FF-Hum-Tum Part 9 updated pg 9 - Page 6

Haila,what an update,Sujata!!

sujji u girls have great writing skills.i would love to see the FFs of RKAB on screen.i know its not posible but u really write well . u have the potential yo be a romantic fiction writer. loved the spirited Raane and embarassed yudi kep it up.❤️

Thankyou Purva & lata di for liking it....

Oh wow...
Yudi is so caring!!! 😳
Sorry I missed the last part somehow and just now caught that too.. 😳
Nice use of language, and perfect writing style... 😊
Good luck!

so sorry for the late comment but i have been busy i have catched up and the uphates were great plzzzz continue

Thankyou Nafee,Sadia & Pinky for liking my FF...

Hey Suj,

Great FF! Loved this bold Rani. The "Raane" effect is superb and love the camaraderie that Nisha share with Yudi. The trio seriously rocks!

Btw, loved Yudi's 'sweetheart'. Lolz....

Aw, but my dear Rudr is an evil guy? *sniff*

So wen's the next update comi up, eh?

Good luck wid your exams.

I'm really sorry for the late update.... wrote a small part... i finally got more ideas to put in the later parts of the FF.... for the timebeing i have written this update as this is what will take YuRa relationship to the next scenario.... hope you all like it.... 😃

Part 8

While on the bike…. Yudi thought about Rani…. The way fate had been cruel to her….. all this while he had thought destiny had been cruel to him…. But now he felt he was somewhere thankful to god that he had been blessed with a father like RS… a sister like Niharika and a friend like Saksham who refuse to leave him alone….. they always make him feel better when he is let down… they were always available to boost his morale…. He had missed them a lot when he was in US…. But now was truly glad that he was back with them…. He was even thankful to God… for creating the apt timing for making him meet Rani…. He never thought that one meeting at the beach would change his life so much…. The more he got to know about her…. The more his love for her increased…. And now after knowing her tragic past…. He felt himself more sympathizing towards Rani…. He wanted to take her away from all these miseries…. He wanted to assure her that he would be with her through the thick- thin…. He wanted to tell her the depth of love he had in his heart for her…. But was scared thinking if she rejected him…. Then he would lose the new friendship which was developing between the two…. He realised she took time to open up…. And now she had actually started to open up to an extent that she confessed about her past to him….which was something not even her friend Kali knew about….. he came out of his thoughts as he saw that the restaurant they often went pass by…. He wondered where she was planning to take him… but it actually didn't matter as what mattered to him was he was with his Rani……

Soon he realised that Rani had brought his bike to a stop…. He turned around as he tried picturing himself in that remote background…. He wondered where Rani had brought him…. as he pondered over the place… when he realised his bike had come to a halt…. He realised she had brought him to the outskirts of the city… after which the village area started…. he remembered going to the place with Saksham when they had gone to the mela without telling his father…. after which he had never got a chance to go there as soon after that he left for US…. Nothing had changed much as he thought to himself only that the place looked little developed… still lost in his thoughts when Rani turned back…. But before he could ask her something…. Rani asked him to get off and follow him… Yudi obediently like a school going boy got off to bike…. He noticed that Rani was struggling to remove that helmet…. She stared at him as if asking him to help her… It had got stuck tightly against her head…. Yudi caught the helmet and gently removed it off her face…. which resulted in her tresses getting loose…. She immediately tied her hair back and thanked him…. Yudi longed to tell her that he loved it more when she let her hair open…. But was scared thinking how she would react to his remark….

Rani shared her memories of going to the dhaba with her friend Kali…. Yudi was stunned to see the place Rani had taken him to… it was not a restaurant… but a dhaba… where everyone seemed to have their food comfortably sitting on the floor and also with their hands…. Yudi had never eaten by sitting on the floor…. Here no one bothered to see the table manners of others… everyone here happily relished eating their meals without worrying what others might think of the way they were eating…. Yudi sat on the floor… but was sensing uneasy…. He didn't want for a minute his Raane to think that he was uncomfortable eating here…. As agreed Rani ordered for the dishes and they waited till they got it… Yudi was stunned to note that Rani had ordered for parathas and masala dosas for both of them….

Yudi had never had a dosa in his life… he looked at her wondering what it was… he had finished one morsel of it… he realised he liked it… and gulped it all in 2 minutes…. Rani was watching all this… she was happy to note that Yudi had finished eating it… and was surprised to note that Yudi was eyeing her plate…. She smiled at his behaviour and asked whether she can order one more…. Yudi happily agreed… and soon he had gulped even that…. Even for a minute Yudi didn't think that there was someone he had to impress…. he was feeling more comfortable with Rani… he loved being with her…. He really wished that Rani understood his feelings for her…. Soon everything was over… and Yudi washed his hands when Rani handed him the napkin…. Yudi smiled at her and thanked her for bringing him here and making him experience this… Rani asked him not to… and she said she was more thankful to him for understanding her pain this morning… Yudi smiled and said today we both did something so the other is grateful to another…. Then looked at the time and realised it was late and that Saksham would be waiting for him… he immediately said he was in a hurry… and they again zoomed towards the bike… but this time Yudi sat on the front with Rani behind… he dropped her at her hostel… and rushed towards home….

Saksham was waiting for Yudi… and he was walking front and back in the hall and wondering where did Yudi disappear to… he glared angrily at Yudi when he saw him entering…..

Oho look who has updated her FF ?😲

Thank u Sujji for writing this lovely part ....i thought if u had been quit writing .....i was thinking if their's journey had ended on that bike ride but glad to read that they have reached at dhaba. Loved to know that Yudi was enjoying having meal with her and that too on the first time in dhaba type place .Good going keep it up and plz yaar dont take too much time to update as i forgot somethings like Kali was a friend of Rani..hehehhe *embarrased*

Btw , Lagta hai Yudi ki shamat anay wali hai ....Saksham's angry staring says all 😆