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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: krock
pooja love the line u wrote nt exactly but it meant the whole world knw that thy r made for each other but thy only keep on denying it ...............oh god its lke yashran na🤗

totally😉😳🤗

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1002

Originally posted by: sweetsute

hi, poo.......................*can i call u dat*

first of all

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

u r a gem! yaar simply a gem..........how can u write so marvelously....i mean reading ur story, it seems i m watching the scenario in front of my eyes.........only few authors manage to create dat effect..n girl u r one of dem

seriously..don think i m flattering u.....the way u simply dumped off kiara and Aditya from Shanak's life was superb....thank God! they are alone now...i mean together wid each other

i loved the whole narration , but i wanna quote 1 special line

He realized that what he felt for Khanak was not just a mere chemical reaction, no what he felt for her, ran much deeper. She ran much deeper into him, she belonged in his core, to his very soul, she belonged in the deepest quarters of his heart...

How true! How poetic! dis defines ur artistic talent ......

i have been always a fan of literature, of writers, poets--never can understand how they come up with such a splendid vocabulary....they are just apart n unique....God gifted

believe me....u r one of dem....

u must be in literature field , i suppose....

okkkk........enough now...

now aab jyada phool (not flower.....mind it) mat jana n update it..........i can't wait for shanak official confession to each other.......

jaldi.........else..... forget everything i said on top😡😡

🤗AWWWWWWW thanks SOOOOOO MUCH shilpa!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗 @bold- no I am not, I am an artist.... waise abhi baani nahi hoon, padhne jaane wali hoon fashion designing london main this year.... 😃

and next update is gonna be on wed/thurs.........

love,

Pooja😃

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: yasharan.love
🤗AWWWWWWW thanks SOOOOOO MUCH shilpa!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗 @bold- no I am not, I am an artist.... waise abhi baani nahi hoon, padhne jaane wali hoon fashion designing london main this year.... 😃

and next update is gonna be on wed/thurs.........

love,

Pooja😃

dats great! now can't wait till wed/thurs

btw i had guessed dat either u r an artist or in literature field.........i think i mentioned above.......dekha main kitna acha guess karti hoon------*lifts her collar*

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#1004

👏......I haven't watched today's episode yet, becuase I saw you had updated....I don't think I breathed until I had finsihed reading it.....OMG Pooja it was devine👏⭐️👏, I was completely spell-bound!....

I seriously began to think about who I loved more....ShaNak....of RBO or.....ShaNak of Dostana.....This is the beauty of your characters and their story.....Sheer brilliance👏⭐️.....

Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1005

Awe loved the second part Kaira understood the depth of their relationship just like Aditya did but she got a hint beforehand but when she saw it herself she was sure that they loved each other intently and made buddhu Shaan go to khanak and awe that was so sweet how Shaan handled her and she who always guards herself tells him everything and is like an open book to him if this is not love then what is and haha Shaan was so contradictory when he described what love was and he felt all of what he said and now when he lay next to khanak and had a good think about everything he came with the answer that everyone got before him that he loves khanak and always will as this love is much deeper then the one for Aisha anyways great update and loved the new turn to the story can't wait to read more 😊
Ps hats off to Aditya and kaira it's a brave thing to sacrifice and let go of your first love

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1006

ok so um where to begin um wow and its just awesome and im blabbering on like a retard but honestly that was superb👏👏 even taaliyas are too little 🤗pooja ur write amazingly well, truly u need to put all these updates together and form a book or at least form a new thread bcos its true ur goona reach 150pages in no time becos ppl can not resist but comment.

i would like to take pride at the fact that i always liked kiara lmao the way she told shaan to go to khanak reminded me of tashu's scene in the paathshala it was beautiful emotional but i felt aditya's exit was more so lol

and khanak breaking down was superbly written and the way shaan wants to help khanak by leaving her and then goes back to her- o just brilliant

and the moment of realisation

Halllllllaaaaaaaleujiah lol

u were right it was worth the wait now just eagerly awaiting khanaks

and omg so upset i was at work when this countdown was going on the forum were in a frenzy actually i think i had a lucky escape i dont think i would have coped with the excitement lmao

pls update soon xxxx

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1007

tussi great ho

tussi jaisa koyi nayi

tussi story writing ki queen ko

tussi sab kuch ho....

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1008

u knw u made me cry wid ur update........😭😭😭
. i cnt believe i actually cried reading d kiara n shaan ka part.................. its was jst tooooooooo gud............. 😊😊😊
i jst luv kiara for wat she did........ she is a sW*Hrt😃😃😃😃
😃n shanak part was jst mindblowing..............👏👏👏👏👏
n shaan realizin dat he luvs khanak was lyk woww!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😉😉😛😛
😳update soon😊😊😊
😊

Edited by roshnimanoti - 14 years ago

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1009

just luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv it............uff i guessd such stupid thngs.hehe sorry.....plzzzzzzzz update soon..........

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1010

Hey Pooja.........

amazing update...........🤗🤗

in the first part it looked that shaan was going to leave khanak but thanks to kiara she made him understand that he should go to her n i loved the convo b/w them though it was emotional..ok n i too loved the shanak part they both drank vodka....n 1 good thing n bad thing about aditya....😆 after having each shot.....the way shaan consoled her...n thanks that u made shaan stay with khanak ...............most intersting part he realized his love n said i love u khanak.......wow loved it now its khanak's turn to realize that she loves shaan..............

what to say(dil khush kar diya....)loved it...........❤️

now don't make me wait too long 4 ur update i want to read next part of dostana so update soon..........