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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: anopama

Oh my god

You always leaves me craving more
I absolutely loved this
I am so sad when I see I was reaching the end
Loved asad and hsi teammates
Loved how they all lived zoya and cherished her
Their braveheart
Awe asad was a goner he thought she was gonna try to pick him up
Guess he was disappointed when she didnt
So he had to do the flirting
He realises tht not sll women has to be beautiful on the outside
Her beauty shines through
I believed him at the end he was a goner from the time she mention lab coat
His geek
Love it


Anopama darling! Hope you are doing good!
Thank you for your comments always! Lots of love and hugs to you!

XOXO
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

An amazing work Mojo..!!

Great job..
Loved it to bits..❤️
The Navy SEAL and their braveheart...
The devilishly handsome men and the girl scholar who is beautiful inside and strong...
Loved how all the men pampered and fussed over her
It was her quick thinking and observing quality which saved all of them
Awesome work..
😃


Thank you doll! I appreciate your kind words! Thank you for reading and leaving some love! XOXO
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
I had to retype again and again coz I could make out there was a problem with the word formation LOL.
Yes I did. I infact read twice before falling asleep. Will read again today. This is so so so so good and you deserve it all. ❤️
PLEASE GIVE US OS EVRRY SINGLE WEEK THEM I AM and HAVE BEEN DYING WITHOUT THEM FROM YOUR KITCHEN.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I had to retype again and again coz I could make out there was a problem with the word formation LOL.

Yes I did. I infact read twice before falling asleep. Will read again today. This is so so so so good and you deserve it all. ❤️
PLEASE GIVE US OS EVRRY SINGLE WEEK THEM I AM and HAVE BEEN DYING WITHOUT THEM FROM YOUR KITCHEN.


I really love your determination! I would have loved to have read what you wrote the first time!

HHAHAHA! That comment made my heart burst with feels. It has been some tough few weeks but writing and then seeing those kind of comments just makes your day! Maybe that's why I am writing a story that has been stuck in my head for the past two days! I wrote two paragraphs! LOL! Thanks love!

LMFAOOO!!! I work one weekend and then have the other off. My work weekend is coming up so I can't promise but I shall try for either Friday or Saturday this week if you wanna proof read my shit cus that takes another lifetime! sighs. no promises but I have started.

XOXOX


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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
I assure it was the same with a lot of typos 🤣
Haiyee your 2 paras mean, my full entire update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
It was awesome
Loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
This was so so so beautiful.
I love the length of your OS.
And I agree with ankie that u made the start of 2017 really nice with your wonderful writing.
Liked all of it.
Cant pinpoint one part which I liked more..

Please please do write more throughout the year.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan



Hey there lovely lady!
Wow three times! That makes me feel good! I am glad you enjoyed it and your kind words means a lot. I don't get to write a lot these days but these stories have become my solace, my time out from reality!

I promise to PM you in the future too! Your comment has made me smile! Thank you for reading! I haven't spoken to you here before, but then again I am never here. I have been playing hide and seek for the past two years! It's wonderful interacting with you! I appreciate the love and support!

Lots of love
Mojo
XOXO


Thank u for the promise buddy... 😊
I havent commented before coz I have joined IF 2months back...
I used to read all stories on asya before but now after joining I am reading them agian n try to comment whenever am free..
And it feels too good now to do it now...!! 😊

And it feels really good interacting with u too... 😊
Thanks for this os again...and i'll wait eagerly for your next!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Sooo beautifully written...
Nd soo vry emotional...i literally was crying reading it...vry heart touching story..
Nd mst say a long one...
Jst luvd evry bit of it...
Really vry well written...
Hats off to u
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
EPIC OS OF 2017...
AWESOME, AMAZNG ND SO REFRESHNG...mean new plot with very beautiful new chars
LUVD all the char's nd their luv towards zoya...LUVD the story very very much.
freaking gud...an epic one
very beautifully written, the chars , their relations towards each other nd ASYA...so so beautifully nd creatively written
felt like watchng a hollywood movie...LUVD it!!!!
going to read again !!!!
do cont ur amazng wrks

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