FF - PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA - PART 7 pg 10

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Payal Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

^^ Thank you Radhika! I will! 😃
PS. CHILDREN STILL RUNNING AFTER ME!! AAAHHH!

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Payal Patel

@Payal25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

PART 3

Ranbir and Rano walked in Silence for what seemed liked hours until Ranbir broke the silience.
RANBIR- So.... Where did you move here from?
RANO- Small village in Punjab. [she smiled]
RANBIR- Really?
RANO- Yeah [she smiled]
RANBIR- I moved here from a small Village in Punjab too you know?
RANO- Yeah?
RANBIR- Yup, When I was 10 years old.
RANO- Was it hard for you?
RANBIR- Afcourse. But it's probably harder for you. [he smiled] I mean I moved at a small age and made friends easily because of it. But you had to move into the city into a new collage.
RANO- Yeah. I miss everyone in my village.. a lot. But I'll probably get use to the city though.. when I catch up with collage and make new friends...
RANBIR- True. AND you already made a new friend today!
RANO- Really? Who?
Ranbir Shook his head.
RANBIR- Me afcourse! [he grinned]
Rano laughed.
RANBIR- Let's make it official though. [he stopped] Hi I'm Ranbir, Would you like to be my friend? [he grinned and outstreached his hand]
Rano looked at Ranbir and then his hand.
Ranbir Waited.
RANO- I would like that. [she shook his hand]
RANBIR- Well that's official then.
Rano smiled.
She looked around and noticed that people were staring at them with thier mouths open.
RANO- Um.. Ranbir?
RANBIR- yeah? [he grinned]
RANO- Why are people staring at us?
RANBIR- Oh. You'll get use to it. Anyone seen with me usually get stared at. You see Im pretty popular in this collage. [he looked pleased with himself]
RANO- I see..
RANBIR- Come On Here's class.
They walked into class together

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NUPUR- So whats your favorite movie?! I love K3G!! Shahrukh!! Haii!! OHH! You know who else is cute?!?! Shahid!! He dances so well!! And I LOVE LOVE LOVEEE Hrithik!!
MAYANK- That's nice. [he was getting tired of listening to Nupur] ERM... Do you read any books?
NUPUR- No, books are boring.
I cant believe she just said that. Mayank thought
NUPUR- What's the lastest bollywood movie you've seen?!
MAYANK- Kal Ho Na Ho
NUPUR- Are you serious?! How long was that ago!?
MAYANK- 2 or 3 weeks ago, I re-watched it.
NUPUR- 3 weeks?! By God! I need to watch at least 3 movies a week, or I would diieee!!
MAYANK- Nice to know.
NUPUR- I know eh?!
A guy playing basketball with his friends in the hall bumbed into Nupur.
She fell and Mayank grabbed her.
They looked in each others eyes until the guy apologized [it didnt sound like he meant it] and joined his friends again.
Mayank placed Nupur back on her legs.
MAYANK- Are you okay?
NUPUR- Yeah, thanks.
She became quiet.
MAYANK- Here's class.[he smiled]
Nupur Smiled back and together they walked into class.

Edited by Payal25 - 16 years ago

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Firza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

omg continue soon! its soo fun to read!

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

aww, so sweet! luved it, continue soon!

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scribbles

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

PAYAL!

this is amazing.. i can actually imagine these characters saying these lines.! hahaha<3.

and you know whats funnier? i like the mayank and nupur parts! lmao@ i dont like books! that probably killed mayank RIGHT there.! i would lie to mayank and tell himi finish 4 books a day just to see him smileee!

i cant wait for the ressstttt

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Payal25
^^ Thank you Radhika! I will! 😃
PS. CHILDREN STILL RUNNING AFTER ME!! AAAHHH!

lol! well glad you are a suvivor. you should be proud. not many people can!

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Devashree

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Payal what i love about your ff is its simplicity.I can actually see the scenes happening in front of my eyes.

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Ravjot

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Awesome update Payal!

Aww poor Rano feels uncomfortable having everyone stare at her. And Nupur is hilarious😆 She reminds me of myself a bit with the obsession with movies. Except I like books. I wonder what will happen in class....I bet more people will stare at Rano. Can't wait to read your next update