FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Rosh!
Ur ff's goin cool... Ur not bad on romance n ur idea of romance is no way pathetic!! I jus finished reading it n had a good time....
ARJUN is coooool.....
Wonder wat wud be RB's reaction on goin shopping alone?????
NiSha are cool as always...
Looks like jus like everything of Niharika, Bhavyata has eyes for Saksham too....
waiting eagerly for ur next update....


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tes_v1

hey Rosh!
Ur ff's goin cool... Ur not bad on romance n ur idea of romance is no way pathetic!! I jus finished reading it n had a good time....
ARJUN is coooool.....
Wonder wat wud be RB's reaction on goin shopping alone?????
NiSha are cool as always...
Looks like jus like everything of Niharika, Bhavyata has eyes for Saksham too....
waiting eagerly for ur next update....


Thanks for the lovely comments Tia!😃
Hmm....No reaction only action!😛
Tia...You are not supposed to reveal my story dear!😲
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 20

Yudi leaves Rani reluctantly and receives the phone call!

He says "hello"

The person on the other end asks: Ji kya kya mei Malhotra ji se baat kar sakta hoon?

Yudi: Kaun?!😕

Person: Malhotra ji.

Yudi: Sorry,Wrong Number.

He disconnects the phone silently scolding that person who interrupted their beautiful moment.😡

YuRa realize its too late and get back to the palace. On the way Yudi calls Saksham and informs him that they were returning. Saksham asks him to come first and few minutes later, Rani so that no one ges any doubt. Yudi enquires about RB for which Saksham replies that she had been resting in her room since they got back as she was suffering from severe head ache.😕

Just then when he is about to get down from car, he thinks he saw something and tries to gaze it again but doesn't find anything so lets it go!😲

As instructed by Saksham Yudi enters first and then quite some time later, Rani enters.

Rani quickly gets in her room and is about to close the door, Yudi gets in and closes.

Rani: Aap? Koi dekh lega!😳

Yudi: Humare saath chaliye, hume abhi RB ko sab sach bata dena chahiye….Chaliye unke kamare.😲

Rani: Aaj? Abhi? Ji, hume bahut darr lag raha hai!😲

Yudi: Agar hume iss shaadi ko rokna hai toh, chaliye ab…warna bahut der ho jaayegi aur hum kuch nahi kar paayenge.

Rani gets too sacred…..Her palms start sweating and she nervously follows him.😔

Yudi knocks the door but there is no response. He knocks again and yet there is no response.

Rani: lagta hai so chuki hongi….. -

But Yudi forcefully gets in and Rani gets shocked.😲

Yudi: Jaa kar unhe utayiye!😲

Rani: Lekin –

Yudi: Jaldi kijiye.

Rani goes near the bed and hesitatingly pulls the blanket but is shocked to see only the pillows neatly arranged….She looks at Yudi who is smiling.😲
Yudi: Dekha aapne? Issi shak se hum andar aaye!

Rani: Lekin aapko kaise pata chala?

Yudi: Kyunki thode der pehle jab hum car se uttar rahe toh humne unhe jaate dekh liya.

They speak of how to tell the entire family about their relationship…. Suddenly Rnai remembers that she had to give BR the medicines; she asks permission from Yudi and leaves.

Yudi still stands there and thinks…..Suddenly he too remembers something he had to do and leaves to his room.😳

Rani gives BR the medicine all the while thinking of Yudi……She goes and stands by the window staring at the moon recollecting the day's events.😳

Rani gets scared when someone touches her shoulder but calms her down when she sees Yudi. She tries to turn back but he doesn't allow her to……Yudi covers her with her duppatta which he had taken away. She is stunned for a while and later turns back to stare at him.😳😳

Yudi looks at her totally smitten by love: Jab yeh duppattewaali humari hone wali hai toh duppatta ki kya zaroorat hai? Toh hu jab bhi chahe usse duppatta ki tarah ood sakta hoon. ☺️

Even in the dim light he could see her cheeks turning red and her eyes downcast with shyness!☺️

He tells her: Hume aaj hi pata chala ki uss jalse ki raat aapne gaana gaya! Aur ussi din aapne hume aapki ore keech liya! He gets emotional and tells her….Rani, hum aapke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakte! Humare liye jeena mushkil ho gaya! Dil kar raha hai ki hum aapko iss waqt shaadi kar le aur humari sapno ki duniya mei chale jaaye. ☺️😳

Suddenly BR coughs. YuRa run towards her and see her wide awake.😲

BR had been noticing the closeness between YuRa for some days. She failed to understand the deal between then but today everything has come out in open! She was first socked to hear her son being so open…She gradualy started thinking …and the end his happiness was all that mattered!😃

She was helpless and neither could advice him nor could support him. From the very young age, the way he looked after his siblings, made her feel proud of him. 😊

As people say happiness reflects in that person's eyes…..She could see his eyes reflecting happiness which she had never observed before. It was too true in Yudi's case as he never showed his emotions in open but to Rani he was just the opposite. She decides what she had to do with their relationship.😕

BR indicates him to sit beside her. Yudi promptly does that. Her eyes question him asking for explanation.

Yudi stammers unable to bring the words coherently and all these tension had reduced Rani to tears.

BR senses the tension and smiles at them communicating that she knew everything. YuRa are shocked but at the same time relieved.😊

She tries hard to lift her hand and manages only a little…Yudi lifts it up further….She asks Rani to bring her hand as well…Rani does the same….

BR signals to keep it under Yudi's hands….Yudi understands and takes her hands in his and says "Maa, hum aapse waada karte hai ki hum inhe zindagi bhar khush rakhenge!" He then takes BR's hand and places it over his and Rani's head. Both touch her feet and take blessings….BR is overwhelmed!😃

Rani comes and wipes her tears and says: Aap dekhiye, hum aapko jal hi teek kar denge…baad mei aap ro lijiye!😃

Days pass by; still Yudi does not find a way to tell RB. Meanwhile RB too had gone to the palace after Yudi recovering. Before going she had quarralled with yudi for not paying attention towards her. Yudi had merely apologized…..RB could not ask more otherwise she had to give up her freedom. She wondered how she would manage after the marriage.😲

Yudi is really tensed as few more days pass by. There is only a week left now!😔

One, night Yudi is restless and goes to RS's room to tell the truth. After seeing the room empty, he remembers that RS was away for some business purpose.😔

Niharika sees that asks him to come to her room….Yudi too goes and in the meanwhile she asks Saksham to call Rani. The four of them are in the room thinking of a way to stop the marriage…Nothing pops in until Niharika excitedly screams.😊

Niharika tells the idea……YuRa and Saksham are all revolted hearing it! Saksham is speechless. YuRa protest hard but Niharika explains all the pros and cons…..Yudi and Rani stil disagree with the plan.😲

Niharika after thought says: Bhaiyya, agar aap iss upay se sehamet nahi hai toh, aap hi doosra raasta nikhakiye! Iss waqit yahi ek upay bacha hai! Hum aapko koi jor nahi de rahe hai, lekin aap aisa nahi karenge toh sab haath se nikhal jaayega aur aapko Rani bhabhi ko humesha keliye bhoolna padega! Kya aap taiyaar hai?😔

YuRa are astonished. Rnai is almost on the verge of tears, seeing that Niharika continues: Bhabhi, hum aapko dara nahi rahe hai…Hum bas aapko sachchai bata rahe hai!

Yudi recovers from the shock slowly and tells her: Nahi, Nihrika, hum aise kabhi nahi kar sakte…Agar aisa karenge to hiss kul ki maan maryida ka kya hoga? Hum yunhi pitaji ke izzat mitti mei nahi mila sakte hai!!

Rani: Niharika ji hum apne kushi ke liye swaarth nahi banenge! Humara kartvaya hai ki hum apne parivaar ke kushiyn ka khayal rakhen aur –

Niharika: Toh Bhabhi aap swarth mat baniye aur bahiyaa ki shaadi RB se karva dijeye!😒

Niharika sees them shocked by her behaviour, slowly tells them that RS would be angry for few days but will later accept them. She promises to take care of BR as well!😃

Saksham who had been sitting silently all this time tells that he supports Niharike a to te fullest and approves the plan. He tells that they will not be alone and he and Niharika will always help them.😊

Finally NiSha convince them. YuRa still fearing the consequences of their doing!

On the day before the engagememnt, as per plan, Yudi gets called for his business work and RS fumingly cancels the engagement and anounces that the marriage would directly take place. YuRa are still worried to the core!

The next night, late night, Yudi returns to the palace. He is shocked to see Niharika awake at that time and enquires her, she tells the BR wanted to see him. He enters the room and finds something different….He scans it again and finds the room beautifully decorated! Niharika tells him that decorations have started from BR's room for the marriage.😊

Niharika hands him over a new sherwani and asks him to wear it and come….

Yudi gets confused and asks: Abhi? Kyun?😕

Niharika: Bhaiyya, maa aapko iss pehanava mei dekhna chahti hai! Kya pata hume yeh avasar mile ya na mile….!😕

Yudi gets emotional and goes to change! Meanwhile Niharika had said the same to Rani who comes to the room in her bridal attire.😛

Yudi comes out and gets shocked looking at the stuunngly beautiful Rani. His breath leaves his chest and stares at her until Niharika giggles and brings him back to present. She just stands there and smiles at him……..He could do anything for that smile……He felt as though he was living for that!😳

Niharika: Bhaiyya, SURPRISE, Aaj aap dono ki sagaai hai!😲 Yeh maa ka plan tha! Woh aapko aise dekhna chahti thi! She hands them over the rings.😉

YuRa are shocked!😲

YuRa feel too emotional. Niharika slowly lifts Rani's hand up and Yudi takes it further😳….His touch makes her go weak on her knees!☺️ He slips in the ring and unwillingly lets go off her hand! Rani, lowering her eyes, puts the ring and everyone clap. YuRa take BR's blessing.😳

Nisha leave to their respective rooms as it was too late, YuRa change back and leave to their respective rooms. Rani is too shy to look into Yudi's eyes and bids him good-bye with her eyes downcast!☺️ Yudi goes back to his room but he still has an urge to see her……He walks back to her room!😳

Rani is sitting on her bed, looking t the ring, wondering what futire has in store for them! Yudi knocks and before Rani could open the door, he pushes open……Rani who was half way to open the door…..Collide and finally Yudi lands on top of Rani on the bed!😳

Both of them are lost in each others eyes……His hands travel upto her cheeks…as soon as he touches her……her eyes close.☺️ He bends and whispers: Aaj aap bahur khoobsurat lag rahi hai! Aapne toh hume summohit kar diya!😳

Rani blushes and Yudi hugs her tighly……Rani responds back!☺️🤗

Yudi slowly tries to reach her lips, when he hears soomone boday's foot steps……Yudi gets up and lifts Rani too! He sees outside and doesn't find anyone!😕

He looks at Rani……He kisses her forehead and tells: Sirf ek raat baaki…Akl hum ek ho jaayenge! Tab tak pata nahi hum apne dil ko kaise kaboon mei rakhenge!😳

He stealthily goes back. Sukhiya who had been listening goes back to his master…CR….. and reports….. CR is too happy by the way the paln is progressing though she had nothing to do with it…..Yudi had found himself a way to get out without giving her much trouble!

Soon, it's the Wedding day!

In the Mantap:

Yudi is sitting beside RB….He sees Rani, standing behind RB, in a simple red Ghagra…..Yudi is craving for her company…..It was time to execute their plan.

NiSha and BR hoping that everything would be alright!😕

Pandit hands Yudi the sindoor😲……Yudi takes it……….😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow!! that was fantastic.
Loved this part. YuRa engaged. What is their plan? I hope it is successful because if it fails we will have a mess on our hands.
Is Rudr going to marry Bhoomi? Suspense is killing me. Let me see what happens. Please post soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part,Rosh! I loved it to the core.
Romance,suspence,fun all rolled into one! Can't wait to read the next part!
Update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh, YuRa scenes lovely!!!!
But ye kya?? engagement Rani ke saath and shaadi RB ke saath?
ye chakkar kya hain?? whats their plan??
waiting for next part.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Wow!! that was fantastic. (Thanks So much dear!)

Loved this part. (😃😃) YuRa engaged. (😳😳) What is their plan? (Pata Chal jaayega.....Dont worry!) I hope it is successful because if it fails we will have a mess on our hands. (Fikhar not Bobbie, Sab mere haath mei hai..aur mei creatives ki tarah nahiiin hoon!)
Is Rudr going to marry Bhoomi? (Suspense...Shayaad hoga ya nahiin hoga...Mujhe bhi nahi pata!) Suspense is killing me. (Nahiin Bobbie...tumhe abhi bhi zindaa rehan hai...i need to know answers from you...Shahi mehmaan jo ho!...Aur tumhaare pyaare pyaare comments bhi!) Let me see what happens. Please post soon. (I shally try it ASAP!😳)

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Posted: 16 years ago
First of all......sorry for being late 😳

Rosh.....It was completely amazing yaar....Fabulous.. 🤗

But yaar.... I am Rolling at'' Malhotra ji ''...hhahahaha......it was wrong call...and i was thinking kay Saksham hoga.... 😆

Dupatta scene was also very cute.... 😳

Yudi nay waada kia BR say kay woh Rani ko zindagi bhar khush Rakhay ga....That means a lot to me...i know he will not break his promise... 😛

Awww........YuRa are engaged....How cute moment was that.....I am still in daze and that meeting after their ring ceremony ...uffff...me blushing ☺️ BTW what is the meaning of Samohit ? 😕

Nikki ka Plan ? 😲.....What is she upto? Uff...tunay suspense daal dia...Aur Mandap tak baat puhanch gai woh bhi RB kay sath BUT Rani is standing behind Bhoomi woh bhi simple red ghagra main...awww... i can imagine her....I am sure Yudi could not take his eyes off 😛 despite of being sitting in mandap with bhoomi..

Will Yudi become rebel?😛 🤔 🤓.....YES , YES and only YES

So much love ☺️ , suspense 😲 , Drama 😃 , Emotions 👍🏼 , Plans 🤔 , Executions 👍🏼 , Dilemma 😕 , and Finally Cliff-Hanger in this update.... 😉 😆

Pleas post soon....plz , plz , plz , plz ,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
Edited by Faiza_sam - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Nice part,Rosh! I loved it to the core.
Romance,suspence,fun all rolled into one! Can't wait to read the next part!
Update soon!

Thanks So much Purva dear!🤗
Hmm....More suspense on the way!
Yup..I shall update ASAP....yaani ki as soon as I have written the next part!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: darshana23

Rosh, YuRa scenes lovely!!!! (😳😳Thanks a lot Darshu!)
But ye kya?? engagement Rani ke saath and shaadi RB ke saath? (Hmm...Yehi hai suspense!)
ye chakkar kya hain?? whats their plan?? (Yeh mujhe bhi nahi pataa...likhna hoga agla part....😛)
waiting for next part..... (I shall post it ASAP!😳😳)

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