OS on Shanak - To New Beginnings - pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: kubare

A OS on popular demaand......😉🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Not one of my good or great work but on such short notice this is what I could come up with remaining..in the boundry of....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 PG...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 DD couldn't do X-Rated...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Dedicated to DD....Sareeta....Tofeeeeesss and everyone who loves Shanak and wants to see them share the bed today.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ek Raat Ki Nazdekiya

"Khanak...we both aren't feeling well ...so...can't we share the bed....and before you say anything..I promise...that I wont misbehave...or touch you..." Shan said with a smile, he truly hoped she would say yes. He looked at her and waited patiently for her to make up her mind.

"God what should I do, and hes right, we can't even afford another bed, and I do trust him...till now...Shantanu has never misbehaved with me ever." Kahank thinking to herself.

Shan watched the changing expressions on her face, and hoped adn prayed for the best.

"Okay, ...but...you sleep on your side and don't come on mine agreed" said Khanak.

"Agreed" said Shan immediately before she changed her mind and he had to find some other place to sleep. Khanak made the bed and decided to give the pillow to Shan as last time he did give it to her at that cheap hotel.

They both felt a little bit akward...but Shan was damn tired after yesterday and todays work...he settled himself on his side and faced away from her and once his head hit the pillow he went to sleep. Khanak was still undecided...but tiredness overruled and she too settled on her side as far as possible it could be from Shan and she too faced away from him, and sleep to claimed her.

Morning :

Khanak felt so warm and comfortable, she tried to snuggle more closer to the warmth, but felt herself held tight agaisnt something solid, she slowly opend her eyes and saw only skin..and she tried to move her head back and looked up finding herself next to Shantanu...her mind stopped working and she couldn't do anything but stare at him, he looked just like a child sleeping, she smiled to herself at that thought...and suddenly...reality intruded and was too embarassed.

Only God knows when she went to sleep and how during the night she eneded up..next to Shantanu and he next to her....Maybe it was both of them seeking warmth form the other or just plain security, or comfort.

Her head was on his arm, his other arm was on her waist holding her close, her one arm was next to his face and the other over his waist, her leg was slightly between his and his slightly over hers...they were very very close. Thank God Shantanu was still sleeping...or she would be so embarrased...but how to get up without disturbing his sleep.

She tried to move her arms frist and then tried to remove his arms from her waist...but he stirred and she stopped...she tried again and this time she succeeded..and put his arms on his pillow and again tried to move her legs to creat more space..this movement awakened Shantanu...and he gave an lazy smile and looked at her and went back to sleep...Khaank breathed a sigh of relief...but suyddenly Shantanu's eyes flew open and and he and she both tried ot get up together . B oth were too embarassed taking the blame on themselves and both started mubbling together on how sorry they were....and suddenly they both stopped looked at each other and started laughing.

Originally posted by: *|Heena|*

Yep all we can be is hopeful to have scenes like this when they get to Mumbai and im just hating the fact that the whole family has turned up hope they don't cause too much trouble for Shanak....and yehh too right Khanak gave up too easily she should have fought a little..as i was saying the creatives could have done a lot with the scene..*sigh* anyway i think we should fire the creatives and hire you instead you would do an excellent job 😆

Originally posted by: shriya84

fantastic.I read it more than once..Great imagination .How i wish those things really happened.Thanx a lot.

Originally posted by: pree.mahi

Krishnaaaa loved ur OS like anything. Oh wish that it happens now - all entangled - and the blanket shud have fallen down on the floor as this hotel room will also have a blanket. Now that both want each other, the feeling they get may be slightly different once they wake up in the morn. But it will be really sweet...and treat

Originally posted by: kubare

Shriya thanks you so much dear.....I now hope that it happens on Monday....its been months...and its about time the C's show us something like this...😆😆😆😆 We demand it...for not showing us a kiss....😆😆😆😆 Though you comment about Khanak doing the kissing had me LOL....yes we many just see that in the future instead of Shantanu..doing it Khanak takes the iniative....being Jhansi ki Rani....😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: shalini_s

hope this happens next week...

Originally posted by: togepe30

Cuteeeee !!

Originally posted by: aditi305

[ Cvs are you reading this. Its a wonderful idea for Shanak scene. It would be if you incorporate it.

Your Story was amazing, while reading ti I was just imagining Shaan and Khanak. OMG they are making me mad.

Originally posted by: pree.mahi

Reg Shriya's suggestion reg kiss, it is sure to happen one day. Shaan has already missed the chance thrice. Khanak gets fed up with shaan constantly missing/stopping himself evrytime, . So she ties her dupatta as she did in jhansi ki rani epi and goes ahead with the deed - thinking - 'iss burthal ke liye intezaar karthe rahoongi tho buddi ho jaaongi.'

Krishna there is a hot demand for ur scene and its high time we get it.