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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Hellooo Ankita... 😊

Thank you sooo much for the PM.

Yeh Maine bahut pehle hee padh liya thaa...

You wrote really well...

Par I am not a big fan of Sad endings... 😆

But yess nice try..

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hellooo Ankita... 😊

Thank you sooo much for the PM.

Yeh Maine bahut pehle hee padh liya thaa...

You wrote really well...

Par I am not a big fan of Sad endings... 😆

But yess nice try..

I also don't like sad endings but the thing is I have written many happy OS on Devakshi on Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi forum and therefore I wanted to try something different that's why wrote this and I am glad that you appreciated my effort 😃

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Beautifully written

Sad for poor asad

Thanks for pm

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Such a lovely but emotional os
Asad liking zoya from first glance
Liked how he kept comin
N finally asked her for dinner
Like how he stuck up for her from that witch tan even after she was ignoring him
N liked how they finally became friends n started to spend time together
Sad she died whilst he was away n fact he didn't get to confess or say goodbye
But liked how he helped others in her memory n looked forward to the day he'd see her again
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ayat20
Beautiful work

Thank you dear 😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176
Such a lovely but emotional os
Asad liking zoya from first glance
Liked how he kept comin
N finally asked her for dinner
Like how he stuck up for her from that witch tan even after she was ignoring him
N liked how they finally became friends n started to spend time together
Sad she died whilst he was away n fact he didn't get to confess or say goodbye
But liked how he helped others in her memory n looked forward to the day he'd see her again
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thank you so much dear for your valuable comment and I am glad that you liked my OS

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Beautifully written
Sad for poor asad
Thanks for pm

Thank you 😃

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing OS.😊

Asad(KSG) Character was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) spending time with each other was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) realised his love towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

Zoya had Cancer and She was No more,it was so sad.😭

Asad(KSG) Poem towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

The Whole Os was So Heart-Touchingly explained.😭

Please Write like this.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing OS.😊

Asad(KSG) Character was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) spending time with each other was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) realised his love towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

Zoya had Cancer and She was No more,it was so sad.😭

Asad(KSG) Poem towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

The Whole Os was So Heart-Touchingly explained.😭

[DIV]Please Write like this.😊

Thank you so much for commenting and I am glad that you liked my work 😃

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

It was beautiful!
Loved it!!

But the most hurting part that Zoya died!!😭

But still it was beautifully written!!

Thanks for the PM!😊

Do write more! Will be waiting!!

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