FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

awwwww that was lovely update.amma is so naive.
n bhanu is totally contrastive to the current track like she was in past.
BUT roshu yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar yudi ka ana delayed kyuun karwadiyaaa😭

Thanks a lot Faiza!!!!
Yudi toh kabhi nahi chahega ki uska welcome itna royal ho...That'll be out be out of his character na!!! Yoh lo Yudi aaygaya....Am updating the next part now!!
And Faiza Thanks a lot for your wishes!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

lovely update di cant wait for next one

Thank you Sadia...you dont have to wait long...Am updating another part now!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh mera Yudi nahi aaya? Where is he? Jaldi se layo usse.....😆 Do continue...

Yudi Hazir...Appki farmaayish! Updating another one now...Shayad Yudi ka entry ho jaaye! Lets see!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ramas

👏first of all my heartiest congrats Rosh. You are very very smart. bravo 😛👏 Rosh you are a ⭐️

Wish you all the best.
Now the plot thicknes magar hamara yudi kahan hai bhai.
Kab mila rahi ho dono ko? Is it going to be love at first sight?😉

Thank you so much Di!!!🤗
Yudi ka entry ho jaayega!!! Shayaad abhi aur issi waqt! Am updating another part now!
Double bonanza for my happiness!! Am even more happy baecuse I was presented with gold medal and was presented a cash price of Rs 1000 per each subject!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Here's another part...Hope you enjoy it!
PART 5

Rani notices everyone in the palace and is already accustomed to its rules and regulations. Rani gets to know about each and every one in the royal family.

Niharika , the eldest daughter of RS and BR was full of zeal and life. She loved doing all the pranks but was scared of her father. He hated all types of formalities that they had to follow. She wanted to be simple whereas Bhavyata, the youngest of all was totally contrast to her sister. She loved name, fame and wealth. She was dominating and autocrat. She was envious of Niharika the most because she was comparatively beautiful and people usually referred to her as the "lakshmi" of house. Bhavyata always fought with Niharika for whatever she got and had a replica of the same in her room whether she liked it or not. Niharika was caring and protective towards her sister and shared everything joyfully.

Similarly Rudr was completely opposite to Yudi. His life was filled with discotheques, night clubs, parties and girls. He rarely stayed at home!

Saksham was Yudi's best friend and Yudi always shared his thoughts with him freely and considered him as a family member. Saksham was a practical guy and always advised Yudi the best.

Soon its morning, Rani as usual gets to her chores and starts taking care of BR. She hears commotion outside the room and wanted to tell them to speak slowly as BR was resting. She goes out and asks them to do the same. Meanwhile Gauri, Rani's best friend was also present there. Rani asks Gauri what the matter is..

Gauri: Arrey Rani tumhe nahi pata?

Rani: Kya nahi pata? Teek se samjhana.

Gauri: Rani...woh kal raat hi kuwerji mehal wapas laut aaye! Jab RS ne poocha toh unhone bataaya ki unhe iss tarah ki swagat nahi chahiye tha! RS bahut khush ho gaye. Toh hum sab ne Faisla kiya ki hum sab kuwerji ko chup chup ke dekhenge!

Rani: Gauri..Tum paagal ho gayi ho? Woh tak gaye honge...unhe aise tang mat karo. Tum sab log jaao aur apna kaam karo!

All of them leave dejectedly as there was a point in what Rani was telling. If the royal members ever found out what they were about to do, they would be punished severely!

Rani was in deep thoughts...How could a Prince be so simple? He had actually denied his reception where everyone in the world craved for fame and money! He was certainly one in millions and she thought about the lucky princess who would be married to him! Though in the short time span she had stayed in the palace, she had heard his virtues and could also see RS's trust towards him! This yearned Rani to see the prince at least once!

That day morning Rani was taking Juice to BR and notices that Prince's room was open. She tries to take the juice to him and peeps in but she does not find him there and therefore leaves the place by closing the door. She walks and walks and suddenly stops! She couldn't believe her eyes; she had just spotted the Prince! She goes toward the room which happened to be the gym! But she was unable to see his face and could only see his back with his arms stretched and biceps curl!

She forgets her duty, she forgets who she is what she had to in short she was completely oblivious to the surrounding. She is just standing there and admiring him! She sees him lying on an upright support bench where he was un-racking the weight and lowering on the chest pressing it back until his arms were locked. Now she was able to see his broad chest and triceps working too but not his face! He was using his thumbs very casually while doing it so that the bar he was holding doesn't slip out. He was gradually adding weight and performing with and ease! She could see his forearms and chest perpendicular to the floor and keeping the bar above the elbows during the whole lift.

When it was all done, he stood up, She could see small droplets of sweat forming on his flexible muscles and a sudden urge to go wipe it came to her. She shook her head to make all the silly thoughts to go off. Meanwhile Yudi feels someone constantly gazing at him and turns towards the door!

PS: Please ignore the typos!😳
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Rosh you too adopting Darshana style cliff hangers? Give it up.....we don't like these cliffhangers. Other than the cliff hanger I enjoyed their first so called meeting. I hope Rani looked good enough for their first meeting now that the prince will meet her......😉😉 No pressure though...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
hey
awesum super
loved it great ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
yeh kya kardiya tum ne mein jaa rahi hoon daze mein koi do not disturb ka sign laga do mein agle part tak nahi ari
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
rosh Now can I expect them to meet . Arre bhai is doscription se any one will fall for prince charming, great episode.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
FIRST of all all heartiest congratulations 4 our brilliant star👏
this is 4 gold medal hun🤗
n abt taht cash prize😈😆.love u dear.
aur kyaaaaaaaa zabardast excercise karwayi yudi ko.wah.........wah.......
lekin what abt rani's expression after watching his face😭.
chalo wait kar hi laitay hain😒

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