*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago
it's awesum yaar...luvving it..it's getting intersting...
yasharan.love thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
are u really speechless?
dnt hate me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar pooja
I loved the rest but could not take aditya /khanak doing some thing( i dont want to mention that also)I cant really i did not like it at all.
And I like and Love only ShaNak together
lovely update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

reserved omg.... i expected this... hmm.. the last few paragraphs made me forget what i read earlier.. i went blank.. with the the aditya khank conversation..

no i am not disappointed..
i was wondering how u will put it .. but it was just perfect.... aditya s the perfect guy for her... but we don like perfects.. do we... we always love the flawed gems like shaan....
khanak .. she is bound to fall for a guy who beleives in serious relationship and sensible like aditya... now the point is... does she actually love him or like the idea of falling in love with him.. that was ur line... read old updates recently.. so now it makes sense here i beleive...
i love ur writing.... even if i read an old update... i see the words then link with the story now.. u r an amazing writer...
u make me like it even if shaan and khanak r seeing somebody else.....
now that shaan s realising.. i am expecting some skeletons to fall out of khanak s closet too.....
ok but still... don make me wait for the next update.. update soon......

@bold- ah yes!! I have left such little clues throughout the updates.... I ,ove it wen someone catches me😆😉
and u might be at something priya.... it will become clear in the later updates😃😃
and thanks!!!!
lots of love!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Yaar pooja

I loved the rest but could not take aditya /khanak doing some thing( i dont want to mention that also)I cant really i did not like it at all.
And I like and Love only ShaNak together
lovely update.

thanks shriya..... well I was shaking writing the- you-know-which part, it had to be done, but I hated myslef fr doing it.... but trust me, you will love me later, or I hope you will...
😃😃
Edited by yasharan.love - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGGGGG........Isnt Khanak the luckiest girl in the world to hear two such AWESOME guys say such LOVELY things to her and that too within minutes of each other........I dunno whose words I loved more...!! Goshhh !!!! Lucky her...What a pity she has to choose between them....*sigh*
Aditya is sooo super cute....!! Love him and AWWWW ....Shaan realized that he loves her?? Or is he still playing the "attracted" jaap...!! He has to accept to himself that he loves her...I think he has...thats why he is blaming Tashu for all this....!!
Now...i seriously dunno whom I want Khanak to choose...ROFL.........U shudnt have made such brilliant characterizations for both the guys.....They are both soo amazing...! And you shudnt have chosen such fab guys to imagine the characters.......Kavi and KT........Goshhhh!!! Hotness Personified !!! *sigh*
Jab main itni confused hu.....jabki mujhe dono me se koi nahi milne wala...Toh m wondering Khanak who can have her pick from them...how confused is she gonna be !! LOL !!
You better CONTINUE SOON........I cant wait to see how the story proceeds !! Hehehe !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

are u really speechless?

dnt hate me

Now that Ive kinda recovered from the initial shock and read your update again......
well the kiss definitely left me speechless. I had read all the chaps again the day my exam ended...it was in my to-do list and as priya said..you left hints....subtle very subtle hints....there was a fear that khanak-aditya might actually happen....
You tell your stories very beautifully though and Shaan at tashu's house narrrating all this...very innovative👏
just when we had hunky-dory ideas abt the ball....you gave us this....but, awesome update😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

OMGGGGGG........Isnt Khanak the luckiest girl in the world to hear two such AWESOME guys say such LOVELY things to her and that too within minutes of each other........I dunno whose words I loved more...!! Goshhh !!!! Lucky her...What a pity she has to choose between them....*sigh*

Aditya is sooo super cute....!! Love him and AWWWW ....Shaan realized that he loves her?? Or is he still playing the "attracted" jaap...!! He has to accept to himself that he loves her...I think he has...thats why he is blaming Tashu for all this....!!
Now...i seriously dunno whom I want Khanak to choose...ROFL.........U shudnt have made such brilliant characterizations for both the guys.....They are both soo amazing...! And you shudnt have chosen such fab guys to imagine the characters.......Kavi and KT........Goshhhh!!! Hotness Personified !!! *sigh*
Jab main itni confused hu.....jabki mujhe dono me se koi nahi milne wala...Toh m wondering Khanak who can have her pick from them...how confused is she gonna be !! LOL !!
You better CONTINUE SOON........I cant wait to see how the story proceeds !! Hehehe !
Luv,
Vandu

thanks vandu!!!😃😃 tld u u will love how aditya will be treated in this one😆😆 and shaan said thpse things to explain to her that anyone can love her, for her he said it to mke her feel better, but I am glad U liked wat both of them had to say....
will update soon😃
love
Pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vatsalya

Now that Ive kinda recovered from the initial shock and read your update again......
well the kiss definitely left me speechless. I had read all the chaps again the day my exam ended...it was in my to-do list and as priya said..you left hints....subtle very subtle hints....there was a fear that khanak-aditya might actually happen....
You tell your stories very beautifully though and Shaan at tashu's house narrrating all this...very innovative👏
just when we had hunky-dory ideas abt the ball....you gave us this....but, awesome update😳

thanks😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
@pooja..wen r u postin d nxt update.......??????u r jst Brilliant!!!

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