Some ideas to CVs for ShaNak scenes

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tvrasika

@tvrasika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Hehe... Sabii... u r the best yaar... u and blonde... yeah right!!!!😃

Someone also wrote abt a birthday scene and lo and behold, we have had that too, though must say that scene was probably shot even before the post was made here...

Khanak should get smaller ear-rings, I agree.

I also agree with Shriya that Shaan and Khanak taking Natasha's name as an excuse is not right and will not go down well with the audience. That must be reduced... let ShaNak scenes be abt ShaNak only!

My preference is for slow and sweet romance but this is Star One, so hope the CVs do justice to both the channel's requirements and also keep the character of ShaNak intact!

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May

@The_May_Rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: tvrasika
Hehe... Sabii... u r the best yaar... u and blonde... yeah right!!!!😃

Someone also wrote abt a birthday scene and lo and behold, we have had that too, though must say that scene was probably shot even before the post was made here...

Khanak should get smaller ear-rings, I agree.

I also agree with Shriya that Shaan and Khanak taking Natasha's name as an excuse is not right and will not go down well with the audience. That must be reduced... let ShaNak scenes be abt ShaNak only!

My preference is for slow and sweet romance but this is Star One, so hope the CVs do justice to both the channel's requirements and also keep the character of ShaNak intact!

I agree Gaayu.....I love this confusion and ShaNak nork-jorks.....I want a slow love story and to enjoy all the sweet moments😊....And ShaNak should always remain this cute even when they fall in love.....

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: tvrasika
I want more paatshala scenes... cud be very interesting, romantic and funny! Nothing like one person teaching a new language to another with whom he/she is in love... wud also like to see Shaan pick up some Gujarati and pronounce it wrong and Khanak pulling his leg for it:)

Coming to paatshaala scene - the phool-fool passion - I am impressed with the choice of words the scriptwriter thought as part of that scene.

The word phool from khanak brought a natural innocent pout - and how can shaan not notice it and fall for it.

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Now that Shaan has realized his love for khanak, his next step wud be to woo her to him. Shaan already knows khanak likes him for what he is - she already mentioned that he is a 'achcha pati' Now shaan just has to make her feel attracted to him.

This is one scene I think might be good

Shaan is returning from office and going towards his room. While passing by his daadi's room he hears khanak's voice from inside -'Oh daadi ab bhi nahi gaya'. Shaan enters daadi's room to see what's happening - more to see khanak. He sees that Khanak and daadi are sitting on the bed and playing carrom board. He says 'daadi so you both seem to be having fun'. Khanak immediately looks at shaan behind her and says - 'u returned from office- I will go and get some chai for you'. Shaan says 'No you need not get up. Suraj's sister already gave me chai. Go on play. Let me see how you play'.

It is khanaks turn to strike the coin. She positions the striker to hit it. But Shaan from behind says - 'Ruk. Yahan say strike karoge toh coin kaise jaayega'. He leans over her shoulder from behind to position the striker for her. Khanak gets all uncomfy because of his closeness. Daadi notices khanaks reaction and steals her eyes towards the otherside also pleased that they both are finally getting close. Shaan after positioning the striker says - 'Ab strike karo aur dekho coin kyun nahi jaayega' Khanak finds herself breathless but hits the striker but misses the coin completely. Shaan sighs and says - 'Meri Fool jaise patni! aise koi strike khartha hai kya'. He leans completely over her to reach for the striker. Khanak's pulse rises high.

Shaan positions the striker and strikes the coin right into the hole. Proud of himself he says - "kyun, mere strike kaise hai daadi" and look towards his daadi. He sees that his daadi is embarassed and looking elsewhere. He turns his head and looks at khanak and finds that she too is looking the other way. He could hear her heavy breaths. He realises that he is too close to khanak and understands why his daadi is embarrassed. He bites his tongue but he is also pleased to see the effect he is having on khanak. He slowly draws himself up casting an eye on daadi to see where she is looking. Seeing that she is looking else where; our naughty shaan with a twinkle in his eye brings his face even more closer to khanaks and blows gently over her ears as he gets up.

'Achcha to mein taka hua hoon, mere room chaltha hoon' and goes away.

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

mahi loved the scene i was actually imagining it....beautiful scene.i can so c it happenin in my dreams 2 nite🤣..............i really want a scene of them dancing yaar.....like shaan teachin her dance or shaan gets 2 know khanaks a superb dancer n asks her 2 dance for her as he is her"good friend"☺️...n since v know yashus a kathank dancer she could really perform well n v get 2 c some awesome hot n sizzling chemistry......pls guys think of more such scenes as v all know that v have hidden directors in ourselves🤣🤣

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: shanakforever
mahi loved the scene i was actually imagining it....beautiful scene.i can so c it happenin in my dreams 2 nite🤣..............i really want a scene of them dancing yaar.....like shaan teachin her dance or shaan gets 2 know khanaks a superb dancer n asks her 2 dance for her as he is her"good friend"☺️...n since v know yashus a kathank dancer she could really perform well n v get 2 c some awesome hot n sizzling chemistry......pls guys think of more such scenes as v all know that v have hidden directors in ourselves🤣🤣

Thanks @shanakforever! Yeah a dance scene wud be great. And as you said YM is good at kathak, it wud be nice to see her doing that. But considering that she has come from a backward village - less chances forher to straight away perform that. So there is one scene I thot on fly will post it next.

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Now that TV has been added to their bedroom. Let me start it from there. One day when Shaan enters their room, he sees khanak all glued to the TV and is surprised to see her watching Kathak. Gaon ki chori and Classical kathak. He asks - "Kya tumhe is dance/nritya ka naam maalum hai". She says -"Haan - Kathak! Mujhe bahuth pasand hain bachpan se. Tyouhaaron me gaon ke mandir me bahar se koin aakar nachthi thi. Par gaon mein mujhe seekne nahi mila." Shaan smiles.

Next day when he returns from office and khanak brings tea to their room. He stands hiding something behind. Khanak asks - "kya hain". He says - "Kuch nahi. Ek minute tum bhaito". She sits on the sofa. He says. Paanw oopar rakho. With a confused look she she keeps her legs on the sofa. He says - 'jab takh mein kehtah hoon aankh bandh karo'.

He then carefully places the gift he brought next to him and unwraps it. He carefully tries to tie the payal to kahanks right leg. Khanak opens her eys wide hearing the tinkle of the payal. 'Mere liye' says she. He cuts her short -'Nahi mere liya. Roz office ko pahan kar jaaonga. and smiles. He adds on- kal se tum bhi subah ready ho jaao. Officee jaathe tumhe kathak class me drop kar doonga. Khanak is all happy.

Next day he drops her to kathak class. In the evening when he returns in his room - he asks khanak - toh class kaisa tah. She is all excited and says bahut achcha gaya. Shaan says - toh kya seekhi dikhao. Mujhpe hasna nahi - says she. Nahi yaar - says shaan.

(Now comes a small shanak moment). Khanak show the steps she learnt. She is all smiles and excited. shaan enjoys the sight - he loves to see how happy khanak is and just admires her innocent joy- silently. As she is showing the basic steps, khanak stretches her right hand to the right with her left hand folded. (A typical dance mudra). The moment he sees the right hand stretched shaan is jolted into the romantic rain dream moment. (the one during their adventure night whr he dreams of romancing khanak holding her outstretched hand - shown yesterday also when he closed his eyes)

In a trance he gets up from sofa and goes behind khanak and holds her right hand just close. Khanak's pulse rises and she turns her head towards him in a shock. He is jolted back into the present. He fumbles and says- kya yaar khanak, haath aise rakhna hain- dance bhi mujhe hi sikhana hai kya.

Sayings so he gets out of the awkward moment.

(This later leads to the full fledged kathak dance after khanak learns it after some episodes)

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

@pree..mahi the carrom scene was awesome Somewhere i see a creative in u.

I liked the fact how dadi was reacting in the scene.

@shanakforever ur idea on khanak learning khatak(Khanak and khatak wow rhyming) is too freaking.

@pree.mahi again your imagination on the whole afffair of khaank earning khaatak is too lovely.

hope the cvs definitely will do something on these lines.Both of u woould make great cvs.

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Mahi dear...fantastic write ups dear...you should really open your own OS gallery for Shanak..or even start a FF...I could so imagine both the scenes you wrote...purely Shanak indeed....loved it...😃👏👏

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

mahi u can sure b a gr8 cv..wat a scene wen i read such scenes i actually go 2 the dream mode n c it............i could actually c shaan doin that 2 khanak....lol......beautiful scene wid comdey n romance which shanak r gr8 at.............i was just thinkin of a scene that one day shantanu decides 2 cook for khanak as she is not feelin well or somethin......so shaan does cookin n khanak comes 2 c c him cook in the kitchen wich leads 2 some funny moments as well as romantic ones...srry i cant think of elaborate scenes as im not gr8 as mahi 2 make such wonderful scenes......pls guys keep adding more scenes eagerly wait 2 read them

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