FF - PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA - PART 7 pg 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ Thank you guys! 😊
Will PM!
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PART 1

RANO- Di! Come on we're going to be late!
NUPUR- We still have an hour until class starts!
RANO- But we still have to get to collage!
NUPUR- Collage is a 10 minute walk from here!
It was Rano and Nupur's first day of collage in Mumbai. They had just recently moved here because their father's workplace had transferred him.
RANO- Di! Are you ready yet?!
Nupur came out of her bedroom looking annoyed.
NUPUR- yes.
RANO- Let's go! [she grabbed her sister's arm and walked outside]

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Ranbir's Mom- RANBIR WAKE UP! [ranbir's mom called from downstairs]

RANBIR- nooo... 5 more minutes mom! [he turned over on his bed and groaned]
Ranbir's Mom- RANBIR!
RANBIR- I'M UP, I'M UP!
Ranbir's Mom- Good! Mayank will be here in a few minutes!
RANBIR- Okay mom!
Ranbir quickly took a shower, put on his clothes, brushed his hair and went downstairs.
MAYANK- Hey Ranbir
Mayank had just arrived and was standing by the door.
RANBIR- Hey man. Morning mom.
Ranbir's Mom- Morning beta. Mayank, come have breakfast. [she smiled]
MAYANK- No thank you aunty, I had breakfast before I came.
RANBIR- Nothing for me too. [he grabbed a apple from the table] I'll eat this.
Ranbir's Mom- But Ranbir! That's not enough for a growing boy like you!
RANBIR- Mooommm! It's okay. I have to go now. [he gave his mom a kiss on the cheek] Bye Mom! [he ran out the door and Mayank followed]
MAYANK- Bye aunty!
Ranbir's Mom- Bye! Drive safely!
MAYANK- Don't worry aunty. We will [he smiled and closed the door behind him]
Ranbir had already climed into his red convertable. Mayank opened the door and got in.
RANBIR- Collage, here we come! [he turned on some music]
Ranbir and Mayank drove to collage.

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GUY- Ranbir Man! Whats up?!
RANBIR- Hey Man! You know same old same old[he grinned as he and Mayank walked to thier first class]
MAYANK- So Ranbir did you do your Science Assignment?
RANBIR-.... uh ... what science assignment?
MAYANK- The one that was due today...
RANBIR- ......
MAYANK- I guess not. [he shook his head]
RANBIR- You know me, if you don't remind me these things I tend to forget.
Ranbir turned around and started walking backwards so he faced Mayank.

MAYANK- You know you should really pay more attention to your school work.
RANBIR- No thanks yaar. One Mayank is enough, thank you. [he grinned at Mayank]
Ranbir and Mayank reached their class. Ranbir turned to walk into class but bumped into a girl. The girl lost her balance and Ranbir caught her. They stood there looking at each other, the girl in Ranbir's arms.
NUPUR- Rano! Are you okay?!
Ranbir and Rano snapped out of it, ranbir steadied Rano and then let go of her. Rano secured a loose piece of hair behind her ear and looked at Ranbir.
RANO- Um.. thank you.. and sorry.
RANBIR- No, it's okay. [he gazed at her]
NUPUR- Come on Rano, we don't want to be late. [She grabbed Rano's arm and they started walked into class]
Rano glaced back at Ranbir before going into class.
MAYANK- I wonder who they are, I haven't seen them around here.
RANBIR- Me too.
MAYANK- Come on let's go.
They walked into class.
Edited by Payal25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Yay! You updated!
Loved the update. I loved how RR met. I wonder what happens next. Can't wait to read the next update.
Btw thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
ohh i love the story already!
and i love how mayank's still trying to do projects in thus story as well!
hahaa
Payal25 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Ravjot- Thank you! and Npz 😃

@ Bibbo di- Thank you! and HAHA I know! 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ lol it's okay! i love nerdy boys!

it's refreshing to have a stimulating conversation with men outside of sports!
Mayanks' doing all the right things!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Lovely update Payal. I love the way Ranbir bumps into Rano.And also the first part where his mom is waking him up and MAyank comes to meet him.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Nice Update.... Simple n sweet..... Thanx a lot for the PM...... will b waiting for the next part.... Plzz continue soon....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
niceeeeeee
👏👏
nicely written cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
omg i love it so far! continue soon! cant wait!

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