OS on Shanak - To New Beginnings - pg 8

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A OS on popular demaand......😉🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Not one of my good or great work but on such short notice this is what I could come up with remaining..in the boundry of....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 PG...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 DD couldn't do X-Rated...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Dedicated to DD....Sareeta....Tofeeeeesss and everyone who loves Shanak and wants to see them share the bed today.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ek Raat Ki Nazdekiya
"Khanak...we both aren't feeling well ...so...can't we share the bed....and before you say anything..I promise...that I wont misbehave...or touch you..." Shan said with a smile, he truly hoped she would say yes. He looked at her and waited patiently for her to make up her mind.

"God what should I do, and hes right, we can't even afford another bed, and I do trust him...till now...Shantanu has never misbehaved with me ever." Kahank thinking to herself.

Shan watched the changing expressions on her face, and hoped adn prayed for the best.
"Okay, ...but...you sleep on your side and don't come on mine agreed" said Khanak.
"Agreed" said Shan immediately before she changed her mind and he had to find some other place to sleep. Khanak made the bed and decided to give the pillow to Shan as last time he did give it to her at that cheap hotel.

They both felt a little bit akward...but Shan was damn tired after yesterday and todays work...he settled himself on his side and faced away from her and once his head hit the pillow he went to sleep. Khanak was still undecided...but tiredness overruled and she too settled on her side as far as possible it could be from Shan and she too faced away from him, and sleep to claimed her.

Morning :

Khanak felt so warm and comfortable, she tried to snuggle more closer to the warmth, but felt herself held tight agaisnt something solid, she slowly opend her eyes and saw only skin..and she tried to move her head back and looked up finding herself next to Shantanu...her mind stopped working and she couldn't do anything but stare at him, he looked just like a child sleeping, she smiled to herself at that thought...and suddenly...reality intruded and was too embarassed.

Only God knows when she went to sleep and how during the night she eneded up..next to Shantanu and he next to her....Maybe it was both of them seeking warmth form the other or just plain security, or comfort.
Her head was on his arm, his other arm was on her waist holding her close, her one arm was next to his face and the other over his waist, her leg was slightly between his and his slightly over hers...they were very very close. Thank God Shantanu was still sleeping...or she would be so embarrased...but how to get up without disturbing his sleep.

She tried to move her arms frist and then tried to remove his arms from her waist...but he stirred and she stopped...she tried again and this time she succeeded..and put his arms on his pillow and again tried to move her legs to creat more space..this movement awakened Shantanu...and he gave an lazy smile and looked at her and went back to sleep...Khaank breathed a sigh of relief...but suyddenly Shantanu's eyes flew open and and he and she both tried ot get up together . B oth were too embarassed taking the blame on themselves and both started mubbling together on how sorry they were....and suddenly they both stopped looked at each other and started laughing.

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blackdaughter thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwww. I hope that's exactly what happens!!! That was so cute!!! I loved it!! 😆
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it was awesome kubare!! i missed the showwwwwwwwww today and i still dont know what happened in it!!! infact its actually being telecasted oon tv as i type!! *wahhhhhhhh* *sniff* or it just ended i dont know i'm too pissed to see the time!!
but your OS totallly cheered me up!! i hope something close to this has happened atleast! ok i'm runnig to see whether its been uploaded yet! loads of love and hugs!! :)
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@ Maddy thank you so much dear for loving it....but did you see the epi yet....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣they gave us something completely unexpected...Sareeta thought they woudl fight the whole night ..thus we will be entertained...with their nok jhok...DD and I so wanted something along teh lines that I wrote but were ready to settle down for a pg version...but what they gave us was Shantanu completely hogging the bed and Khanak to give him more space ended up on the floor...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 a U (universal - suitable for all ages) rating...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Thank you for the compliment dear...I am glad it made your day. I watched the epi dear...and its is nothing like what I wrote.....infact it was completely different....with both of them sharing the same mattress ...but with Shantanu hogging the whole thing and Khanak ending up on the floor...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 No hanky panky at all *bhoo hooo...me stamping my foot and pouting*😉😛🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I know!!! *pouts* Hum kya expect kar rahe the aur kya ho gaya!!! 8wails dramatically* 🤣 Don't worry, there will be more oppertunity in the future!! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great imagination,waouw!😛 well done,like it.
great & cute,if only cv's can make some scenes like ur wrote!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishani

great imagination,waouw!😛 well done,like it.

great & cute,if only cv's can make some scenes like ur wrote!😉

Thank you dear for liking it 😃....hopefully soon...when they have to share the bed in his rooom a sI think ...she definitely will have to move in with him what with Suraj family moving in...😉😆😆😆😆 am really hoping and praying hard....😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

I know!!! *pouts* Hum kya expect kar rahe the aur kya ho gaya!!! 8wails dramatically* 🤣 Don't worry, there will be more oppertunity in the future!! 😉

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL I know...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL I am still hopeful...ROFLROFLROFLROFL they may have to do the same once they reach Mumbai...them sharing the same room...thus maybe the same bed.....hopefully he wont through her down the bed in his quest for space...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The creatives need to do your darshan and take guidance from you...you're too good!!!!
Sach mein,it was short but perfect. It was well within boundaries too...lol🤣
You seriously need to do this more often..you write really well.
Descriptions are brilliant too. Great work hun...keep it up!!!!
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