Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Awesome update dear

Loves the part. The flashback scenes are soo romantic and lovely. Zoya being all chirpy and fun loving. Asya will continue arguing over something or the other.

Loved the scene between imraan n zoya . So Najma is a mother n haya is a sweet name. Wish to see Najma n zoya together

I really liked the gif used in the above chapter. Really according to the situations.

Lets see what happens in the party.

Thank u for the pm

And plz give the next part soon

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#122

res..

unres..

First of all SORRY for the this much late unres. But as you know that I am hell busy with my studies. So kindly forgive me.😭

Ok coming to the as always amazing update.

SUPERB as always.

I love your writings.

Honestly!! I just loved the update despite the fact of Asad being a douche bag here.

Means I just want to kill him.

But then the happy past memories!! (sad sigh)*

Asad and Zoya were such a cute couple.

N Zoya she was sooo sooo much sweet, innocent and cute.

They had a beautiful relation but then what happened that they became this distant?

ASAD AHMAD KHAN THAT WAS REALLY RUDE AND IDIOTIC THING OF YOURS.😡 HOW CAN HE END THE RELATION JUST LIKE THAT. I mean seriously!!

U know what sometime I doubt that whether Asad is a human or not? Because how can he be soo much dumb and reckless.

Well then comes his bullshit plan on making Zoya jealous.

Good and Bad Job at the same time Zoya.

Good Job because you are giving Asad what he deserves.

Bad Job because you let that bitch dance with Asad. I wanted you to dance with him!😡😭

I am happy that Najma and Zoya's bond is good.

Honestly the FB's are giving me jitters.

Means how can such a beautiful relation be destroyed beyond repairing??

I know you will some how repair the relations. I trust you with that.

But still I am really going crazy thinking about the possibilities!!

SUPERB UPDATE!!👏

AMAZINGLY WRITTEN!!👏

LOVED IT because of your writing but Hated it because of Asad.

Won't say cont. soon because I know you are really busy.😊

Thanks a lot for the special res.🤗

P.S: Sorry for such short and bad comment but I am really sucked up. 😭 I don't know what have I written. N I guess that I have mixed up the previous update and this one. So really sorry.

Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago

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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Wonderful

A perfect balance between past and future

A lovely explanation was made

A clear case study on navy is also made I suppose.

Well done.

I love it

A sincere request please don't type red flashbacks.

Please use brown or anything else.

Please. I find it difficult to tolerate red colour.

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#124

This was nice update dear

Very well written

Asya scenes was beautifully explained

Waiting for next part;

Pls update soon...

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Love it

Awesome update

Flashback were amazing

Asya were so cute and romantic

Love najma's baby name conversation

Thanks forpm

Update soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Nice update dear
Loved it
Few things cleared why they separated
Liked flashback scenes
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Roseline

@Moonstique

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Amazing

Waiting for your new updates

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GorgeousSmile

@GorgeousSmile

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#128

res

Unresss..

So sorry for such a late unres!

But Tit For Tat!!😆

Since I know you will take time in updating, so I done late unres too!😛

Coming to the update,

Loved it!!

But only the flashback parts!!

So Adorable it is!😳

Ahh...I miss their past!!

I look forward for more flashback parts😛

So literally Asad destroyed everything and still denies it.Stupid Moron!!😡😡

And moreover, still is always ready to fight with Zoya and demean her!

Good Zoya doesn't give him price!😆

And Zoya changed!!😭Good for giving Asad a befitting reply but else not gud!

Ayaan Asad's friend only!?!

Btw Tanveer kaha gayi?😃Did u mention anything on chapter 1??Abt her being disappeared?? No I guess...I don't remember!!

Good pain in head is gone!😆 Nevertheless for this chapt only I guess!

In a way, I guess both fathers spoiled their love life INTENTIONALLY!!❓🤔

Why was this chapter so small??😭

So Amazingly written!!

I loved every inch of it!!Even the business/project conv. between all!! Everything was so Nice!!

Very beautifully written!!🤗

Just I wish this was a little longer!!

Please please update soon!!!!

I can't wait longer...already been so looonggg!!

Edited by GorgeousSmile - 7 years ago

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Rubyaasyafan

@Rubyaasyafan

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#129

O grl thanq so much 4 d pm
m in love vid dis story already & i really lyk d banner,concept is very intresting
continue soon
next update kab milega?

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#130

Thank you for the Res dear
Update was Amazing!!! enjoyed reading...
Flashback scenes were so good...loved it!!
And now Asad is annoyed... dealing with changed Zoya... enjoyed their argument...
eager to read more...continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

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