FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh... Tuze bhi creatives ka bukhar lag gaya kya?????

Pehle Rani ko din bhar akele rakhaa, baad mein bomd aur ab fire???
Tum kyun usake picche haath dokhe padi huyi ho???
Areeee she is pregnant.... Let Yudi take care of her than all this drama....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,itna bada cliffie? Kyun? Kyun? Kyun?

I loved YuRa moments though! Poor Rani-who will save her from CR's wrath??

I hope CR gets a dose of her own medicine!

I loved the way Nikki-saksh taught Bhavy a lesson! Serves her right-snob kahin ki! 👏 👏 👏

🤗
Edited by andromeda_kia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
darsh didi lagta hai kay roshni didi yudi ko apnay liye chaati hain isliye yeh sab karahin hain hena roshni didi
loved the update how can you stop there plzzzzzzzz cont FAST
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh ,

Tunay to waqai dhamaka kar dia yaar . 😲 😆

But i loved my Rani's talent yaar . Wow YuRA are working together in school project !!! loved it !!! RS is so good . But CR ? How cunning she is !!! us ki khilli flying kar day yaar . Meri Rani is expecting to itnay shock achay nahin hain !!!

Awww....loved it when she forgot all fears n tears in his arms .

Nikki -saksham scenes were so cute !!! I love bhavy's khilli flying .😈 Kamchor kahin ki .... 🤣

Lekin tunay Rani ko fire main phansa dia .... OMG !!! Update soon !!! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Rosh,

Bhavyata ki kya band bajayi hai....😆 Naukrani!🤣

WOW, CR ka popat aur RS impressed!👏👏

but,

Ye sab kya hai???????

Smoke, fire??😲

ye kaise cliffies hai!😕

jallllllldiiiiiiiiii!

update karo!!😭

Edited by tes_v1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bobbie,🤗
Sankat nahi baba...Tu fikar mat kar unhe kuch nahi hoga!
Haan! Yudi's dimaag ki baati jal gayi!😆
Thanks dear for your wonderful comments!😳
Waise kisne kaha ki YuRa moments?😕
Darsh,🤗
Kya karen sangat ka asar!
Fikar not Yudi is always with her!
Haila! Haath dhoke...😆😆 Nahi Nahi..Khud hi samaj jaaogi ki meine aise kyun kiya!
Waise...Remember your FF? Meri toh Jaan nikal gayi when you killed YuRa!😭😭 And RaPa separation! I was heart broken...Jaldi update karo! Mujhse raha nahi jaa raha hai!😳😳
Purva,🤗
Nahi toh! Tu hi dekh..Cliffie toh chota tha!
Yudi hai..Always to save her!
Thank you so much ki tujhe Bhavyata ki waat tujhe achcha laga!
Sadia,🤗
Yudi toh humesha mera hai! So no worries! I'll update ASAP!
Faiza,🤗
Dhamaka?😲😲 Yeh tu bol rahi hai? Apna FF dekho zara!
Achcha Aur shock nahi doongi!😳
Yaar, humari toh humesha hoti hai..So for a change Bhavyata's Khilliflying! Kaisa laga? If you liked thank you so much!
Tia,🤗
Band baja di! Aapki farmayish!😳
CR ka popat..Not fully done..Lekin jab hogi toh......You'll know!
Haan Jaldi se update karti hoon!
I'll try my level best to update either tomorrow or day after!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for the wonderful update Tumne bhi aag laga li cahlo thik hai. I hope Rani is ok. and be saved in time.CR will never cahnge.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Raksha di,
Thank you soooooo much! Aapne bhi?😲😲 Oh no! Looks like I haven't read those parts! I'll read them immediately!😃
OK girls..Next part up in few minutes!😳
PS: Tia, where's yours?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Rosh,

my part is coming up tooo......

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 34

Yudi had covered only a little distance and hits himself before for not thinking of this Idea! He calls to the palace and asks Saksham to bring the file! He thinks going that far and coming back would be too late and he could not afford to leave Rani alone for that long. Especially after two incidents…the goons attack…and the bomb blast..He could not helping thinking that somebody was trying to separate him and Rani and that thought made him drive fast to get back to her!

Rani is running around the room to get out!😭 She sees that there is no escape except for the window and struggles to get near it catching her breath!😲 The smoke was getting into her lungs and she was suffocating more. She tries to maintain her calm and get out somehow!

Yudi driving fast reaches the site in few minutes and is astonished to the place in fire!😲 He runs inside shouting out her name!😭 He panics seeing the office room in flames😭…His voice starts quivering in the panic.😭 There was no sign of her. He decides to break the door and get in when he hears the noise behind the brick! Frightened, as what he was going to see...he swiftly walks over there and is shocked to see Rani gasping for her breath!😭 He lifts her up and shakes her to open her eyes.

Yudi: Rani, aankhen kholiye!

Rani half opens her eyes but she is too tired and closes it…Yudi is relieved to see that she is alright but still her state urges him to rush to hospital….Just in time Saksham arrives and to Yudi's surprise RS too is with him.😃

Yudi is still supporting Rani who is semiconscious. Yudi asks Saksham to take care of the site while he goes with RS to the hospital! On the way Yudi encounters what he had seen when he came to the site!

They admit Rani in the hospital and wait outside when doctor is examining her.

Yudi: Dekhliya aapne? YEh Rani par doosra hamla ho raha hai! Do din mei do hadsa! Yeh koi sanyog (coincidence) nahi hai! Isske piche zaroor kissi ka saazish hai!

RS:Haan, Bete..hume bhi yahi lagta hai. Ab toh kuch karna hi padega!

Yudi: Pitaji, Detectives ke paas jaane ka waqt aagaya hai.

RS: Nahi!

Yudi looks at him confused: Par-

RS: Hum nahi chahte hai ki iske bare mei kissi aur ko pata chalen kyunki jo bhi yeh saazish rach raha hai unhe Rajparivaar ke bare me poori jaankari hogi. Toh agar Hum detectives ke paas jaayenge toh unhe yeh bhi pata chal jaayega ki humare detectives kaun hai aur unki jaan bhi khatre mei ho sakta hai!😔 Isslileye behtar hai ki hum khud iss kaam ko karenge aur aapko humara saath dena hoga!😃

Yudi: Jee Pitaji, hum humesha aapke saath hai.

Meanwhile the doctor comes and informs them that Rani has no problems and it just because of the smoke congestion she fainted and she is perfectly alright.😃

Yudi rushes inside the ward while RS follows him.

RS: Ab aap kaisi hai?

Rani: Hum teek hai pitaji.

RS: Achca aap dono baatein kijiye hume kuch kaam yaad aagaya!

Saying this RS leaves..Yudi who had been staring at her all while with concern in his eyes, is not able to bear to pain she is going through!😭

Yudi (sitting beside her on the bed): Ab aap kaisi hai? Aap teek toh hai naa?

Rani sits up slowly while Yudi helps her: Hum bilkul teek hai, Aap chinta mat kijiye.😊

Yudi: Kaise na Karen! Jis halat mei humne aapko dekha, humare saanse ruk gai thi.

Rani : Aap –

Yudi takes her hand in his hand and kisses it and says😳: Ab hum aapko ek pal ke liye bhi akele nahi chodenge.😳

Rani: Aap bewajeh pareshaan ho rahe hai.

She said it in spite of having fears herself but did not want Yudi to know it!

Yudi: Achcha Batiye ki aakhir hua kya?

Rani narrates her version of the scene, how she sees the fire all of a sudden and how she escaped from the window.

Yudi silently hears it and tells: Ab aap chinta mat kijiye aaram se so jayiye hum baad mei aate hai.😊

RS is on phone enquiring Saksham as what had happened...Saksham tells him. Yudi and RS sit together to put the pieces to solve the puzzle.👍🏼

Rs leaves to the palace while Yudi stays back to look after her.

Rani: Kunverji, Kya hum aapse kuch pooch sakte hai?

Yudi: Nahi!😲 Pehle aap hume batayiye!

Rani(shocked): Kya?😲

Yudi: Yeh kab se hume Kunverji karke pukarne lage?😳 Aapka woh pyaar bhara naam kahaan gaya?😳

Rani: Woh – hum - Woh !!!😳😳 Hum aapko uss naam se kaise pukaar sakte hai?😳 Woh bhi sabke saamne?😳

Yudi: Hume toh laga ki hum sirf ek hai!😆 Kyun aapko yahaan humare alawa koi aur bhi dikh raha hai kya?😆😛

Rani blushes and looks down.😳

Yudi smiles and tells her: Aap yunhi muskurate rahiye,😃 humare sare mushkilein bhaag jaayegi!😃

Aur haan Kya kehna cha rahi thi?

Rani: Jab se hum mehal aaye hai tab se aapko humari wajeh se pareshaaniyan aa rah –

Yudi: Yeh kya bol rahe hai aap!😲 Yeh zaroor kissi ki chaal hai par aap uske bare mei fikar mat kijiye.😃 Aap bas aapka aur humari beti ka khayal rakhiye!😃😳

Rani faking anger😆: Aapko kitne baar samjhana padta hai, lekin aap samajthe hi nahi! Har roz yahi baat! Aapki beti nahi balki humra beta.😳

Yudi : Oh! Ho! Rani iska jawaab hum baad mei denge.😉 Ab aap poori tarah teek ho jaayiye aur phir humare saath jagada kijiye!😉

Rani: Itne jaldi haar maan gaye?😆

Yudi: Haar nahi mane balki hum apne aptni ka khayal rak rahe hai!😳

Rani giggles, which instigates Yudi to laugh too but he is controlling himself.

Yudi: Rani, so jayiye!

Rani laughs more heartily after hearing his cute demand.😳 She couldn't stop admiring his lopsided smile which he was trying to hide from her.😳😳😍

Yudi: Aap aisa nahi maanegi – arrey dekhiye to sahi kaun aaya hai!😲

Rani turns to see the empty door and suddenly feels Yudi's hot breath on her cheek.☺️ He kisses her,☺️ he has no intention of moving from there and his lips linger more than usual!😳☺️

Rani: Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai? Hospital hai!😳

Yudi smirks and whispers in her ears: Kyun pehle nahi pata tha kya?😆 Ab so jayiye, warna raat bar yahi karenge!☺️

Rani slowly drifts off to sleep without taking her eyes of him with a smile and cheeks turning crimson.☺️

He wondered if she would ever stop shying in front of him!😆 He laughed and thought that they would have become grandparents by the time Rani stopped shying!😆😆

Palace:

CR happily thinks that her plan worked out until she gets a call;

Man: CR sahiba Hum kuch nahi kar sake, Kunver Yudishtir wahaan aayegaye aur kuch hi der mei RS aur Saksham bhi pahunch gaye the.

CR: Kya?😲 RS?😲 She angrily disconnects the call and wonders how RS would have reached there as she herself saw to that he was present in the office!

Little did she know that RS was already in palace and decided to accompany Saksham!

She knew that it was not safe to plot anymore with RS watching them. She knew that RS would connect the incidents and somehow reach her. She decides to give it a rest for few days. If not today….soon….Soon she would win her game and accomplish her motive. She was confident about it as she usually won her games!🤢

Next day, YuRa return to the palace. He asks Rani to get ready to go to work site!

Yudi takes RS's permission and leaves!

Yudi dirves the car and Rani is surprised😲 to notice that he takes a different route this time!😲

Rani: Hum kahaan jaa rahe hai?😕

Yudi: Office aur kahaan?😕

Rani: Lekin aapne yeh raasta nahi liya tha kal!😲😕

Yudi: Yah naya rasta hai –😛

Rani: Nahi, hum aap hume kahi aur le jaa rahe hai,😕 kyunki aapne hume kal khud bataya tha ki ek hi rasta hai!😕

Yudi: Haan!😉 Hum aapko kahi door le jaa rahe hai!😉

Rani: Kahaan?😲 Bataiye naa!

Yudi: Hum aapko kidnap kar rahe hai!😆 Ab chup chap humare saath aayiye!😆😆

Rani laughs: Kidnap!😲😆 Achcha kar lijiye!😆

Yudi gets down at a place and parks the car; both of them walk for few seconds. Yudi opens a huge gate, the sight in front of Rani makes her stop there! She stunned to such a beautiful place!😍

He had taken her to wood house which was the Shishodiya vansh's relaxing place. The wood house was fully surrounded by water.😍 It was an exotic view.😍 There were no servants in the house. Everytime the servants accompanied them but this time Yudi insisted on going alone.😉 One he did not want to leave Rani alone at all.😳 Two, he can spend some time without telling her that this was done as a safety measure to protect from whoever is plotting against them and trying to harm them.

Rani: Yeh jagah bahut khubsoorat hai!😍

Yudi: Jaante hai!😳 Issliye hum apna honeymoon yahaan manae aaye hai!😲😳😳

Rani (shocked)😳: Honeymoon?☺️

Yudi: Haan, hum pehle honeymoon toh nahi gaye naa issliye ab yahaan aaye hai!😳

Rani is overjoyed and she simply loves the place.😳 Seeing her extremely happy, Yudi happiness also has no limits.😳😳

Yudi: Ab jaldi batayiye ki aap kya khana chahte hai?😲😲 Hum aapke manpasand khana banate hai!😲😳

Rani (chuckles)😆: Aap banayenge?😲 Toh iss baar bhi zaroor jal jaayenge!😲😆 Aap fikar mat kijiye, him bana denge.😃

Yudi: NAHI! Hum hi banayenge!😳 Humne khana pakana seekh liya! Iss baar nahi jalne denge!😳😃

Rani: Banayiye! Hum bhi dekh lete hi lete hai ki aap kaise banate hai!⭐️

Yudi starts preparing parathas as per Rani's request. It almost an hour since Yudi had been in kitchen and Ran had been waiting outside as he called her the sole purpose of his distraction and made her sit outside.☺️

Rani goes inside to check unable to wait for longer time😳… She sees the vessels scattered and he was peacefully asleep on the slab with as usual the parathas burnt!😍😳 She wondered ho he could sleep in such a smell and smiles thinking that they got used to it in the hut!😳😳😆

Rani lovingly ruffles his hair☺️ and kisses his cheeks despite of blushing!☺️ He wakes with a jerk!

Yudi: Kya hua?😲

Rani: paratha jal gaya aur kuch nahi!😆

Yudi apologetically looks at her.😆 She smiles and both of them end up eating sandwiches!😃

He calls the palace and asks Bhanumati to come over to cook dishes for them!👏

After some time Rani says: Kyun kiya aapne yeh kaam?😉 Humne kaha tha naa aapse koi kaam nahi hoga!😲😆

Yudi: Koi kaam nahi hoga?😲 Abhi dikhate hai!😲😆😳 He lifts her up in the arms and takes her to the room.😳☺️

Rani: Kya kar rahe hai aap?☺️ Chodiye hume!☺️

Yudi: Shhh!😳 Aaj pura din soyenge! Hume chedne ki yahi saza milti hai aapko!😛

Rani starts to protest but he does not allow her!😳

It's almost evening when she wakes up. Bhanumati had arrived and she gives her some snacks.

RS had come over and they were discussing about the fire accident! Rani sits with them and listens attentively to the talk.

RS: Woh admi jo kal aaya tha; jab bahurani kaam kar rahi thi, hume aaj uska laash mila!😲😲

Yudi: Lash?😲 Iska matlab hai ki job hi yeh kar raha woh koi saboot nahi chahta hai.😲

He had a feeling that it was getting too dangerous!

PS: Sorry if I bored you with the extra long part!😳

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