AsYa(KaBhi)SS 'Ice-Cream Makes Everything Better' Last Parts, Pg 24

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Really very nice.
I was like I want to read next part right now
Somehow it's not letting me hit like
Sorry

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

enjoy reading the updates
I can see this turning to an SS
never thought I would see asad enjoying so much ice cream
they have gotten to know each other well
love the worry he had about her ailment
but he give her hope and she got a new bill of health
I am so glad you will make it happy for us
so the feelings made an appearance for zoya early and she accepted them
but she has kept it to herself bcuz she knew what he had faced
but asad has had this caring too but he is afraid to acknowledge it
glad the closeness they have grown tht they can joke and make fun
so zoya to work with the great AAK and she google him
imagine her shocked to learn who is AAK
AWW she was blushing at his teasing
so now they will work together
cont soon

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Thank deepu for double update

love the both parts n along with asad even i gt to knw so many flavours of ice-creams

ohh asad worried fr zoya's health n gald that she is fine now ... both r thinking about each other n waiting fr saturday

hehehe..the best prt zoya talking about AAK with asad only about the hotel project, luv her shocked expression to knw he is the AAK.

so waiting to see both of them interacting on professional way, hope they work together

best decision to add more parts is this story

waiting to read more n more of your writing

continue soon

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Unres...

Sorry for the late unres.. I am a bit busy nowadays.

So regarding the update.

First of all thanks for giving us double updates.

The updates were just...

Wow...

That was so nice.

So Zoya don't likes to see her Aapi and Jeeju worried because of her.

Loved the way Asad dealt with her.

"Sometimes we should cry."

The line made the whole scene.

I never knew that AAK can advise someone to cry.

While reading it I was craving for Ice cream.

So the great AKDU was eating and searching for ice cream.

HAHAHa Zoya asking Asad about AAk was so much fun.

The way Asad tried to stop her was so beautiful.

So Zoya took his phone number.

I am glad that she did that.

Asya official meeting is ahead I guess.

The scene where she told him about AAK and about his behaviour with girls was so lovely.

The way he retorted her saying that he should behave nice with girls was quite adorable.

So both are moving towards a right path.

Glad that Zoya's reports were normal.

Thank goodness she recalled Asad and wanted to be with him.

I wish they understand feelings soon.

So you going to give us cute Asya moments. Right?

Yippee. May GOD bless you😆

Update soon.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by MH2002 - 8 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

With zoya now asad too has become an ice cream lover

Every Saturday they wait for each other to share their thoughts and life's problm and they too find the solution also.

Unknown to each other they have a become a pillar of support and they give happiness to their minds n hearts

Looks like ice cream has truly changed their life

It was funny to the way zoya asked him abt the AAK and asad typical reaction.

Now they r gonna meet on Monday and sure they will be accompanied by their favourite ice cream too

Its good to see this TS becoming a SS and i m sure everyone here are loving too read it.

Keep posting such beautiful and awesome long updates.

~JAZ~

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

I am loving this story so much...
Asya conversations are lovely and so much fun...
I loved the part where Zoya fell into his arms 😳 😉
I can't wait to read on and see how it all plays out at the meeting!

Thank you for the PM
Update soon

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Twinkle

@twinkie__

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

This is getting so interesting!
I love part 4 more because there was nothing sad about it but amazing cuteness.
Her reaction on knowing he is AAK was awesome :-P
i really look forward to next update :-*

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Hellooo Dii...😊

First of all Thank You soo much for this dedication...

Coming to the update...

Note:

Ice-cream makes everything better...even though nothing is right...it feels better with a scoop of ice-cream..." That was the theme of this story... but here after I don't wanna go with what I have planned earlier... I just can't go with that sad route... If it was real life we couldn't change anything but accept the reality...but here in fiction I have that liberty and so I don't want such nasty happenings here... Hence I have changed the plot and you'll get some cute AsYa moments now... Hope you enjoy 😳

Kudos to you for this note...i totally agree on this with U and this is all what i had been telling here on this forum since my birth 😆

The first part was very good Di...and in a way i had missed reading such moments between ASYA after Ankie's story i guess...😆 , but on a serious note bahut aacha likha hai...

The song select reminded me of my Good Old School Days...very good selection...👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part..

Continue soonish...😊

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

The last part left me smiling all the way...

Deepti this one is a very cute ice cream filled story and then u make me want to eat ice cream all the time..

Ab next Kaun si khane ki cheek pe story and Wali hai..

I'm liking the whole feel..

Awesome.

Love you and please doosri stories pe bhi apni kripa drishti dale.

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Hello everyone

Thank you so so so much for liking and commenting for the last update

And I am again sorry for not able to reply back... But honestly I am really grateful for your love & support... It's really a lot and encouraged me to write further...

Okay, so here is the next update...or you can say another scoop of ice-cream... And I hope you enjoy...

Waiting for your reviews😳

❤️🤗❤️

--Deepti--