AsYa OS: Just For You.

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Hello everyone.

Hope you all are fine.

On 10 September 2017 she got engaged entering into a new face of life. She was happy so was I, she was nervous and I was hundred time more nervous than her. She is excited for her future so am I. On 6th May 2018 she will become a married woman with a whole new family. That girl is no one other than my SOMU i.e Soumya @Luvurself. I love you my IB and my hearty congratulations to you. This is a really small gift from me but accept it. I know there would be troubles ahead but remember after every dark night there is new shining morning waiting for you. Just for you.

Here is an OS.

Hope you all like it.

AsYa OS:

"Just For You."

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"According to the evidences provided by Mr. Sharma i.e. Mrs. Khan's lawyer, it is proved that Ms. Tanveer is behind the murder attempt of Mr. Khan and Ms. Najma Imran Qureshi. So the court decided to keep Ms. Tanveer under police custody till her life time ends. The case is closed. The judge announced before exiting the room. The court bells chimed announcing the end of the proceeding.

Tanveer smirked coming out of the court watching Sanam and Sehar along with Dilshad and ZOYA. "I told you Tanveer I will win this. See I did it. Zoya mocked down at her. Tanveer let out an evil chuckle before replying to her. "I agree you defeated me Zoya but how will you grow your children without a FATHER. Sorry I am sorry not children they BURDEN for you now. Before she could continue she was shut off by a tight slap on her face by Dilshad.

"Ammi let it be. Let her speak. Continue Tanveer. Zoya stopped Dilshad from replaying. Zoya signaled Dilshad to leave which she did but not before giving a hard glare to Tanveer. Tanveer gritted her teeth instead of replying. "What happened?? Are you done with your shit thing?? Now it is my turn, first of all Tanveer get this clear in your pea size brain, that my kids are not a burden for me. They are symbol of LOVE for me. Tch sorry sorry I forgot that you don't have the word love in your dictionary. My mistake so I am sorry. Secondly they have their father not physically but they do have his love. You don't need to worry about my kids. Zoya replied calmly to which Tanveer smirked making Zoya scoff.

"Wow. What a speech Zoya, hats off to you. Okay I accept that they have their father's so called LOVE, but what about their mother's love? See with this fetus of yours oops I mean your symbol of love you are left for only...1-2 months? Because the marks I left on your body were really deep and even doctors said that either you will survive or this fetus of yours. Tanveer taunted indicating towards Zoya's grown womb. She was 8.5 months pregnant. "You know what Tanveer I don't hate you. I pity you. I mean you seriously think that whatever you are thinking is going to be accomplished. But the truth is NO. You are not GOD who is going to control or decide about my life. And I trust my God whatever will happen would be for good only. So take a chill pill my dear. Don't worry. Go to your new home now. Bye this time forever. Zoya kept a hand on Tanveer's shoulder making her seethe in anger. Soon the constables took Tanveer with them, to her home, new home i.e. JAIL.

But it is said that evilness doesn't ends so soon. As soon Zoya turned to leave Tanveer forwarded her leg resulting Zoya to stumble. Due to her grown belly she fell straight on the floor with a tearful scream escaping from her mouth. "Bye Zoya. Tanveer said before she was pulled by the constables. Dilshad who was at little distance came rushing towards Zoya. "Anyone call the ambulance please. Dilshad screamed while handling Sanam and Sehar.

"Ammi, Ammi, Promise to me... that my baby ...will be the one...to be ... Saved if...anything happens... Zoya whisper cried in pain once they were in the ambulance. "Zoya shut up. Nothing will happen to you. You both will survive. Dilshad replied hastily while tears flowing down her cheeks. "Ammi, don't let Sanam and Sehar feel the void of me. Take care of Haya. Keep telling them... that...their mother... loves them...a lot. With that Zoya closed her eyes. "ZOYA! Dilshad screamed. Zoya's hand which was on Sanam and Sehar head fell from them. As if the innocent souls also felt their void of their mother's warmth that they began to cry.

Rush, Anxiety, Sadness, Fear, Helplessness and Aloofness were not justifying Dilshad's condition once they reached the hospital. Zoya was taken to OT the only moment they entered the hospital. Dilshad somehow managed to make Sanam and Sehar asleep but her condition was becoming worst with each second passing. It has been 3 hours since the red light of the OT was lightened with no sign of doctor or nurse. "Nothing will happen to my child. I know my Zoya will fight. She will fight for the sake of her kids. She will fight for him, HER ASAD. Dilshad whispered while caressing Sanam and Sehar's head. Maybe she was RIGHT or maybe she was terribly WRONG.

21 years later.

"Mom my breakfast, I am really damn hungry. A guy shouted entering the kitchen of Khan Villa. "Armaan it is Saturday. A girl from kitchen replied, bringing the breakfast. "Oh I am sorry HD. I forgot that. Armaan replied chewing his toast. "Which is the thing you remember always? Good Morning. Another girl apparently a duplicate of Zoya said hitting on Armaan's head before wishing. "Morning doctor, I do remember things. Okay just that I forgot this in rush. Armaan replied to which both girls chuckled.

"Sanam want to have coffee? The previous girl asked. "Yes Haya. I need one terribly. Sanam replied while preparing a toast for herself. "Where is Ms. Fashion Designer? Armaan asked looking around. "Yes where is Sehar? Haya also asked. Before Sanam could reply a voice interrupted. "Here I am. They turned around to see Sehar with Dilshad. "Good Morning. Sehar wished cheerfully with a pleasant smile on her face. "Good Morning. Dilshad wished politely though with enthusiasm. With Armaan, Sanam, Sehar and Haya the breakfast was of course not a silent affair.

After few hours:

"It is 2 p.m. now. Where is Mom? The worry lines on Sanam's face could be easily seen. Sehar took a deep breath ignoring to whatever Sanam said, whereas Armaan began to call his MOM. "I don't know. She always goes on Saturday but never ever she got this late. Haya exclaimed tensely. "She isn't picking my calls either. Armaan grumbled. Dilshad who was listening to all of them turned towards Sehar who was busy with her phone. "Sehar aren't you worried for your mother? Dilshad asked. Sehar froze for some seconds before turning towards Dilshad. "No. I am not worried for her. As soon Sehar's words hit Haya's ear she grumbled.

"Not again Sehar. She is your mother for god sake. "She is not my mother. Sehar replied to Haya in an utterly cold voice. "Rehan is outside. I am leaving. See you all in the evening. Sehar left kissing Dilshad's forehead. "She is nuts. Dadi you need to clear her misunderstandings. For god sake how can she blame Mom for something she is not even responsible. Haya exclaimed irritatingly. Dilshad just passed a sad smile through her teary eyes. "Only if your MOM allows me to do so. Where are you? I wish you are safe ZOYA.

Once outside the house Sehar began to dial a number in rush. "Come on pick up. She wished biting her lips. "You wished and here I am. A guy from behind said. "Rehan, Thank God. Now let's go. "Wait. Rehan stopped not moving an inch from his place. "What wrong? He asked cupping Sehar's face. "Nothing is wrong. Why are you asking? Sehar asked frowning or maybe fake frowning. "Sehar you think I am a fool? I know you that much at least. You are tensed about something otherwise you are never ready to leave your home on Saturday. "You are thinking too much. Nothing like that is there. Sehar finally was able to convince Rehan. "I really hope so. He said before they moved out.

At the same time at some other place:

(Kindly start the music in the background:

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Khaamoshi kaisi hai ye khaamoshi,

Ek ajeeb bazaar hai duniya

Gham haste le aao

Mol khushi ka paas na ho to

Gham saste le aao,

Paron bina dekha panchi jo

Mujhko meri yaad aayi,

Maine kaha apna koyi

Ek bhi awaaz na aayi.

Jin par murjhayi baat apni

Woh hont dikhaun kisko,

Mujhe log kahein tumhe dard kisi ka

Naam bataun kisko.

Tera naam bataun kis ko

Ye haal sunaun kisko.

Main tera naam bataaun kisko

Yeh haal sunaaun kisko.

"I can't take this pain anymore. Come back now. I am tired now, tired of life. I will complain about you to Ammi. Stop it. Come on. Why you did that? Why? We promised to live together but you didn't fulfill your promise. Jab vada poora nahi karna tha tu kiya hi kyu? Why are you not responding now? Your blood questions me about you. What am I supposed to answer? Come back now please. I love you. They love you. They miss you. She threw her head next to his hand which lied aimlessly on white hospital bed. "I have been telling you from years that Armaan took your face too. At least for him come back. He never saw you in actual. Sanam and Sehar need you. Haya needs you. We need you.

Khamoshi kaisi hai yeh khamosi.

Tez hawa ke zor pe ho jo

Tinka mile woh kahan

Din bhar andar tu jalta hai

Dil phir jale kahan,

Umeedon ka naam na lena

Aur na karo dua

Aansu ki kismat mein they hum

Aansu aana mila.

Jo dekha hai har dil mein

Main woh khott dikhaun kisko,

Mujhe log kahein tumhe dard kisi ka

Naam bataun kisko.

Main tera naam bataun kisko

Yeh haal sunaun kis ko.

Zoya raised her head to witness ASAD lying there unconscious with oxygen attached with him. Her face was still like she was but her eyes lost the spark they had once. She broke down into fits of sobs letting tears cover her face. "Why did you save me when you knew that I won't be able to live without you? Asad please reply to me. I am waiting for you since 22 years. And I am tired now, exhausted of life. I can't live with this pain anymore. It hurts; it hurts beyond anyone's imagination. You promised to be with me forever. Where are you now? Come back please... She ended sobbing in his arms.

Back at Khan Villa:

"Enough, I am calling police. Sanam stood up from the sofa she was sitting. "No, you won't. Dilshad stopped her immediately. "Dadi see the time it is 12 of night. Do you have any idea where mom is? No right. So why on the earth are you stopping us? Haya countered her. Dilshad was at loss of words. Armaan who was observing Dilshad came and sat on his knees. "Dadi where is Mom? I know that you know where she is. So tell us where is she? Armaan asked softly while caressing her hands. "I... Dilshad fumbled because of confusion. What should I do, should I tell them or not about the whereabouts of Zoya? "Dadi please tell us. You know that we don't have anyone other than you and Mom. Please tell us where is she? Armaan requested again.

Tears escaped Dilshad's eyes not knowing what she should do. "I... I can't tell you Armaan. She whispered cried on her helplessness. "Dadi see now you are testing my patience. What if something wrong has happened to Mom? Haya exclaimed clamping her hands on her face. "Dadi please... Armaan whispered cried. He was worried sick for his mother. "Dado what's wrong? Sanam asked holding Dilshad by her shoulder. "I can't tell you... Dilshad again whispered cried. "Dadi... Haya trailed off as Sehar entered the hall. "Hello everyone... She chirped while secretly looking around. "Dadi answer na please... Haya continued totally ignoring Sehar. Sehar silently moved to her room followed by a curious Sanam. "It's okay we won't force you but at least confirm it whether she is fine or not? I can't relax until I don't get the confirmation. Armaan comforted Dilshad and moved towards his room.

Once Sehar entered her room she slumped on the bed immediately. Tears began to flow from her eyes revealing her emotions. "Stop crying for that lady Sehar. She doesn't deserve your tears. Neither has she cared for your tears nor will she ever. If she would have cared then Dad would have been here with us. At least we would have known that where Dad is but no. Sehar kept on wiping her tears but they continued to fall. "Why am I even crying for her? Sehar questioned out loud. "Because you love her more than anything in this world... Sehar turned towards the source of the voice to see Sanam standing there. Sanam was there from 3 hours listening whatever Sehar was blabbering.

"You are crying because you love her. Sanam repeated again. "I don't love her. I ha... Sehar stopped rather than completing her sentence. "Yes complete the sentence please. Sanam taunted. "See you can't even say that you hate her. What does this mean Sehar? You love her just that you are feigning this hate drama, hurting yourself and Mom too. Sanam said moving towards her. "You know she cried last night because of you. Sehar turned her face away from Sanam trying to stop her tears. "They won't stop flowing until you accept the truth. Sehar turned towards Sanam with her face devoid of any expression.

"Well my work was to guide you. Now it depends on you that whether you want to accept the truth or live in your fake life. Sanam turned to leave to see Haya standing there. "If anything bad happened to Mom Sehar I swear I won't forgive you ever. That was all she said before leaving. Sanam also left leaving Sehar alone.

Next Day:

Everyone was sitting in the living room looking towards the door expectantly. Zoya didn't return at night now it was 8:00 of night but still there was no sign of Zoya. Till now Dilshad who was once calm was also tensed. "I don't know but I am having a really bad feeling. Haya whispered. "Same here... Sanam replied. Sehar was still in her room, no one saw her since last night. Armaan was sitting blankly on the dining table. He was awake from last night without any hesitance sitting on the table and his eyes stick on the door.

"Ammi... Armaan yelled looking towards the door. Hearing him everyone's attention went towards the door. "Mom/ Zoya... Everyone said before moving towards her. "Haya bring water for Mom. Fast... Sanam ordered taking Zoya towards the couch. "Ammi Asad... Zoya said. Everyone frowned hearing an unknown name. "What happened to Asad? Dilshad asked noticing Zoya's eyes. "Ammi Asad... Zoya again said. "Wait a second. Who Asad? Do we know him? Armaan asked. Dilshad looked at Armaan perplexed.

"Zoya what happened to Asad? Dilshad asked again. "Ammi Asad... And tears began to flow through her eyes. "Mom you can tell me... what happened? Armaan took the charge and cupped her face. "Armaan... Ammi...Asad! Zoya cried holding Armaan's hand. "Zoya tell me what happened to Asad? Dilshad yelled sensing that Zoya is in shock. Zoya was not replying but tears kept flowing from her eyes.

"Mom... All were shocked as Sehar called Zoya out as Mom. "Sehar... Asad... Zoya cried as Sehar cupped her face. "What happened to him? Sehar asked in a cracking voice. Composing herself Sehar asked Haya to give water to Zoya. "Mom water... Sehar placed the glass next to Zoya's lips. "Now tell me what happened? She asked calmly. "Ammi we need to go to the hospital. Zoya said quickly to Dilshad. "But why to hospital? Sanam asked. "You need to go because someone needs you all there. They heard a voice from the door.

"Aahil...? You know what is happening? Tell me. Sanam questioned. "I can't. Only Aunty can. Aahil replied calmly. "Sanam lets go to the hospital. We will get to know. Sehar suggested after Zoya and Dilshad left with Aahil. "But which hospital should we go to? Haya asked. "Just follow me. Sehar replied after sometime. Soon the siblings also left after Zoya and Dilshad.

Hospital:

"Asad... Dilshad said happily as soon she entered the room. There was Asad lying with his eyes open and a light smile playing on his lips. "Ammi... He whispered. "Zoya how did this happen? Dilshad asked after hugging Asad. "Sehar... "Sehar? Dislhad repeated in confusion. "Yes Sehar. Zoya replied with a smile.

Flashback:

"Now will you tell me what are you doing in a hospital? Sehar asked angrily as soon the nurse brought Zoya. "Sehar what are you doing here? Are you okay? Zoya asked in concern. "This is not the answer of my question. Wait a second don't tell me you come HERE every Saturday? Zoya looked around not replying to Sehar. "Listen Mrs. Khan I need the answer. Sehar asked again. "That is none of your concern Sehar. "Off course it is my bloody damn concern. My mother is coming to a hospital every week from past 22 years and I don't even know about it. Do you even realize what time it is? It is 5 of evening. Sanam and Haya both are freaking out thinking about your whereabouts and Armaan he is sitting like a ghost. Do you even realize how tensed I was? Sehar stopped as soon she realized what she just exposed.

Zoya smiled as she saw Sehar being angry like Asad used to be. "I mean... i... uh... Sehar fumbled trying to make some excuse. "How you come to know that I am here? Zoya asked bringing her out of her awkwardness. "GPS. Now answer me what are you doing here in this hospital? Sehar asked calmly. "I came to meet someone. Zoya replied. Sehar scoffed and asked "And that someone is?? "You don't need to know. Zoya mentioned calmly. "What do you mean by I DON'T NEED TO KNOW? Of course I need to know that for whom you are ready to let Armaan stay like a ghost and let Sanam and Haya freaking.

"Come with me. Zoya calmly said after holding her hand. Sehar trying to take her hand out of Zoya's grip but Zoya's grip was quite firm. Sehar and Zoya entered in the dark room where Asad was sleeping since past 22 years. "Why is this room so dark? I can't see anything. "Why you talk so much Sehar? Can't you just stay quiet for a while? Zoya snapped at her. "Excuse me? My tongue my mouth my choice. Now tell me why you brought me here? Sehar countered back in her defense. "You wanted to meet that person. Right? Sehar nodded. "There he is. Go and talk to him. Maybe you can do what I am not able to do from years. Zoya thought at the end.

"Hello Mr. Stranger, How are you? Since you are in hospital of course you would not be fine. Silly me... why is he not replying to me? Sehar asked looking at Zoya in the partially lighted room. "He won't reply. He is in Coma. Zoya informed. "Oh! I am so sorry I didn't mean to hurt you sir. See I know that you can't reply to me but you can at least listen to me. So let me introduce myself. Hi I am Sehar, Sehar Ahmad Khan. That lady is my... biological mother, luckily or unluckily. "And he is your father. Zoya thought. "I am happy to meet you. Sehar said while taking Asad's hand in her. After a while Sehar came out of the room followed by Zoya.

"Now mind to tell me who is HE? Sehar asked as soon they came out of the room. "I will answer to your question once I come home. "And when will you bother to return? Sehar asked sarcastically. "Before you return to home I will (thud)... Zoya and Sehar attention diverted towards the voice coming from Asad's room. "Asad... Zoya whispered with eyes widened as she ran towards the room with Sehar standing over there baffled.

Flashback ends.

"And when I entered the room his hands were moving. Doctors said that something triggered inside him and that result him to gain consciousness. Zoya ended when Sehar, Sanam, Haya and Armaan entered the room. All stood rooted on their spots as they saw Armaan's look alike. "Ammi...who is he? Sanam asked though her mind knowing the answer already. "Asad...AHMAD KHAN. He was the one Dadi was talking about that day. Sehar answered connecting dots. "He is my father? Armaan asked still in shock. All looked towards Zoya to seek answer. "Sehar Sanam Armaan first listen to me ... Zoya tried to explain but Asad cuts her in between. "Yes I am Asad Ahmad Khan. I am your father.

Sehar stumbled a step back in shock. "He was alive? You never told us. I was talking to my father yesterday? How is it possible? He is dead. No...no... "Sehar... Zoya shouted as Sehar ran out of the room with tears rolling down her eyes. "He is my father. Armaan whispered in a dazed state. He looked at Asad keenly noticing how similar they appear. "But how is it possible? Ammi... Sanam looked at Zoya with her eyes ready to drop tears. "Sanam try to understand the situation. I will explain once we reach home. Zoya requested. "No we will talk right here right now. After 22 years all of a sudden a man returns and says to us that he is my father. How the hell am I supposed to accept this? Sanam shouted.

"Mind your tongue Sanam. Don't you dare blame Dad when the one who is the real culprit is your mother...? Dad was in coma from last 22 years how is he supposed to be with us? Sehar countered back from the door. "You knew it? Why you never told me? Sanam asked with a lump in her throat. "Only that woman knew it Sanam. No one else was allowed to tell us. Why you did this with us? You knew that Dad was alive but still you hid that fact from us. How can you be so... "SEHAR!! Armaan shouted putting a stop to Sehar allegations. "No one has the right to insult neither my mother...nor my father. Either that person is my sister or someone else. He said calmly. "I know there must be some reason because of which you hid this fact. I will wait for you to answer. Armaan said addressing Zoya.

Armaan went near Zoya and wiped her tears. He side hugged Zoya and whispered in her ears. "Don't worry I will handle them too. Take care of ...Dad. He kissed her forehead moved towards Asad. "Get well soon ...Hero. Your family is waiting for you to return to your home. He slightly punched Asad's shoulder making Dilshad smile. "And you... come on smile. Tears don't suit gorgeous ladies and especially when that gorgeous lady is Armaan Ahmad Khan's grandmother. Armaan winked at Dilshad making her wipe her tears. "You two come with me. Give the couple some privacy you know... He said holding Sanam and Sehar by their shoulders. "You won't change ever will you? Sanam asked while moving with him. "Never... Armaan winked.

Haya who was a silent spectator moved towards Asad as the trio left the room. "Hi... I am Haya... Your si... "My third daughter... Asad completed the sentence. Haya smiled widely before hugging Asad to which Zoya and Dilshad smiled. "What about Sanam and Sehar?? Asad asked worriedly to Zoya. "Don't think about them Dad. Sanam quite understands she will understand quickly and when Armaan is with her what to fear. About Sehar she has already understood but only her some clash with mom is left and I think since you are here now that will also clear up soon. Haya answered making a smile but still a doubt lingering in his mind.

After three months:

"Mom my dupatta... Sehar shouted in her bridal attire. "Sehar why are you shouting so much...? Try to behave like a bride at least. Zoya scolded fixing the heavy dupatta on her head. "Look who is talking the one who use to wear jogger under her lehenga. Sehar whispered slowly but loud enough for Zoya to hear. "Who told you this? Zoya asked with her hands on her waist. "Of course Dad told me... Sehar giggled as Zoya marched towards her room. "Dad you are dead. Sehar whispered. "Haya where is Sanam? Sehar asked as soon Haya entered the room. "Where do you think she must be? Haya asked while helping Sehar to wear her hand jewelry. "Let me guess...Dad's room. Haya nodded at Sehar's guess. "God...It is also her marriage and she is in Dad's room. Sehar asked moving towards her parents' room.

"Ms. Sanam Ahmad Khan if you are done with your father than kindly allow me to spend some time with him too. He is not only your father. Sehar said as soon she entered the room. "Right now I am trying to stop their fight. Sanam whispered to a shocked Sehar. Asad and Zoya were again fighting with each other. "Call Armaan otherwise I will die. Sehar said witnessing her parent's fight. " I don't know how he manages to stop their fight. Haya whispered.

"Oh God!! Not again... Armaan said as soon he entered the room. "Will both stop fighting? For god sake man it is the wedding of your daughters. From where you both bring this much stamina? Armaan exclaimed as soon AsYa stopped their quarrel. "He started it. Zoya informed indicating towards Asad. "I didn't. She started it. Asad replied back. "Neither you nor her. I was the one who started it. Armaan interrupted as soon he saw Zoya ready to reply. "Now ladies move to the left and men to the right. Thank you. Armaan ordered pushing the mother daughters out of the room. "You know what sometimes I feel I your father and you are my son. Armaan said to Asad once everyone was out. "You know what sometimes I feel I am not your father and neither is you my son. Asad replied in the same tone. Armaan chuckled and moved out of the room.

Finally the auspicious moment of the marriage arrived when both the brides were asked their consent. "Qubool Hai. Both said letting the priest announce them as husband and wife. Armaan was having a smile on his face watching his sisters married and AsYa were having a delightful moment seeing their family together.

So how was it?

Hope you all like it..

Do Like and Comment.

Will be waiting for your reviews.

Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yes I am first...
So nice o's. ..
I loved ...

Will u write some more ike this sweet. ..
U write very nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Heartiest congratulations Soumya!!
🤗🤗
Wow!! I'm so Happy to hear!!!!
Congrats!! Congrats!!
Btw I knew something is going on😆 just guessed it!!
Ohk. You know 10 Sept is something special to me also...coz that day is my that cousin's Birthday!!
It's great that u got engaged on that day too😆
You know now I'm never ever going to forget ur engagement date!! Even if u forget!! Hahaha...
And even after your marriage, I'll always congratulate you on this day of your engagement anniversary!!
Crazy I am!😆
Once again my heartiest heartiest congratulations to you!!
You don't know how happpy I m hearing this...my mood got so enlightened!!⭐️
Be happy and blessed!!🤗
❤️ U.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome os dear
loved it ❤️

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow.. really.. that one great news..! congratulations !! a lot of anxiousness !😆 awesome Os.. ! u just blowed it.. right from the start... i Loved how dilshaad slapped tanveer.. god that woman.. deserves it.. and zoya's reply to her about the kids was totally wow.. loved it all ! but i like the start more.. thankyou so much for pm.. keep writting !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love it
Amazingly written
But why there was clash between seher and zoya?
Why zoya hide about asad from all?
Last moments were cute
Thanks for pm
Keep writing more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Love it

Amazingly written
But why there was clash between seher and zoya?
Why zoya hide about asad from all?
Last moments were cute
Thanks for pm
Keep writing more


Thanks.
I am glad to know.
Because Sehar use to blame Zoya for the absence of her Dad.
Because she didn't wanted to let her kids shatter up.
I will of course.😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Somu u r going to get married but u havn't told us/me 😭
Apna ni samjhte humhe😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Somu u r going to get married but u havn't told us/me 😭

Apna ni samjhte humhe😭

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She was nervous.
So she asked me to tell.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey I loved ur os
Love argument between zoya and seher
Can u write more asya story's like this one I loved it but more of asya story part and more of father daughter parts
I wacted asad to sort the problem between seher and zoya but u did not write that can u plz write an os on that as well or make this an ff plz reply soon

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AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

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Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

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