AsYa(KaBhi)SS 'Ice-Cream Makes Everything Better' Last Parts, Pg 24

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

'Ice-Cream Makes Everything Better!'

I am totally in love with this ice cream...

I am not much of an ice-cream lover but after reading this story I definitely wanted to have ice-cream..

This is simply awesome!!

From Asad running away from girls, never trusting them to sharing all about his past to a weird girl who offered him icecream and according to him cared about nothing else but her icecream was all amazing!!

Their first two meetings were also fun with the ice cream in between!!

Zoya's unconditional love for ice-cream is too adorable...!Now I too wanted give her theory a chance!!

They bonded during their routine saturday meetings.

Asad's care for Zoya when she discussed about her life and then slowly their bond strengthened..

The scene where Zoya realizes Asad is AAK was actually a treat to read...

How Asad tried hard to stop Zoya from searching about AAK but who could stop Zoya Farooqui and her obvious shock when she came to know the truth!

Her amusement for AAK's fangirl-ing turned into anger when he turned out to be her Asad.

Zoya could not stand the 'stranger act' during the meeting for too long.

Both are getting affected in this relation yet one is not ready to accept it while other is waiting.

Stubborn!

I so love this!!!❤️

''Life is like an Ice-Cream...Enjoy it before it melts..''

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Awesome update dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm

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stasha221

@stasha221

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

I just wanted to say u r an amazing writer...Loved it a lot...And plss continue soon

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Super awesome...

Loved the update..

Akdu Asad was cute actually..

I'm glad u r at least updating from your tight schedule..

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Good to see ur PM.

Amazing parts dear

Asad behaved all professional in office n this irk zoya alot

Asad was a usual in his AAK self which his hard fr zoya to take it .Cz she knw about the asad whom she meet each sat

Both HV feeling fr each other zoya is already excepted it but asad the AAK again dealing with dnt knw what ..Akdu

Love the Ice_ cream wala talk ..So both r going to miss each other

Continue soon n thx fr talking time fr this story ..Love ur work...

Hope u finish all.ur work soon

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Twinkle

@twinkie__

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

hey :)
thanks a lot for the res
it was an amazing updates
i loved the last part really, the way she made him relax and them holding back :( lekin kab tak
i hope to see them accept their feelings after two week away from each other

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

tweetieee!!!!!!!!!

mai aa gayi😛😛😛

hahh meko pta tha it can't be ts by it all 😆
so finally its a ss

and how beautifully you have written this whole icecream stuff slurrrppp
m so haapppyyy to comment here after a long a big bigiie comment
like i always wanted to because this icecream story is sar chadh k naaching on me😆
i am loving this sooo sooo much ❤️

getting on to plot...saturday evenings are best!!!
what i love the most about this till now are the convos asya have here
like they are so comfortable with each other without awkwardness in earlier parts...relationships like that are thee best thing seriously. feelings which you wrote showing how they grew fond of each other
and how icecream makes everything better is a step up process between the two which mostly stories me nh dikhta but here its thr n m loving this 😛

the previous part jb zoya gets to know AAK is asad hahha i enjoyed it so much actually all convos are such...like really light nd enjoyable read
if icecream makes everything better than this ss is no less! just a fresh read 😳😳👏👏

tune ending changes kiye jiske liye m happy ...zoya bhi theek h and i hope asad wouldd take a step to forgive tannu n let go of the hurt.

recent update jese aak describe kiya tune...sacchii m missing ksg as asad sooo much...mera akdu gentleman (a little reckless at times😆)

end was fantastic with asad behind zoya hayeee⭐️ must have boosted aak's repo lol but yes changes fr the good are better
like a change to icecream flavours.
life bhi icecream jesi hi h na...different flavours we expirence ,,..some bitter some gud but in the end we relish everything😃

mint choclate aaye haaye nd coffee🤪 iss story ko pdhne ka maza hi kuch alag h ye sbse unique h...

AND HOW CAN I FORGET!!!! mera favrt song u added !!!! and its suiting so much on this
even last night when i read this update i slept imaging asya on the song with icecreams😆 literally loving this so much after tu hi hakikat ye story tops the list😳😳
loving it so far tweetie
go cool
and update whn ur free😃😃
mai toh hu hi ab yaha...waitng waiting
and wanting wanting

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Okay...so first of all... I read all the chapters today only..

And I totally loved it...

Fresh story... different plot...but same asya...amazing..

Please update soon... cant wait to read what will happen next..

👍🏼

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Love the updates
Asya moments amazing at work and play
Love how he put mehek in her place
The great AAK
Awar was scared of zoya messing the deal
Aww her asad
So time pass they got closer
Asad.nnotice the change in her
But he is.scared to hope and give her hope
And zoya is scared of his rejection
So he is going away hope when he comes back he acknowledge what he feels
And she open up.too
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