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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#981

i love you PD!!....

kiara....man...she's awesome!!..

but my fav will always be Tashu...she's the bestest best friend!! ;)

shanak ruless!! <3

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mahi_soniyo

@mahi_soniyo

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#982

hey puja di..for shanak realization mahi wanna sy..

Shanak ki milney ki khushi chayi kuch iskadar...jaise...

Ankh ko roshni mil gayi
Honto ko hansi mil gayi
Dil ko dharkan mil gayi

Din ko raat mil gayi
Sitaroon ko chand mil gayi
nadi ko samondar mil gayi..

N hume humari shanak mil gayi..😊😊😊

With luv mahi..😊

Edited by mahi_soniyo - 14 years ago

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

haan bhai mujhe pata hai, tumhe hakk hai🤣

abh padh lo!

aur comment karna maat bhoolna!!

Vandu ur reponsibilty ke Nitya madam comment kaare, warna next update nahi karoongi main... usne pata nahi kaab se comment nahi kiya!😆

Commented ! Tere update ke neeche wala comment I edited....Snigger.....I am the first to comment ab😆😆😆😆

Nitya ? Hmm....Abhi pakad ke laati hu usko.........Afterall agle update kar sawal hai !!!😆😆😆

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#984

PD i have left a long comment in the previous page .. do check it... hope you got to see your supernatural....

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#985

Pooja! 🤗

Loved it to the core! I'm getting so addicted to this FF! need help! 😳

You're just Fab! 👏 The realisation had happened finally at last someones words hit Shaan finally! Awww it was so nicely played and both in each others arm at very vulnerable moment was so *sigh* 😍

AND

being honest didn't cry BUT felt sorry for Kiara,she was nice.I felt more for Adi maybe because of Kavi.☺️

One's realisation done and another to go! Waiting...🤔 When is Khanak gone read her mum's letter? I'm very intrigued to know what it is about. I really can't wait for her realisation to be portrayed by you as Shaan's was beautiful.😳

So is bid adieu to Adi and Kiara forever or are they gone make a entry back? 😆 Hopefully they're gone don't want to see Adi all devdas.😭

I'm unshamefully 😳 gone ask you for the next as this one was such a pleasure to read lol!

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: togepe30

Commented ! Tere update ke neeche wala comment I edited....Snigger.....I am the first to comment ab😆😆😆😆

Nitya ? Hmm....Abhi pakad ke laati hu usko.........Afterall agle update kar sawal hai !!!😆😆😆

oye vanduu...nt fair.....i ws d first 1 to comment.....

tu apni haq jamaate jamaate..mera haq mujhse cheen liya...nt at all fair.....😡😆😆

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#987

pooja love the line u wrote nt exactly but it meant the whole world knw that thy r made for each other but thy only keep on denying it ...............oh god its lke yashran na🤗

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#988

hi, poo.......................*can i call u dat*

first of all

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

u r a gem! yaar simply a gem..........how can u write so marvelously....i mean reading ur story, it seems i m watching the scenario in front of my eyes.........only few authors manage to create dat effect..n girl u r one of dem

seriously..don think i m flattering u.....the way u simply dumped off kiara and Aditya from Shanak's life was superb....thank God! they are alone now...i mean together wid each other

i loved the whole narration , but i wanna quote 1 special line

He realized that what he felt for Khanak was not just a mere chemical reaction, no what he felt for her, ran much deeper. She ran much deeper into him, she belonged in his core, to his very soul, she belonged in the deepest quarters of his heart...

How true! How poetic! dis defines ur artistic talent ......

i have been always a fan of literature, of writers, poets--never can understand how they come up with such a splendid vocabulary....they are just apart n unique....God gifted

believe me....u r one of dem....

u must be in literature field , i suppose....

okkkk........enough now...

now aab jyada phool (not flower.....mind it) mat jana n update it..........i can't wait for shanak official confession to each other.......

jaldi.........else..... forget everything i said on top😡😡

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: togepe30

Khush kar ditta !!

The drunk stupor was funny and super cute !!

Shantanu realized finally and accepted his feeling........I hope he isnt totally tally and doesnt forget everything in the morning😆😆😆😆😆😆 Kidding !! He better not !😆😆

Wonder when Khanak will realize...! And when is she gonna read that letter from her mom....I guess that will lead to her realization😳

Continue soon !!😳

Luv,

Vandu😉

Thanks😃😃😃😃😃😃 and no he hasnt forgotten .... I am nt going to write a pg worth of shaan realising, for him to forget it all next morning...😆

and the letter is in the next update....... which wnt be until wednesday... ab bhai I hve given u two LONG chapters, wednesday tak mera peecha chodo, then u can jatao ur hakk Vandu😆😃

love,

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#990

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

Ahhhhhh....!!wat an update yar....ab saari gussa gyi bhaad mein....nw tho... 'I LUV U' yaar...😳

luvdd..itt...!!luvdd itt...luvdd it soooo muchhh...!!

d way..khanak shared hr pain...ahh...it ws too real in emotional...

just cn imagine thm drinking n sharing their pains....the way hr expressions change..n everything...!!

n i luvdddd kiara dis tymmmmmm........😆😆usne tho kamaal hi kar diya...kash ki ye baat vo pehle hi samajh jaati...n use akela chod deti...thn..we wouldnt hv hated hr soo muchh...😆😆anyways...der aaye durastaaye....😆😆

d update ws rly too much touchyy....luvdd their each n every dialogues..

n shaan ke realisation ke baare mein tho poocho hi mat...happy realisation..🥳tht whole scene..ws just amazing...

his words..memories..😍😍

ab next part bhi jaldi update karo.....very soonn...tht cnt w8 anymore 4 khanak 2 realise..😳😳

luvssss,

shama...