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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Nice update

The starting of the chapter was beautifully written

And asad really shares a close bond with his family members

It will be interesting to see asad and zoya having their journey together

Soo Will zoya meet the famous business man AAK on flight or during the meeting

Continue soon and plzzz nxt time i want a long update

Thanks for the pm

~JAZ~

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1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Hello sista.. Sorry for late unres.

Read it last night around 3am and then fell asleep lol..

Hmm about the story.. It has progressed. Smoothly. And beautifully.

I loved it all..

Shireen as chachi made me surprised lol. And her taunt was sweet and Mr. AAK getting annoyed was cute. Lol.

On the other side, Zoya's scene was great. So she knows something about asad. That's great. But I want to know if they be in peaceful relationship or cat fights.

Hmm so sitting beside each other on a flight. Seems and smells interesting lol.

I just grabbed a big popcorn bag and 3d goggles but then the story ended. I wanted. To read. Till the end. Of the flight scene haha.

Chalo koi. Baat nai.

It was once again beautifully penned and plotted story. A. Little slow moving of course but I like the momentum.

Overall 10/10..

Continue as and when you get time. Don't neglect exams and studies.

Until next time, Tata lalala,

Urs cute lil (thoda big) bro,

-Cute Monsta

Edited by CuteMonsta - 8 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Nice update

At least the story is unfolding the way I expected

So asya met they r seat buddies

So both r from Bhopal both have to stop in Mumbai for work and it is their companies working together

Yay

So zoya has great respect for the AAK just hasnt had the privilege to meet him

Asad family looking for a bride for him he is running but how long can he run

So he is the pillar for his family a huge one he has

But what is this pained past he has that he pretends to be happy for his family

Plz dont let it be no lost love especially a tanveer one

Let zoya comes into his life and be tht love his soulmate

Zoya also has a sad past she is alone and now she runs her abu company

So will zoya turns to be AAK dulhan arranged

Or will my asya find love and comfort in each other b4 marriage

Cont soon

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Beautiful update
Asad has his past but he has his family with him
so shireen is his chachi
Asya in same plane
so they are going to deal with each other
excited for next update
update soon
thanks for pm

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Again Res fr
Dillu
Ashi
Addu
Somu
Anchal
Tehs

N all readers

Thanks Sweetu 🤗

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Jasmeet(Jass)

@-jass-

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

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aanchal

@Loving_life

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Wow! Aweeesome update👏

Loved it

Zoya is a strict boss loving her in this avatar😊

I thought asad and zoya had a past but they are meeting for the 1st time that's cool😃

Eagerly waiting for their traveling together and zoya ka reaction after knowing he is AAK

Continue Soon dear

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aanchal

@Loving_life

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

so finally they met !!!!...it 'll be interstng nd seems like zoya dnt knw the man beside her is asad !!
its really a nice update...waiting very much eager to knw wat 'll happen nxt
update sooonish !!!!