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loved evry bit of it!!!

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thank you!! 🤗

hey, no worries!! I forgot about this thread as well. 😆

thank you!! 🤗 I'm really glad you liked them!! 😳

Anywayss..here's a little teaser of the OS that I'm working on right now. It's almost done..just a couple more things to add. I tried a different style of writing this time. You know how there's this little voice inside your head telling you what to do and what not to do? yea, well..that thing annoys me most of the time.😆 So keeping that in mind, i wrote this OS from Shaan's POV, sort of. The italicized phrases are all Shaan's conscience and the normal writing is all Shaan talking back to his conscience..or whatever else he's doing. The rest of the dialogues and stuff will be in quotations anyways, so there's no worry about that.

Just wanted to clear some things before you guys get confused. hahaa.

Stop staring fool, she can see you.

Why don't you shut up and just stay inside my head? I mean, you are my conscience, I don't think your allowed to insult your owner.

Whatever, you know your life would be nothing without my constant compliments. Just accept it Shaan, you're a loser cum lovesick puppy who has nothing better to do than stare at his wife while she plays 'kanche' or whatever the hell it's called.

Did you just call me a loser? That's it, get out!

Get out where man? I don't really have a choice here. If you want me to get out so badly, why don't you try to kick me out, it's not like I enjoy insulting you, oh wait'I actually do. Can you see me smirking here?

Freak.

You can have your 'I hate my conscience' session later, can you please go back to the game so you won't end up losing? I have a rep. to maintain here..Shantanu Khandelwal never loses.

Shutting out his annoying conscience, Shaan went back to concentrating on the game that him and Khanak were playing with the little kids. 'How did I get dragged into something like this?' he questioned himself with a great deal of self-sympathy.

I'll tell you how you got into this. You had to pay the factory a visit and when Khanak asked you if she could tag along, you couldn't refuse to her. You pathetic BKG.

Again with the insulting. I am you and you are me, whatever you call me goes for you too, y'know.

Shut up, you have to win! It's either this or KKG for the entire day.

Hey, you know that sounds like K3G, the movie with SRK and Kajol?

Shaan, in the words of Khanak, you are 'tupid!' Now buck up bud! You can play a teensy game of marbles can't you? Have I taught you nothing Shaan?

Okay, firstly, you're my conscience so you can't teach me anything, and secondly, this game is so not as easy as it seems, if you know it so well, why don't you come and play it?

Uhh..hello! I'm not a person, I'live in your thoughts. I swear, sometimes you act like such a BD.

What in the world is a BD? Stop listening to my mom so often, at this rate, I won't even understand my own conscience. That's pathetic.

BD= big dumbo dude. oh! gotcha, now stop talking to me.

so? style approved? 😳 or should I go back to my old style? any suggestions?

and I'll post the rest of the OS as soon as I finish it!!😆