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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oct 1st episode-
Khanak tells Dadi that if Shaan's happiness is in her leaving, she will leave.

She then seems to be getting ready to leave, without talking to Shantanu first. (May be she will see him in the next episode).

When Madhvi taunts her, she says 'Your son is unhappy. How can you be happy?'....

There seems to be no connection between these two lines.

CVs, this wk's episodes have left us very confused. The kidnapping plot came out of nowhere. We didn't see any kidnapper, nor how Khanak handled him. we didn't get to see Khanak give Shaan lunch in office, which could have been a nice scene...

Shaan says he will sleep in the sofa and Khanak can sleep on the bed. The next second, he asks her to switch off the lights while leaving!

Shaan and Khanak share many intense moments. And yet they keep talking about aankhon ka ishaara and all!

Too much screen time has been given to Khushboo and Madhvi. Their dialogues to Khanak are so repetitive, always saying 'you will lose. we will win'....

Sorry CVs... U have not disappointed us till now, but this marriage track has been very disappointing! Shaan and Khanak are just going in circles! The story needs to move... You should have built up this shaadi track in a huge way to shock us, or not dealt with it at all... right now, it just seems to have been planted from nowhere....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Creatives - Thank you so much for giving us such wonderful episodes this week....ShaNak, the dailogues and the story are truely back on track😃.....
And also the new classicial addition to RBO / ShaNak's background music, is simply magical👏.....In fact all the music in the show is wonderful....It would be great if t was released for sale, as many of us are sure to buy it.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ creatives- the show has fantastic songs and background score..one big thanks to the composers..yes we request you that you can bring out a audio collection with these fantastic scores...u have huge business here:-)thanks for rbo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Creatives - Thank you for showing some progression in ShaNak's love story and we love all their scenes and cute fights....The dailogues in the show are also very memorable at the moment....Aswell as the cute moments, ShaNak should also have a honest talk about what has happened, in the last few days.....
The focus and Akshay/Kusbhbu is interesting, because we can see how ShaNak's relationship affects the rest of the family....
But there are some things to note....We have seen ShaNak grow as people and learn from each other....So it is slightly confusing if Sunil is now asking Dharam sent Shaan to the office...And he himself saying Shaan never works, when only two days before to this, he sercured a big contract....Please address any inconsistances like this😊
Please give us a mixture of ShaNak romance, family scenes, progression in the story and resolution of previous tracks....For example, what is happening with the haveli and hasn't Shaan paid the Mangal the money already?....
We would like to thank the music arranger of the show and ofcourse Shankar, Ehsaan &Loy, for the fantastic music of this show....Especiaaly the new classicial version of ' Oh saware '
We love this show and thank you for always surprisng us😃....For example the ' Bell bajawo ' scens was just a stroke of genious👏.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@creatives- loving the current track...It was good to see the whole family having a nice time with a humour touch with it....

Now we want to have some emotional shanak scenes after khanak proposes...thats a request....Shanak are best in any situation they are in...love them a lot...

Waiting to see the celebration....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry CV's but this track ain't working.Could you'll please explain to me the kind of comedy you'll are dishing out???.It is actually quite pathetic to see grown-ups behave like this.You'll have 2 great actors and instead of exploiting their talent in the right way you'll are dishing out such slapstick nonsense.Is this the way to show 2 people in love who were literally on the verge of losing thieir marriage.Please dont make a mockery of this sacred bond.Khanak is behaving like a total ditz ever since Shan brought her back home.Poor and repititive dialogues.Shan is encouraging this attitude form her.I mean are you'lll showing 2 people in a live-in relationship or a youthful married couple who have started to fall deeply in love but instead behaving like comedians and the comedy is far from funny.Isn't this supposed to be an emotional drama??? I am not asking you'll for hottt scenes but please for the love of God can Shan and Khanak communicate like humans?? This I LUV U business is the longest i have seen dragged in any TV show ever.It is dragged to the extent of boredom that i dont even care now if she confesses or not.The thrill has long gone.The shaadi track was emotional and while I did not want to see the whole rona dhona, i will not accept ridiculous comedy.I mean are you'll interested in shifting this show to SAB TV that harbours such comedy shows???I am extremely disappointed.The heartwarming love story is vanishing fast and thick under this blanket of unecessary dragging and stupid comic filling episodes that are not eevn funny now.You'll do want ratings to improve right??? Get to it .Stick to what you'll had done b4.Instead of Shanak maturing in their journey theyare growing smaller and smaller day by day.It is too hard for me to digest this .This comedy or comic releif that you'll are trying to provide is not amusing.And BTW please tell me the date when Khanak decides to open her mouth.It will save me from watching all the episodes in between
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Edited by sharmida - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey cvs i luv this current track a lot!
i completely agree to the fact that one cannot always behave like grown ups and there is a child in every one that comes out at times.. so i luv this whole k family comedy.
bein this a show I am also aware of the fat that in luv story one cannot always show only the lovers and the family needs to be picturised as well!!
The comic moments are written well and they are interesting and innovative as well.
.I dont find this boring nd dragging as long as there is some freshness in the approach
..But t the same time please take care to see that khanaks confession does not take a long time and test our patience...as well as shaans that is it from me!!
well I appreciate u whole heartedly for writng a natural humour track without double meanining and vulgarity and the leads yashu/kt are doing very well along with others in this part as well!!
Please make the confession part of khanak a serious one and not antakshari on the basis of maine pyar kiya..etc., She is much much smarter than shaan and more maturte and so should be her confession..
Thanx !! so far u have done a gr8 job!please bear the said aspects too!!and dont postpone th cofesssion part of khanak too fartehr..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sharmida - Echo your words. Exactly my thoughts. It is this very reason, thateven though I have missed the episodes since september, I have not felt I have missed out much! the few episodes, that I watched had ridiculous comedy, that just made me dart for my remote!

Two good actors, made to enact , slapstick... pity!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Creatives please i want the Odhani Music Track back!! In which Shankar and (Tulsi?) sing! "Maariiiiiii Odhaniiiiiiiiii"
It's been agess since it's shown in the show! the last time i remember it was played when shaan put the green odhni on khanak's head after he had spilled the jadi booti paani on her head!
It used to be played all the time when Shaan went after Khanak and the adventure they shared! :D I hd totaaly fallen hard for RBO at that time! like seriously and i don't doubt that the music was the main reason! The music is heavenly and by not playing it, i feel the essence of the show is going adrift somewhere! Don't play it everyday just, you know maybe twice a week is fine! but such good music should not disappear from the show for long!
i was just listening to it the other day and i dunno why but my heart ached that it's not part of the show anymore :( PLEASE bring the song back!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
cvs im loving this track a lot bit no doubt it is dragging a little bit
im so enjoying shanak being cute like kids n fighting.........they can totally b like kids n fight cause however a grown up u r u tend 2 b a kid at times
i love all the comedy between akki sunil madhvi khusboo n shanak...... its gd 2 c a show where the family is all 2 gether having fun teasing n haassing eachother
its so much fun 2 c such light hearted family moments
i know u guys r gonna make the i love u intense cause the confession has 2 b something real serious cause ur expressing yr love
hope next week v get 2 c shanak inense romance n such wonderful shanak scenes where they openly say how much they love eachother
good wrk by u cvs the dialogues n direction is toooooooooooooooooo gd keep it up

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