*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 100

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

pooja hun🤗🤗🤗

My cuties are back together. Oh i am so overwhelmed with joy. La La la la...... Havent felt so happy for shanak for a while as i am now....( read .. on the show).The magic just strikes when they are together.. awww.. yasharan....who better than you can protray them so well. You really have magic in your writing and no wonder we are behind your life for updates.

I really felt for once after reading your previous mini part that khanak will breakdown if shaan leaves or atleast have a big drama when they both meet. NO. I am so happy to be proven wrong by you. i know u wouldn come up with that but then was prepared for the worst... blame your build up with the khnh bg. I really thought it was gonna be a sad one.

I was like they both just broke up from a relationship that too not even 24 hrs... but i dont see them cringing over that and infact showing the maturity to accept why it did happen. Now that is a lesson to be learnt. But they still had the vulnerability to each other which they didnt with their respective partners. Loved it.

Awww ..Kiara.. very nicely handled...she s Big girl indeed.... a big TATA to her * waves frantically*

Oh and about the broken machine .. i was just wondering what that could have been and my imaginations ran wild..lol.. I didn expect snoring at all.... lmao.....

Coco .. the finishing touch to yasharan in your story....

now the next big question...

when are you updating next.... take your time.. I am gonna cherish this one for somemore time... don be away long.... varna u know what will happen

So is it Khanak s turn next...

When is she reading the letter.... i am waiting for it.....

You ve now turned into an angel..... from being a devil for the last 5 hrs.....

You should actually sign a show for YRF ...... if not yashraj films..... then it would be our forums own YRF productions.... Yasha Ran Forever by PD.....

Love

priya..

ps.. i think it is time to start a new thread... by the time you get back with the next part.. this one wud get over..lol

THANKS PRIYA!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗 andf nt a bad idea! IFs own YRF productions😆😆

Originally posted by: krock

awsome update pooja yaar loved it shaans realisation part was dam good i felt like reading it allover again yarr tally shaan and khanak too good0.................after ages i felt like im actually reding dostana yarr ..............u dont knw hw happy iam..............and sleeping with each oter part was too good

Thanks ankita!

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Thanks Pooja for keeeping the promise of updating by 11 !!!!!

Beautiful ... Thanks for Making Kiara see sense and send Shantanu back ...
Even i m a SHANAK fan ... Noone can be between them for long !!!!

Loved the SHOT convo between SHANAK ....

Khanak in Shaan's arms and sleeping peacefullly .... Awwww such a great MOMENT !!!!!!

Love you Poooja for making Shaan stay with Khanak !!!!!

🤗🤗THANKS!!!🤗🤗 LOVE U TOO!! (for reading and liking😃)

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OMG ur an innocent vixen!

lmao

I knew Kiara was good...i just knew it! I knew she would help them!!!

I loved it..I loved it to the core Pooja!!!

I want to know how Khanak realize things now...Shaan had finally admitted now it is Khanak's turn...she needs a helping hand...

i loved it how you beautifully showed their friendship and then Shaan's realization...it was really good Pooja!!!

i hope she reads the letter now...

rooj

Thanks rooj.....🤗🤗 Love,

Originally posted by: rockingneha

Brilliant update Pooja!! 👏 m spell bound! finally he accepted!! m sooo happy! ur one of a kind writer man! kudos!in Shaan's style charan kaha hai aapke 😆 😳

🤗Thanks neha🤗 @bold- 😆😆😃

Originally posted by: mahi_soniyo

puja di....
I m speechless..wht an update..yaar u hv made me cry....
Wht a beautiful sight of luv!....i hv nvr read such emotional lines abt luv...wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!
I m nt gettin ny word 2 praise abt ry8 nw..jus wana sy luv u shanak..
This for u puja..thnx 2 made me cry in luv🤗 🤗🤗

Thanks Mahi!!!

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

i love you PD!!....

kiara....man...she's awesome!!..

but my fav will always be Tashu...she's the bestest best friend!! ;)

shanak ruless!! <3

Thanks AMMU!!!🤗🤗

Pooja! 🤗

Loved it to the core! I'm getting so addicted to this FF! need help! 😳

You're just Fab! 👏 The realisation had happened finally at last someones words hit Shaan finally! Awww it was so nicely played and both in each others arm at very vulnerable moment was so *sigh* 😍

AND

being honest didn't cry BUT felt sorry for Kiara,she was nice.I felt more for Adi maybe because of Kavi.☺️


One's realisation done and another to go! Waiting...🤔 When is Khanak gone read her mum's letter? I'm very intrigued to know what it is about. I really can't wait for her realisation to be portrayed by you as Shaan's was beautiful.😳

So is bid adieu to Adi and Kiara forever or are they gone make a entry back? 😆 Hopefully they're gone don't want to see Adi all devdas.😭

I'm unshamefully 😳 gone ask you for the next as this one was such a pleasure to read lol![/QUOTE] Thanks Saira🤗🤗🤗 AWW🤗😃 Thanks again....... I always did say, when he realises it will be a beautiful moment😃

Originally posted by: mahi_soniyo

hey puja di..for shanak realization mahi wanna sy..

Shanak ki milney ki khushi chayi kuch iskadar...jaise...

Ankh ko roshni mil gayi
Honto ko hansi mil gayi
Dil ko dharkan mil gayi

Din ko raat mil gayi
Sitaroon ko chand mil gayi
nadi ko samondar mil gayi..

N hume humari shanak mil gayi..😊😊😊

With luv mahi..😊

AWW so sweet Mahi!!🤗😃 and u can call me poo, but I like the spelling pooh bettr, coz pooh bear was one of my fav cartoon characters wen i was a child.........😃 Love,

Originally posted by: togepe30

Commented ! Tere update ke neeche wala comment I edited....Snigger.....I am the first to comment ab😆😆😆😆

Nitya ? Hmm....Abhi pakad ke laati hu usko.........Afterall agle update kar sawal hai !!!😆😆😆