 pintt pee loo gee!" Shaantanu laughed at the absurdness of the statement.

"So basically" Shaantanu said with a mixture of a sneer and a smile. He came closer to Khanak, and releasing the strand of hair that was behind her ear, letting it fall over her face the way he liked it " If I drink more than TWO pints you will make sure YOU drink 10 pints?! Iska mutlub tum madhira peeyo gee?! Are you serious, Khanak?" he laughed.

"Main serious hoon!" Khanak's eyes flashed dangerously. "ub aap bhee serious hojayay!"

"Khanak tum madhira NAHEE piyo gee! You get that?" Shaan said raising his finger in Khanak's face warningly.

"Acha?" Khanak raised her own finger and slowly used it to lower Shaantanu's finger. "Aapko apnay upar bharosa nahi hain?" she mocked.

"Oh please! I have attended hundreds of such parties! I know where to stop okay!" Shaan said flustered, trying not to give away that he was bluffing.

"Doh pints shaantanu" Khanak said raising two fingers and saying this she turned to leave. She had just walked a distance when she turned back, saw Shaan's expressions, again a mixture of shock and confusion, smiled that million dollar smile and said "Main aapko daikh rahee hoon" and saying this she left to meet up with Mrs. Oberoi.

Half an hour later Khanak saw Shaantanu very predictably pick up his FOURTH pint of beer and take it to his mouth. Khanak was prepared for this. She had even hid a bottle of beer in the kitchen for her own consumption. But she had wanted to avoid using it!

Furious with rage, 'Burthal' suddenly seemed like a very ineffective word to describe Shaan. Urghh he was more than that, she thought! She wanted to openly swear and abuse; make a mess of the party if it came to that but she was too nice that way. She would teach Shaan a lesson. Give him a taste of his own medicine or rather, give HERSELF a taste of Shaantanu's medicine.

When the guests begun to leave and Shaantanu picked up his fifth pint of glass, that is when Khanak hid behind the pillar, pinched her nose and took the bottle to her mouth. It tasted very familiar, she suddenly thought, and quite automatically a guy named Soam came into her mind. She drank and drank till the bottle became three fourth empty and her mind became numb with relaxation. She registered watching all her family members going upstairs to their rooms as the party ended. She registered feeling happy and excited! She saw Shaantanu still sitting alone at the bar and realised she had lost count of the number of pints he had had.

All of a sudden she felt the knowledge of the number was VERY important to her. Stumbling towards Shaantanu, whose eyes were dreamily staring into space, she said raising three fingers "Appnay paanch pints kay baad aur kitnay pints peeyay?"

Shaantanu, even in his drunken state, looked at Khanak shocked. Khanak smiled and pulled at his collar "Shaantanu batayay naaaaaaaa!" she yelled.

"Khanak TUM NAY MADHIRA PEE?!!" Shaantanu gasped. Khanak nodded vigorously and smiled.

"Haan burthal, nahi burthal naheeee'..eeediooottt''nahii edddiottt bhee nai''azzzs halll'hall naheee'holeeee'azzz hole'..mainay peeeeee! Aur aapsay zyada pee hain" she said happily but then her face fell "Laikin mujhay yaad nahi hainnn kay main jeetee ya aapp jeetainn! Mainay toh puri botall pee hain! Pints wints kay---chakkar main---nahi paree!" she swayed as she said it.

Shaan looked on in horror as he saw his wife, completely drunk fall over him. He could not seem to support her. He wondered why. Heck he was drunk too. Supporting himself on the already wobbly Khanak he somehow managed to pull her, and Khanak somehow managed to push him towards the main entrance and into the garden. Both of them fell on the grass and lay on it for a while. Then Shaantanu rolled towards Khanak and tried to balance himself on one elbow but failed. His face towards the cloudy sky he drunkedly said "Khanak party khatum hogaee na? party kahan gaeee?" Khank smiled and looked at the other side of the garden into the neighbours' house. There were loads of wedding lights brightening the place there! There was loud music and noises of the duffly and dhole could be vividly heard.

"Wooh rahiiii!" Khanak pointed in that direction. "Shaantanu appko pata hainn wahan bhee party hainnn'.wahan bhee madhira milay geee! Chalay wahan?" she said excitedly trying to get u.

"Aray pagal hogee ho Khanak" Shaan drawled "Tumnay madhira kyun peee? Ub tumharay bai aur ada kya kahen gay?"

The music was atrociously loud at the neighbours. "Aray yaar yay log koi acha music nahi laga saktay" Shaan continued. "Khanak mera na----mera na dance karnay ka jee chah raha hain! Tumhara chah rahah hain?"

"Hmmm" Khanak's face became dreamy and she started humming "Sheeeellllaaaaa sheela kee jawaaaaniiiiiiii'sheeelaaaaa'.jawaniii" and then she suddenly attempted to get up. The paluu of her hot pink sari was stuck under Shaan whose eyes were now closed and he was humming "Munniiii badnaam huiiii darlinkk oh darlinkkk oh munniii"

"Shaatanu mera palluuuu---chorayyy---aapko ko kya hua? Appp nay toh KUM pee hain"

"Munni'khanak---mainay kum nahiiii--- RUM pee hainnn---burthalniiiiii" and then he laughed and he continued to laugh loudly, holding his stomach. "Khanak kum---rumm- beer---dearr---nearr---khanak come near!" and he grabbed Khanak by her shoulders and pulled her towards him.

And it started to RAIN! Heavily! As if the rain was a signal, the music from the neighbors' house became louder, this time it was the song Zoobie Doobie! It took 30 seconds for both the drunkards to get drenched.

Shaantanu let go of Khanak instantly, his hatred for rain even present in his drunk state. Khanak pulled at her sari's pallu and finally manage to free it from under Shaan's body. Shaan staggered, wobbled and got up too. The song Zoobie Doobie was blaring now!

"Shaakhon pay pattay ga rahay hain phoolon pay bhanware ga rahay"

Shaantanu looked at Khanak and smiled weakly. His hatred for the rain was battling with his furious desire to dance in the rain with the love of his life in front of him. In the end his furious desire won as he knew it would.

"Bhagiyaan main doh phoolon ke horahi kay guftuguuu"

He came close and said "Oye munni, tum kitnee khoobsoorat ho" He placed his hands on her wet face and kissed her cheek.

"Laikin aapnay meray sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya" Khanak shivered at his touch. "apnay kitnay---pint"

"Itnay meri Munni---kay main talli ho gaya'main talli---main tallii--- mani talli hogaya---" he sang and took Khanak's hand and gave her a spin and then another one and then wobbled. "Easy now Shaan", he said to himself, balancing with difficulty.

Khanak laughed "Aray aap galat gaanay par galat nach rahay hain! Yay gaana joobiii doobii hain! Shaantanu yay doobi kyun bole rahi hain? Koun doob gayee?" Khanak asked innocently.

Shaantanu said nothing but just held Khanaks hands and vigorously moved her towards him and away from him "Dance karo--- yay baarish ka gaana hain meri munni!"

Rim Rim rim Rim Rim Rim Jhim, Sun sun sun sun hawa.

Tip tip tip tip tip boondain gurrati bijlian

Khanak obeyed and danced and let go an Shaantanu's hands. She couldn't explain the feeling of ecstasy she felt at being drunk and dancing on the song that suited her best! She started singing the song, and saw Shaantanu doing the same.

Hmmm'.. Bheegi bheegi sari main

Youn thumkay lagatee toon

Khanak thumkaod towards Shaantanu who laughed, ruffled his wet hair, wiped his face unnecessarily and said " Tum katrina jitnay hot thumkay nahi laga saktee munni"

"Burthal Kareena, Katrina nahi! Aap toh mujh say zyada talli hain! Main toh ada ko bataaooo geee! Bataooo gee! bataooo gee" Khanak repeated, now going around in circles in the rain.

Shaantanu annoyed by her repetitive 'Bataoo gee' went over to her, held her shoulders tightly and said "Oye chup! Tumnay ada ko bataya na toh main tumharay gaoon kay sarpanch ko bata doon ga! Kay tum tallee hui!" Shaan laughed " Bataaoon ga! Bataoon ga! Bataaon ga!"

He kept on repeating 'Bataoon ga' making Khanak irritated at first, then furious, then take action! Grabbing him by the neck she pulled Shaantanu closer and kissed him tightly to shut him up! And indeed he shut up as they both revelled in the kiss in the rain.

Hain raat akeli tanha

Mujhay choo lay akay tu

Jaisa filmo main hota hain

Horaha hain hubahoo

They broke off when the song ended. Shaantanu placed his head on Khanak's shoulder and kissed her wet neck, her wet hair and then hugged her. Khanak hugged him back, both supporting each other, both getting more and more drenched in the rain, both soundlessly waiting for another hot, romantic, seductive number to begin. Bless the couple that was getting married. Bless them, they mutually thought.