New TS : New Year, New Beginning part 1 updated!!

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Loved the first part

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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sahira kabir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Nice

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Superb Update...
very well described & written..
looking forward for next part..
cont. soon ;)
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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Nice plot

Like zoya standing for herself

Enjoyed reading it

Let's see how things will work out

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Belle Collet

@AngreziKudi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

This I should gear. Haha glad Tanveer understood early in she never stood a chance. There are so many things that should have happened in the show but never did . Can't wait for the next part. As much as I sympathise with Asad, a woman's integrity and self respect is everything.

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Alicee

@AliceKaBhi

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

I think asya will reunite and they contradict the title of this TS, update soon...

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GorgeousSmile

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
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U r on fire girl👏

😳Glad that you think so...

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GorgeousSmile

@GorgeousSmile

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Tanveer understands here is no chance of her being with him.So she leaves from KV to trap other rich man.
Above lines r the best frm whole update .u kicked that sugar ke dukaan in the very first part..i love u r this addi🤗
I'd forgotten that how much you hate her😆 And you must've got the Most Happiness in the world by doing this of me.😆
I liked ur point of u though it was over dramatic..leaving house on mini skirt wala incident when he did even worst thn this ..heyy but it's nt a complain take it as a compliment ..i like reading where zoya use her brain instead of being dumb maaf krne wale ...

Update next one soon ..i m waiting

Yeah. It was. But you know I chose this cause...from the starting Asad did behave bad with her a lot of time...even the gas leaking scene, tanveer lost scene, jashn-e- bahaar wala blood sample drama but their love wasn't so visible and deep at first...and gradually it became visible to all including they were able to understand their own feelings.
So according to me, if I'd chose any of the scene of before happenings, their love wasn't so deep then and they though realizing it, they never accepted their feelings but refused it. And actually I could've chose the Tanveer burning scene on their sangeet. But who wants to bring that bullshit here?!! It would've spoiled my story. So I used this scene to make Asad feel like a shit.😳

But I do know it's over dramatic..😆

Yeah.Exactly.. Always she's just dumb maaf karne wale! But not in this!😳

Thanks for your lovelyy review!🤗

Will try to update soon..😊