Lost Without You {AsYa FF} *on hold* - Page 8

Originally posted by: friendsall

Waiting for the next already.. greedy... aren't we!!! Poor humeira

Haha yeah I get you lol. Also, more of Humi's truth will be revealed gradually throughout the story.

love ya!

Originally posted by: sj_qh_kabhi

God man! Why do you always end at such parts!!!! I want the next update NOWWWW!!! God this is dooo goood! Loving it so much! Thank youuuu❤️❤️❤️❤️

Cuz I'm evil bwahahahahahaa!!!😈 You'll get the update soon as I finish writing it😃

Thank you for loving it so much!

Love ya!

Aaj milega kya ???? Update ? Hehe

Soorry I'm sooo greedy 👻

Originally posted by: kavyapramod99

Aaj milega kya ???? Update ? Hehe

Soorry I'm sooo greedy 👻

Haha aaj nahi mil sakta sorry 😖 Maybe around the weekend? Actually I've got a buttload of studies to do😅

Hi there!

I read the update 3 days later :P so missed the early update excitement, haha but nevertheless this was soo good!

I am loving the flow here! Your storytelling skills are standing out really in this update. It tells me you have it articulated in your head so perfectly and that's why the writing is so smooth and sleak!

Coming to the update, I feel like this part is going to shape some of the most important events in the upcoming parts. Looks like Zoya's tenure on the project with Asad is probably coming to an end and they were to part ways maybe (May have got that wrong), but the ending of this part could change the whole dynamics. A dark day in their lives, shared pain and self acceptance of feelings for each other, all could mean that something real and deep is about to transpire between them. ( Lol I'm not really guessing here, I believe this is to happen anyway, but I'm interested to see how you write a scene high on emotion between them, I love intense AsYa haha, also because they nailed those scenes )

I like Zoya and Mitch's bonding or rather I feel happy Zoya has a friend to fall back on. Sometimes you may not need a partner as much as you need a true friend in life. He's truly her strength!

Dilshad committed a suicide?! And that had something to do with Asad? That sounds very unpleasant:( Also very traumatic for Asad. Zoya's father is such a disgusting human, I hope Zoya was able to flee and didn't have to face the wrath of her inhuman father.

I'm so excited to know what happens in this meet. Hoping to see the next one soon!

Loving it so far and I'm greedy so give me more to read asap!

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Originally posted by: Wandering_mind

Hi there!

I read the update 3 days later :P so missed the early update excitement, haha but nevertheless this was soo good!

I am loving the flow here! Your storytelling skills are standing out really in this update. It tells me you have it articulated in your head so perfectly and that's why the writing is so smooth and sleak!

Coming to the update, I feel like this part is going to shape some of the most important events in the upcoming parts. Looks like Zoya's tenure on the project with Asad is probably coming to an end and they were to part ways maybe (May have got that wrong), but the ending of this part could change the whole dynamics. A dark day in their lives, shared pain and self acceptance of feelings for each other, all could mean that something real and deep is about to transpire between them. ( Lol I'm not really guessing here, I believe this is to happen anyway, but I'm interested to see how you write a scene high on emotion between them, I love intense AsYa haha, also because they nailed those scenes )

I like Zoya and Mitch's bonding or rather I feel happy Zoya has a friend to fall back on. Sometimes you may not need a partner as much as you need a true friend in life. He's truly her strength!

Dilshad committed a suicide?! And that had something to do with Asad? That sounds very unpleasant:( Also very traumatic for Asad. Zoya's father is such a disgusting human, I hope Zoya was able to flee and didn't have to face the wrath of her inhuman father.

I'm so excited to know what happens in this meet. Hoping to see the next one soon!

Loving it so far and I'm greedy so give me more to read asap!

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Haha no problem, honestly I was kinda eager to read your thoughts on this one...

Thank you for the lovely appreciation of my storytelling skills! Although I really like WRITING more than TELLING, I'm kind of an introvert :)

You feel correct! This track is helping AsYa get close, as in their hearts get closer, not bodies ;D And yeah, Zoya's 'job' at Asad's company is temporary, they're not going to 'part ways' per se, just that Zoya's gonna go back to Nebula Designs and Asad'll see less of her, which (you guessed it) is going to make him realise a LOT of stuff. An intense AsYa scene will happen, of course I too love them to bits, but not until the next couple of chapters (sorry!).

I've kinda based Zoya's and Mitch's bonding on my own best friend and me! We're both hardcore nerds and we're always shipping each other with random people XD.

Yes she did :(, though her reasons had nothing to do with Asad, I'll be revealing them soon! ;) Yes, Zoya did flee, thankfully.

Haha I'm writing the chapter right now, you guys might get an update today evening or tomorrow evening!

Love ya!!

💖

Aaaj nahi milegi ryt.. teek hein

Originally posted by: kavyapramod99

Pleaseeeee update

Writing it as I speak!

Originally posted by: kavyapramod99

Aaaj nahi milegi ryt.. teek hein

Update coming todaayyyyyy!!!

Morning milegii ??? Abhi ??? I'm refreshing every now and then u knowwww