Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18 - Page 16

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Exactly. Yeh coming soon kab jayega??

I. M. W.A.I.T.I.N.G.

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing part

enjoyed reading it

loved asya scenes

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Awesome update dear

Loves the part. The flashback scenes are soo romantic and lovely. Zoya being all chirpy and fun loving. Asya will continue arguing over something or the other.

Loved the scene between imraan n zoya . So Najma is a mother n haya is a sweet name. Wish to see Najma n zoya together

I really liked the gif used in the above chapter. Really according to the situations.

Lets see what happens in the party.

Thank u for the pm

And plz give the next part soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Amazing..

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Very soon dear and sorry to keep you waiting 😊

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

res..

unres..

First of all SORRY for the this much late unres. But as you know that I am hell busy with my studies. So kindly forgive me.😭

I completely understand that dear so no need to apologize and after all studies comes first 😊

Ok coming to the as always amazing update.

SUPERB as always.

I love your writings.

Thanks alot dear it really means alot

Honestly!! I just loved the update despite the fact of Asad being a douche bag here.

Means I just want to kill him.

I know even I felt the same he was too much but then something happened in past because of which he is reacting like this

But then the happy past memories!! (sad sigh)*

Asad and Zoya were such a cute couple.

They were yaar! All the have now is past memories and both are actually leaving there but no one can be in past forever regardless to how or bad it was

N Zoya she was sooo sooo much sweet, innocent and cute.

She was! Now look at the transition 😭

They had a beautiful relation but then what happened that they became this distant?

Something really terrible! It will unfold with time 😉

ASAD AHMAD KHAN THAT WAS REALLY RUDE AND IDIOTIC THING OF YOURS.😡 HOW CAN HE END THE RELATION JUST LIKE THAT. I mean seriously!!

Well he is always like that but them maybe even he has a strong stand because he maybe the Akdu but nothing is important than Zoya to asad so maybe something as such might have happened that he took such a step

U know what sometime I doubt that whether Asad is a human or not? Because how can he be soo much dumb and reckless.

He is emotionally challenged you know 😕 or even we can say he hurt and broken so much gussa for asad😛

Well then comes his bullshit plan on making Zoya jealous.

Hahaha right

Good and Bad Job at the same time Zoya.

Good Job because you are giving Asad what he deserves.

Bad Job because you let that bitch dance with Asad. I wanted you to dance with him!😡😭

I know see that wild cat with him is pain in eyes but in the story asya relationship is in such a point that dancing together would be the last thing I could think😉

I am happy that Najma and Zoya's bond is good.

Yeah thankfully their problem has not affected zoya-najma's relation

Honestly the FB's are giving me jitters.

Means how can such a beautiful relation be destroyed beyond repairing??

That's really sad but it does happen once a fairy tale relationship ends up in nightmare and that's really sad 😭

I know you will some how repair the relations. I trust you with that.

Glad to see your trust in me! Well I can say I will try my best to do that #nopromises

But still I am really going crazy thinking about the possibilities!!

Well I don't mind that hehehe

SUPERB UPDATE!!👏

AMAZINGLY WRITTEN!!👏

It's really encouraging to know that dear

LOVED IT because of your writing but Hated it because of Asad.

Then I can only say you're gonna hate him more as it was just a trailer

Won't say cont. soon because I know you are really busy.😊

Thanks for understanding yaar

Thanks a lot for the special res.🤗

There would always be a special place for you in my every stories 😃

P.S: Sorry for such short and bad comment but I am really sucked up. 😭 I don't know what have I written. N I guess that I have mixed up the previous update and this one. So really sorry.

It was not at all bad but very overwhelming response ok

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

Wonderful

A perfect balance between past and future

A lovely explanation was made

A clear case study on navy is also made I suppose.

Well done.

I love it

A sincere request please don't type red flashbacks.

Please use brown or anything else.

Please. I find it difficult to tolerate red colour.

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

This was nice update dear

Very well written

Asya scenes was beautifully explained

Waiting for next part;

Pls update soon...