MY LAST POEM IN RAMAYAN FORUM

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Posted: 16 years ago
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VIDHNA TERI LEKH KISIKO SAMAJH NA AATI HAIN

JAN JAN KE PRIYA ,RAM,LAKHAN,SIYA DUR KYUN JATI HAIN.

VIDHNA TERI LEKH KISIKO SAMAJH NA AATI HAIN

SABKE PYARE,NAYAN KE TARE DUR KYUN JATI HAIN.

PRATHAM DARSHAN PE HE MAN NE DIYA TUMHE JO STHAN

RIKTA KARE US STHAN KO KYUN JA RAHE HO HE PRAN.

VIDHNA KAISE NITHUR AISE BAN CHALATI HAIN

JAN JAN KE PRIYA RAM LAKHAN SIYA DUR KYUN JATI HAIN.

GURMEET AAP HI RAM HAMARE,MAN MAAN JAATI HAIN

AAP BIN NA DUJE KISIKO STHAN MAN YE DILATE HAIN.

DEBINA DI ME SPASHTA SIYA CHABI DEKH JO PATI HAIN

GURMI NARAYAN,LAKSHMI DEBINA SAB KEHALATI HAIN.

PHIR KYUN VIDHNA NITHUR AISE BAN CHALATI HAIN

CHINNA BHINNA KAR MANKO MANADHISH CHORKE JAATI HAIN.

VIDHNAA TERE LEKH KISIKO SAMAJH NA AATI HAIN

JAN JAN KE PRIYA RAM LAKHAN SIYA CHOR KYUN JAATI HAIN.

KAISE KATE DIN,RAMAYAN BIN ,MAN SOCH NA PATI HAIN

DEHA BAS KHARE STABDHA BIN PRAN HO JAATI HAIN.

PHIR KAB AYONGE HE KRIPABANDAN,DHEERAJ NA DHAR PATI HAIN

BAS PRATIKSHA ME DIN BITAYE PAR AASHRU BARSATI HAIN.

BHUL HUMSE KOI HO TO JAGAPATI KSHAMA KARO BHAGWAN

TUM BIN SUNYA,APURNA HE JANO HUM SABKA JIBAN.

KAL NE KAISE NITHUR NIRDAY HO GATI BARATI HAIN

ABHI TO AYETHE,PHIR KYUN DUR ABHI HUMSE KARATI HAIN.

VIDHNAA TERI LEKH KISIKO SAMAJH NA AATI HAIN

SABKE PRANPRIYA KO KYUN DUR TU LE JAATI HAIN.

PHIR AANA HE GURMI RAM,BHUL NA JANA HUME

SAFALTA KHYATI YASH JIBAN ME SADA MILE TUMHE.

TUM AUR DEBIDI HAAR SUKH PAYO, MAN KEHE JAATI HAIN

KARE VIDHNAA NAYAN SE DUR PAR MAAN SE NA KAR PAATI HAIN.

HUM BHAKTA HE TUMHARE SWAMI SOCH YE JATE HAIN

AISA NATA HRIDAY SE BANAYA KABHI NA TOR PATE HAIN.

TUM BIN JIBAN ASAHANIYA HAIN SAB KEHELATI HAIN

VIDHNA BARE NITHUR TU HAIN KYUN DUR LE JAATI HAIN



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chen2chic thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Cool verses again, Sabydeep! Wow, you are a poet.... 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: chen2chic

Cool verses again, Sabydeep! Wow, you are a poet.... 👏

THANKS CHEN2CHIC
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Posted: 16 years ago
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saby bhaiyya its very nice....rly gr8888888 job....
bt why r u saying dat its ur last poem????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great poem Saby! Thanks. Saby, u should write a poem tomorrow as tomorrow is the last day.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khalrika

Great poem Saby! Thanks. Saby, u should write a poem tomorrow as tomorrow is the last day.


thanx di, par kal khali ansu ke siwa aur khuch nehi niklega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

saby bhaiyya its very nice....rly gr8888888 job....
bt why r u saying dat its ur last poem????

thanks swati,but yes its my last poem in RF.bcz RAMAYAN khatam hone ke bad ansu ke siwa aur kuch nehi niklenga.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabydeep

thanx di, par kal khali ansu ke siwa aur khuch nehi niklega.



U r so right Saby! 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saby, lovely poem, even if I don't understand all the words. It comes from your heart, so it's just beautiful!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Saby, lovely poem, even if I don't understand all the words. It comes from your heart, so it's just beautiful!

thanx di,its just a reflection of our pain on the ending of RAMAYAN.

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