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Posted: 15 years ago
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It is the day of Shaan's project presentation. It is a beautiful day. Shaan wakes up even before his alarm clock rings. Looks like the responsibility alarm within him woke him up in anticipation of the project.
As he opens his eyes he sees khanak sitting at the dressing table. She is keeping bindi and applying sindoor. Shaan smiles admiring at her khoobsurati. His eyes slowly lower down and he sees that khanak is dressed up in the beautiful blue sari (which she wore on the adventure night) - immediately his dream rain romance sequence flashes before his eyes. He couldnt control grinning and slowly brushes his hair with his left hand thinking abt those moments. He continues looking at her.
Khanak oblivious to Shaan looking at her continues dressing up. As she applies kajal, Shaan cudnt help admiring her big innocent eyes. Then she applies lipstick, Shaan clenches his fist as he recollects the almost kiss encounter they had the previous day when he cornered her in paatshala room. How much he wanted to kiss her - he atleast wanted to give her a peck at that moment. But his conscience stopped him at that time - as he first wanted to be a man Khanak wud luk upto.
Shaan continues looking at her silently, admiringly & lovingly. Khanak takes a comb and starts brushing her hair. She collects all her hair to the front on her right shoulder and keeps brushing. Shaan looks at her face in the mirror. His eyes twitch in a puzzled look - What the heck is she doing. Shaan notices that Khanak while brushing her hair is actually concentrating on something on the dressing table and murmuring continuously.
He sits up straight to see what she is doing out of curiousity. Shaan sees that she is actually preparing simultaneously for the test he is going to conduct in paatshaala that evening. He silently laughs nodding his head and saying to himself -Unbelievable Khanak. But he loves the cuteness of Khanaks deed.
Khanak next lifts her hands up towards her neck and to her back. Shaan sees that khanak is trying to tie the dori of her blouse. Shaan feels a heavy gulp going down the throat as he couldnt help not looking at her blouse back. He twitches in his place. Khanak has worn sarees so many a times but this is the first time he got this feeling. He turns his eyes to another side as he feels guilty to look at her in this way without her knowledge. But involuntarily his head again turns towards her - his eyes hesitatingly looking at her. There is something going within him which is not letting him control his feelings.
Khanak is still struggling with her dori all the while continuing to concentrate on her book. Shaan slowly moves towards her and kneels down behind her to tie her dori. Khanak raises her head in a shock and looks into the mirror as she feels a warm breathe over her back. She is shocked to see Shaan right behind her kneeling down and tying the dori. She is shocked but she cudnt stop him - she doesnt know why. Shaan carefully ties her dori, all the while taking care that he doesnt touch her. He ties it and gets up - glances to his right biting his lip and forces a smile onto his face and looks back at khanak.
He asks - aaj kya khaas din hai, sari pehne ho. She is still in the state of shock but somehow gathers her voice and replies - Aapka perject aaj hai na, to maine pooja rakha hai. Shaans face lights up on hearing this - he is all pleased with khanak's gesture. Khanak notices his joy from the mirror and feels happy that he liked it. In that joy she forgets the shock and tells him - aap jaldi se thaiyaar hoiye, pooja ke liye dher ho jayega. He nods -Hmmm.
She continues - aapke kapde wahan rakhi hoon. He looks at the direction she is pointing and exclaims - 'Kya! Yeh kurtha-dhothi pehenke aaj jaana hai kya'. She retorts - 'Toh kya aap suit pehenke pooja mein aayeinge? Budthal'. Shaan says - ' But yaar khanak - office mein isme jaaoonga to client bhaag jaayega, stupid'. Khanak nods and smiles saying - 'aap toh suchmuch budthal ho, office ke liye mein doosra kapde rakhi hoon'. She leaves to prepare for the pooja.
As Shaan lifts his dress from the bed he also checks under the pillow to see if she has picked the letter he had kept for her the previous night. He is pleased to see that the letter is not there but wonders if khanak read it as he didnt see any reaction from her. He enters the bathroom wondering.
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Oh My! the text came longer than I expected. When I visualised the scene it completed so quickly.I'll better continue remaining later.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
👏👏👏Well written and cute scene Mahi, can just imagine it😊......Wonder where the letter went, will you tell us?......😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
@Shriya...wah wah wah...kiya baat hai...loved it dear...
@Mahi...awww......dori tying...I so love those scenes...even though they are so cliched and in real life hubby dears...are so anti romantic...😆😆😆😆
Hope we get to see something simila soon. I so miss Khanak in saees...they should show her wearing those alternately with the churidars and shalwars....hope the CV 's take this in to consideration...
Now more impatient for Monday...😆😆 and Mhi where has the letter disappeared so early.....😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
ahhh preemahi you listened to me and wrote an OS!! *hugs*🤗🤗🤗 i love you for that! maybe i should take inspiration form you too! lol! it was lovely! just loved your style of writing very talented ppl we have in our forum haina?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
@ shriya your scene was just too good yar! loved the songs galore!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@pre maahi OS stands for One Shot story like the one that you've written (you know no parts just narrated in one go) and FF stands for Fan Fiction with loads of parts, i think.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@pree.mahi
OMG.That wa a sixer from sachin tendulkar's bat.I mean yr scene.So good...wish to see khanak in saree with a dori blouse immediately
.great imagination.keep it up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
As Shaan gets down frm the stairs, Sunil and Akshay r amazed 2 see him in kurta. Akshay even teases him saying - 'kya baath hain shaan, mere shaadi ke baad pehli baar pehne ho'. Shaan smiles bk at him a little embarassed. He moves towards the mandir.
Daadi and Khanak are already at the mandir. Daadi maa is doing the pooja and khanak is all engrossed in the pooja. Her eyes are completely closed and she is sincerely chanting mantras and praying for Shaan's success. Shaan cudnt be more happy seeing what khanak is doing for him and also sees divinity in her innocence. After the pooja khanak applies tilak on evrybody's forehead. Just as shaan is abt to leave the mandir. Khanak says 'rukiye'. She brings the laptop to him. Shaan is shocked to see tha laptop with tilak on it and exlaims - "Not again Khanak. Ise phir se naha di ho kya' Khanak gives him a jovial angry look and says 'meine sirf tilak lagayi'
The whole family has breakfast and Khandelwal men-folk get up to leave for office. As Shaan is abt to leave Khanak signals with her eyes to shaan towards daadi's feet who is standing on the otherside. Luckily the budthal understood the meaning of her signal and immediately went to daadi to get her blessings. Daadi lifts him up and hugs him blessing - 'shaam ko subh subh kabar lao beta'. Next he moves to his mom, she too gives him a good hug and plants a kiss on his forehead saying - 'I am sure you will snatch this deal. I know how talented my kid is'. Boo is missing mysteriously. Sunil and Akshay also give him a hug and wish him all the best for his first project. Khanak also wishes him success and happiness and also reminds him to pray God before starting the presentation. Shaan smiles and says - "Sure" and turns to go.
But there is slight hesitation as he turns to go as though he forgot/missed something. He takes 2 steps biting his lip and rubbing his forehead with his thumb and index finger and thinking. But finally he turns back and reaches Khanak and hugs her and says - 'thanks'. Khanak is both embarassed and shocked. But the one who is most shocked is Mad. Akshay whistles teasingly. Shaan smiles and lovingly says bye to khanak.
Sunil, Akshay and Shaantanu are almost at the door, when khanak says - "Shantanu, ek minute rukiye". Shaan turns enquiringly towards her. She quickly brings a paper to him and says 'kal aap A/C ka remote lethe waqt, aapka perject ka paper wahan bhool gaye". Shaan replies - "meine tho koi project paper nahi choda tha" - hoping she takes it back to room and reads. Khanak saying 'tho ye phir kiska hai', tries to open the paper. Shaan immediately snatches the paper from her saying - 'yaad aayi, yeh mera hi project ka paper hai'. Khanak hands it over to him. Shaan leaves kicking his fists in the air.
PS: This has a really small shanak moment but I really want that to happen. May and Krishna dont bang me for where the letter went :)
Edited by pree.mahi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
😆😆😆Mahi am not going to bang you at all...it was just as aas the real Shanak are...could see the whole scene happening in front of me...loved it dear....👏👏👏 Hope they do show something similar on Monday...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
I've just notice this thread which is a very great idea. This show and shanak has really grew on me, just love it for is freshness.

@ kubare

Congrats I see your idea of gopi tying the rahkie on shaan came true which was very beautiful scene, especially when gopi told shaan she forgived him and no longer blamed him for suraj death which brought 😭 to my eyes.
Edited by pyar-ishk - 15 years ago

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