AsYa SS: Crossed Paths- Important Notice | Pg 79| 28-11-2018 - Page 10

Originally posted by: CuteMonsta

Pure! And beautifully written story.

Loved it..

A little slow moving one but, I loved the depth of emotions you entered into it making it extraordinary.

Keep writing it lil sista.

Big wala thumpy up for your beautiful work.

Take care and keep smiling.. Tata until next time!

Originally posted by: sanayasurbhi

Amazing update 😊
And the banner is very lovely nd an amazing work sans
👏
Coming to the part
Beautifully written 👏
From this part we got a glimpse of Asya's personality
here Zoya is a business woman
Nd a lonely girl who's craving for love nd care
One side asad who's going back to his motherland
But still he feel some uneasiness .but why?
Is he thinking about zoya?
Interesting !!!
Eagerly waiting to know how their journey become their destination
Continue soon appu

😳

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Wow firstly beautiful banner! Just loved it 😊

Coming to the update its beautifully written...😃

So zoya is a lonely girl here and asad has a family but still he is missing something

In childhood days she had a family staying at the apartment now there is no one means she has a terrible past related to her family

ASAD is missing zoya or someone else

Wow! Lot of suspense eagerly waiting for it to get unfold

Great work Arpita👏

And thank you so much for the res my sweetu shwetu🤗

Originally posted by: sasir

Interesting..
Loved it

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Unres

Finally read the first prt

Soory late unres ke lie .. first story or kitani beautiful🤗

Banner ne to mujhe QH ke first episode me yaad dila dia

Beautifully written arpu..

So asad had a family still something missing

and poor zoya is all alone n in London fr work come holiday ..Waitng to knw about her true friend ..

Both going to return India I guess ..Hope both plane😃 me mile while going back ..Mujhe aise first meeting bahut pasand hai 😆

Looking forward to nxt prt ..Update soon jab bhi time mile ..Will all wait

Originally posted by: anuv6

wonderful update...
wats with asad nd zoya ?? is they are related before ?? not...yess !!!!
wqiting very much eager fr ur nxt update...
update sooonish dr!!

Originally posted by: asya555

Awesome update
Love it
Plss continue soon

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Omaigod!!!

First of all a big big Congratulations for your first story!!

🥳

On a second thought, is it even your first?

Kaha thi aap?

Where was this writer hidden yaar!!

I was bowled over the first line itself, the prologue and the first chapter are delightful!

Yaar perfect choice of words, perfect essence

Everything was beyond amazing!!!

Sooo good!

And I am so excited!

Sooo excited yaar!!!

Di you rocked with this!

Why didn't u post this earlier!

This hidden writer and this surprise... Sooo happy

Seems so promising!

Loved it so much

Amazing

Totally awesome!

Update sooonishesty

P.s I loved the banner...its magical