OS on Shanak - To New Beginnings - pg 8

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Krishna

@kubare

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: togepe30
You know what??
Go join the Creative team of RBO !!

We will write a petition for that !! Hahaha...Waise bhi this is the zamana of petitions....!! People write petitions for everything !! LOL !!!

Lovely Part !! Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

Vandu darling...I am so glad that you loved it.....and would love being part of the creative team of RBO....😆😆😆 but... what can I do....😆😆😆 Yes if petitions help...I am all for it....😆😆😆😆😆

Thank you dear for your lovely compliment and for reading and loving it....🤗

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Mahi

@pree.mahi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Hey Krishna, Lovely OS dear. I loved all the soliloquy taking place in Shaan's and Khanak's mind. The bed-scene was sweet and particualrly shaan's feelings bcoz of khanak's closeness was damn hot. Also loved the way you led the whole thing to acceptance of friendship. Yes even i want to see Shaan wooing Khanak - he has to keep his promise - he too quickly got brainwashed by Mad

Krishna wud be great if u take this OS further to the stage where shaan is also wooing khanak. Wud luv to read all ur steamy , sensuos, smoldering scenes as part of the wooing😳😳, ofcourse it shud be PG😭 considering there are 13 yr olds also on RBO IF.

Edited by pree.mahi - 14 years ago

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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Krishna, loved reading it, it was very cute😳 Loved the way you described Shanak sleeping😍
But you are right, today's episode was totally different from our expectation😆. I never thought Shaan will pull Khanak towards him and Khanak will move away.😆

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