New TS : New Year, New Beginning part 1 updated!!

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Hello all. I'm here with a new TS.


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It's after the scene when Zoya wears miniskirt and after getting caught by Asad, he shouts at her and then Zoya replies him back . . . .

She goes to her room, still seething in anger at the same time Hurt.

She sits for some time, then again stands up not able to bear it, tries to control herself.

"No, this was enough than ever. I can't tolerate it anymore. Who's he to judge me on basis of my clothes and why will he?? He just can't judge my character on the criteria of my clothes!"

She sits on the bed again, this time calming herself almost, "No, I can't live here anymore. I must leave from here."

She goes by the window and try to reconsider this decision once again. She remembers all the bad memories from the starting, Mr. Khan has always judged and shouted at her, never believed her one thing she said. Even he brought her parents name twice while judging her, he did said sorry that last time. But his words had hurt her. And now, he's always believing Tanveer over her. Always shouting at her because of Tanveer also. For how long she could've let this happen??!
I won't change my decision this time.Not even if Mr. Khan himself says me to stay.,"


"Yeah...I'm going and it's..Fi.. Final!!"
Whereas, this time Asad was so guilty for what he has done!! He realized his mistake and thinking of saying sorry to her. But he postpones this after dinner.


***

At the dinner table, Zoya suddenly hears out her decision of leaving "I'm leaving this house soon. I can't stay here anymore. I'm sorry!"


The whole family is wholly stunned by her decision. Specially Asad.He couldn't even think this in whole his life. But Zoya did it today.


Though Dilshad and Najma wanted to say something Asad had nothing to say.
Before Najma or Dilshad could say anything she left from the dinning room. She hadn't her dinner. She was not in the condition of having dinner. She just came here to tell her decision.
And Asad...He didn't know what to say what to do how to make her stop.He also leaves from there. As well as Dilshad and Najma. The whole Khan Family dinner remained incomplete that day because of a person who was just a "mehmaan" but now meant the soul of the house.


Dilshad and Najma knew it is because of Asad. Dilshad goes to her and makes attempts to make her stop. But Zoya was too stubborn this time. She didn't listen. "Phupi, it's nothing new. He always does this. And now I can't tolerate it anymore.Please don't stop me."


"Okay, Zoya. If you want to go, then I'll not stop you!"


Najma comes saying "Zoya, I'll not talk with you. You can't do this!" Zoya shares a hug with her emotionally and says "Phupi, tamatar, I'm going from this house not from this world. I'll be in touch. Anyways, this house was never mine. So I had to go one day!"


"Zoya, you were going to get married to bhaijaan so how could you just leave?!" Najma asks.


"Najma, Asad and Zoya were just feigning the engagement and all that rituals. They might be real for us but not for them. So yeah, she can't stay here on the excuse of that." Dilshad answers Najma.


"But I felt you two.."


Zoya interrupts saying, "There's nothing like that. Mr. Khan himself was finding way to get out of this fake nikha." She says the first line staring at the floor.


Zoya hugs Dilshad and Najma. Then says, "Go and sleep."


As they leave, Asad knocks the door. Zoya gets surprised by this. But she isn't in any mood to see his face. She ignores him and start doing other work.


"Zoya, I am sorry!" "Please don't go!! I promise I will not repeat it again."
No response as if he never exists. This hurt him.

"You trust me, right?" Asad speaks again.

This time Zoya turns to him "Mr. Khan, it's not about Trust, it's you always judge intentionally or unintentionally and hurt me.You always believe others but not me. You think I'm the wrong girl forever. I am sorry but I can't bear it anymore. It's enough and I am going away from you it's Final!"


"And please don't try to STOP me!" She says the last sentence with a
force.


Asad leaves from there distraught and exhausted.

Zoya thinks "I know Mr. Khan, we feel for each other but like this, we can't live together and anyways, you always deny it. Think that, I m not right for you." her eyes welled up.


"And you came to stop, but you never let me come close to you nor let me go away from you.So now I'll have to leave." She starts packing.


"I'll have to go away from here, this place, from Mr. Khan. It's better for us if we stay away. "She murmurs to herself.


He goes to his room.He knows it has happened many times. And at least he shouldn't have bring her parents into it. But doesn't he deserve one more chance?? Asad questions himself.


"No, I can't let Zoya go like this. I can't. I won't!! How could I let MY LIFE..MY LOVE go away?!! I can't live without her. I'll do anything but not let her go like this." Finally Asad accepts what he has been refusing all this while.


A contented little smile comes on his face. As he finally accepted it to himself.
"I'll go to her and ask for another chance. I'll set everything right."


But it was midnight already so he decides to wait till morning.
"Don't know in which path, my destiny would take turn!!"


He couldn't wait... he couldn't sit in peace. His life depends on this decision...HER decision. But he has no other alternative than waiting. It's not a manner to go to a girl's room this time. Also she might be sleeping.


Thinking all these sitting in his rocking chair he goes into slumber.


He wakes up early at morning at 8 am. After getting ready, he decides to go to her.


But it is too late. Zoya isn't in her room.He fears what his mind is telling to him.He checks the washroom and then her cupboard..To his disappointment, he finds it empty. Only two words leave from his mouth "She LEFT!!"


He sits on the edge of her bed. A drop of tear escapes from his eyes. He couldn't think anything straight. His world as if has come to an end. Moreover, he doesn't even know where she is. How he will find him.?!


Suddenly he sees the ring... ENGAGEMENT RING...On the dressing table. He breaks even more. He goes to it, caresses it with all love he could hold.


"How can she leave this?"
At the next moment, "Why would she keep my given thing with her? She has gone from here to move on only. Also, all this while, I kept saying...Screaming..this marriage means nothing to Me. It's false. So how can I blame her..."


Two weeks passed and so on...Seeing Asad's condition, Tanveer understands here is no chance of her being with him.So she leaves from KV to trap other rich man.


Happy New Year All.😊

Here is the first part. Next part will be updated soon. Tell me how was it. Even I myself don't know why I wrote this. It was with less dialogues and from a third person view.So it is not that good I know!!😳


But actually I wrote this cause I feel Asad deserves this, as in the show, he kept hurting Zoya always and never got anything in return😡 So it was his return gift!! I truly feel Zoya should've leave very early after facing all that thing from Asad!!

And tanveer was here because she was also in the show...so I kicked her out!! This is it!!

Edited by GorgeousSmile - 7 years ago
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PART 2

[Note: Following the Ajmer track!!]

After One Month

The scene moves to Ajmer watching Zoya and Asad praying together but yet separate in the same dargah.

Some moments back...

Zoya goes to visit Ajmer to relieve herself. At the same time, Asad also goes there as Dilshad insists him to.


In the dargah, Zoya is walking with her head bowed, while she is given beads by a woman saying that she would find what she is searching for and all her questions would be answered. Zoya doesn't know that Asad, is walking towards her only. Asad crosses by while Zoya keeps looking at the prayer beads.

Zoya walks inside the dargah oblivious in the darkness that Asad too is walking from the other entrance and that they are walking parallel to each other. Just as they are supposed to be in their love life.

Asad prays at the dargah oblivious that Zoya too is sitting some places next to her, praying and she too is oblivious of the irony of the fate that has brought them together again.

Asad prays that he doesn't know what love is, but knows the difference between life and death, as he may be breathing but not living. He says that he has come to take his LIFE back, and get Zoya back, even though he doesn't know if she's in his destiny. He says that he has come to want HIS LIFE from this place back. Asad gets up, while Zoya is still praying. She is in tears. Though it was her decision only to leave him and his house, she doesn't know if she did the right thing. Anything may be the fact, but the biggest fact is, she loves him. She loves him a lot, more than anything else in this world. She smiles at her, who has she in this world?? She had one and only HIM!!! "O Allah, is this my Ego what I m letting matter?? She thinks for a moment. Then her conscience, her mind speaks "No, it's her self-respect." Indeed it is. "O Allah, YOU know everything. Do the best for me. Give me the strength to tolerate this pain. Neither I can live without him nor I can go to him. My Allah, show me a way. A way which will lessen my pain." Finishing her prayers, she leaves from there also.

Asad is walking through the lanes outside the dargah, and Zoya too crosses perpendicular. Both are distraught with the absence of their love in their lives.
Zoya and Asad both are feeling the others' presence but can't meet. As Asad feels her presence, he overwhelmingly runs towards a certain direction, but finds her gone from there. Destiny too plays a cruel joke on them by their paths not crossing.

He keeps chasing her, but doesn't get to her, who is sadly walking through the lanes, when she is shocked to find herself facing Asad, who finally finds her. They are both overwhelmed to see each other. Maybe they are destined to meet there whereas Asad found her day and nights in Bhopal but despite being in the same town, they never met. What a game destiny plays, it's difficult to understand.

Asad looking distraught exhausted...Zoya also lost the glow of her face. Zoya turns from there indicating she still doesn't want to talk with him.Asad stops her holding her hand when she tries to cross him. And says the three magical words "I Love You Zoya". Zoya turns towards him and looks at him with teary eyes. He finally tells her that he loves her and that he can't live without her. Zoya even though being overwhelmed to hear this but she couldn't forget what he always does when everything becomes alright.Both are sad and distraught.

Asad tells whatever he wanted to say to stop Zoya that morning. It's now or Never.


"I know what I said...I did to you can never be erased but I will do my best to be finally worthy of you , to earn your trust, your forgiveness and maybe your love again."


"Could she forgive him? Could she return knowing that he loved her, wanted her the way she loved him, wanted him? But How could she forget what he had done to her? How he had treated her?"

Seeing her confused state he fell down on his knees crying miserably not knowing how else to react.


For the first Time in her life she saw him cry. No matter how much he had hurt her she could never see him cry. It broke her Heart to see that he was as much hurt as she was. Knowing that he was genuinely sorry about what he had said to her was enough for the beginning.



"Zoya, we can't change what has happened. But together we can make our future beautiful. We can do a new start...New beginning. Will you be my partner?? Not as life-partner but as friends."

He forwards his hand to her to shake hands. She doesn't comply. But she smiles...She smiles widely... Beautifully...There is life in her smile..After so many of days.

Asad gets confused.

"Ohkay!! Mr. Khan, it's okay with me! But..."

Asad becomes happy but listening "But...", his eyes get wider.

"But you changed topic na as always."

Asad again gets confused.

"At first you told you love me. But now you say as FRIENDS!! So I want to know NOW only if you'll marry me or not??!Or yo..."

"YES!! I WILL!!" Asad says im a hurry at instant.

Zoya becomes too happy to describe with words. And Asad keeps staring at her. How much he loves her when she smiles!!

Zoya notices this and blushes slightly. To break his trance, she starts saying, "But I've a condition Mr. Khan...Of this 'new start' like you say."

Asad's smile gets disappear in no time. He gets afraid a little. Before he would start asking what, Zoya starts saying herself, it's that "New start means it should be actually new start. Means we would become strangers again. We'll introduce ourselves newly. We would again get to know each other... Even that things which we know about each other...We would discover it newly. We would get to know all that... And we won't repeat our mistakes."


Asad shakes his head in positive understanding what she's trying to say "Means we don't know each other at all."

"Yeah!"

"Nice idea. Interesting Ms Farooqui!! I didn't know you have got so much brain." Asad teases her.

"Mr. Khan!"
"Let's become strangers from at this moment!" Asad says to skip her anger.
"Yeah, bye." Zoya says a bit angrily.


***

Zoya again comes to the Khan Villa. Dilshad and Najma's happiness knew no bounds. Asad is also very happy.

They all get introduced newly as told. It's sweet and adorable. The ladies hug Zoya. Asad's and Zoya's introduction is also formal. Dilshad and Najma's first introduction was by hugging also. But unlike other time, this time AsYa met without any fights and quarrels.

Their wedding gets fixed on 8 November, on Zoya's birthday. It'll be a grand wedding. There will be no less of anything. After all, after this much hurdle, they are finally going to get married.
After two months, on 31st night, all were sitting in the living room. AsYa were married now. Everything went so well in their marriage also in their life.
It's still left two hours of 'Happy New Year'. They have planned to celebrate the night on roof by flying lantern and burning the fireworks and sparklers

Edited by GorgeousSmile - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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U r on fire girl👏
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Tanveer understands here is no chance of her being with him.So she leaves from KV to trap other rich man.
Above lines r the best frm whole update .u kicked that sugar ke dukaan in the very first part..i love u r this addi🤗

I liked ur point of u though it was over dramatic..leaving house on mini skirt wala incident when he did even worst thn this ..heyy but it's nt a complain take it as a compliment ..i like reading where zoya use her brain instead of being dumb maaf krne wale ...

Update next one soon ..i m waiting
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Happy new year
we have a new writer for 2018
Keep them coming
love this a good return gift to asad
he deserves tht
But let's see if he can find her and bring her back
Glad u got rid of Tanveer too
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How did Tanveer get so understanding😆
Asad has a task ahead, please make it difficult. He kind of deserves it😛
I liked this take on the story.
Please update the next part soon
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Soo happy to see it!
😃
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago
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REs...
Read it already!
So will unres soon!

Since I was free so thought why to waste time!
So unres...
First of all thank you so much from sending Tanveer out of their lives!!
I am totally happy to know that!
Secondly I am happy to see Zoya taking this step.
Though I was a little bit sad to read Asad's condition but never the less HE ASKED FOR IT!
I used to be so damn angry when Asad use to judge Zoya by her clothes!
Like seriously! How can anyone be judged by CLOTHES!!
So in conclusion I loved your concept.

Thirdly I was amazed by the banner!
I liked it the update totally!
Though I always hate AsYa sepration but it is okay if they will meet at the end! Will they?


Last but not the least. I got the meaning of your words which you said to me. And I am happy to know that you took the decision. And and and I loved the title of the story too!!


Good going!
Keep it up.
A suggestion try to elaborate a scene without a dialogue like if you wanted to describe Zoya's feelings you can describe them in another tone and then you can the decision in the form of a dialogue. Like you wrote "Yes I am going and that is final." It is just a suggestion. I am not an awesome writer but yeah I am a reader so scenes like this appeal more.
No offence okay!

So when are you updating?
Waiting waiting!😊
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago

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