*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 58

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

thanks😃😃

Originally posted by: vatsalya

you give me a one-word reply?!!!!

Sharam nahi aati!🤣

chalo maaf kiya...after all you were writing this update for us😳

ok pooja...ur aditya is DEAD!!!....(ofcourse...im gonna kill him!)

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

ok pooja...ur aditya is DEAD!!!....(ofcourse...im gonna kill him!)

AWW dnt kill him he is nice😃😃😳😳 plus its kavi shastri😳.............

W*H .😲....wht was this pooja .....my brain is in shock yaar😲.....omg cant think of anything right now........Aditya our khanak 😭..jis ka daar tha wahi howa.......n u made them kiss (which i did not like at all girl) .....feel like killing aditya but he is a nice person is liye chorti hon😆 ....

but overall loved ur style of writing....shaan's narration to tashu ..going back n forth in the story was amazing ....

now update soon 😃

cheers

shai

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

thanks vandu!!!😃😃 tld u u will love how aditya will be treated in this one😆😆 and shaan said thpse things to explain to her that anyone can love her, for her he said it to mke her feel better, but I am glad U liked wat both of them had to say....

will update soon😃

love

Pooja

Originally posted by: togepe30

I know WHY Shaan said what he said....But I'd like to believe that he meant EVERY word he said....And that means a lot....That was an awesome thing to say !!😳😳😳

Oh! he did....but he doesnt know yet that he meant every word....

Originally posted by: sampar

W*H .😲....wht was this pooja .....my brain is in shock yaar😲.....omg cant think of anything right now........Aditya our khanak 😭..jis ka daar tha wahi howa.......n u made them kiss (which i did not like at all girl) .....feel like killing aditya but he is a nice person is liye chorti hon😆 ....

but overall loved ur style of writing....shaan's narration to tashu ..going back n forth in the story was amazing ....

now update soon 😃

cheers

shai

😆😆😆😆 poor aditya, he is on the hit list of so many ppl😆😆

*Sneaks into the Ball Room....Grabs Aditya and runs for dear Life*....Adiii chalo.......Yaha janta pagla gayi hai...Tumhe kuch kar na de...!!

Originally posted by: togepe30

*Sneaks into the Ball Room....Grabs Aditya and runs for dear Life*....Adiii chalo.......Yaha janta pagla gayi hai...Tumhe kuch kar na de...!!

Khabardaar jo kisi ne mere Adi ko hath lagane ka bhi socha toh.....Kaviii *dreamy eyes*