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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

An amazing work Mojo..!!

Great job..

Loved it to bits..❤️

The Navy SEAL and their braveheart...

The devilishly handsome men and the girl scholar who is beautiful inside and strong...

Loved how all the men pampered and fussed over her

It was her quick thinking and observing quality which saved all of them

Awesome work..

😃

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

I m speechless after reading this..

I mean i read it like 5 times and m searching words in dictionary to tell u how beautifully u have written.

What a story and i loved asad and zoya or should i say bullet and braveheart

Everything in the story kept me glued and i m in love with it

Such a big update and its good that u actually wrote it for all asya fans

Plzz keep posting such wonderful stories..

I wish it wasn't an OS coz i want to read more and more.

Okk enough now frm me

Thanks again

~JAZ~

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

Such A "Beautiful" Story Dear ...!!!
It Was Amazing ...!!!
And The Way It Has Been Written ... Its "Wonderful" ...!!!
Loved It Sooo Sooo Sooo Much ❤️ ❤️❤️

I just Love All Your One Shorts Dear ... They Are Always "THE BEST" ...!!!
Do Write More ...

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Another thing. I typed the comments without my spectacles. Which means i am practically blind.
Thought this might make you feel good about it like a compliment LOL

I bloody woke up to your comments this morning when I had to get up for work at 6am and it cracked me up! I don't know how you did it but you wrote perfect sentences! It does make me feel goood! HAHAHAH! Appreciate your efforts and kind words <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Nik03
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Hey dear...
I read this os three times already!!
And I loved it!!
I have read many stories on IF and I must say that your writing style is unique and special...I am in love with your writeups!!...They all are amazing!! 😊
Your stories are soo different yet so awesome!!
And this os is no different... 😊
Asad as SEAL...Oh Man!! 😳
Asad aka Bullet...impressive!!
I just loved Wolfe, Gunner...!!
And our Zoya ...aww!!
She's so courageous n brave!!...and stole asad's heart in just one glance!! 😳

Loved the concept, style , story , characters n everything about this one dear!!!
You are a one gifted writer...Hatsoff to you!! 👏

Thanks for the pm dear n plz do pm me when you update next...Would love to read!!
Plz dont ever stop writing on asya...keep writing!! 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Hey there lovely lady!

Wow three times! That makes me feel good! I am glad you enjoyed it and your kind words means a lot. I don't get to write a lot these days but these stories have become my solace, my time out from reality!

I promise to PM you in the future too! Your comment has made me smile! Thank you for reading! I haven't spoken to you here before, but then again I am never here. I have been playing hide and seek for the past two years! It's wonderful interacting with you! I appreciate the love and support!

Lots of love

Mojo

XOXO

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
ITS JUST THE PERFECT SIZE SO LOOONGGG! ❤️

MoJo I applaud you for writing out so big big big updates!

To make up for me being away and my commitment problems with FF's/SS's!

I think I am only posting OS'es from now on and can only commit to these long stories in one post!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -jerry-

I am glad!!!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nilorina
i love your stories they are the best
this was awsome 👏 i loved it
keep it up

Thank you reading! I am so glad you enjoyed it!! <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
It's 5:20am in the morning here ad I haven't slept a blink becoz I re read the story 4 times

My body needs sleep.

But I will read it once again before I sleep

This is the ULTIMATE OS I have read in JAN2017

NOT saying it to be the ultimate of the year because I want more MOJO OS TS FS SS FF whatever you gotta give us. :D

You absolute mad hatter!!

How on earth did you read it four times since I posted and how?! LOOOL!

Ultimate OS for Jan? Please girl, don't get me gassed!!

Mojo Os'es will be coming, mojo anything else idk... Hahaha I can only write on weekends but I just sat down after work to start another one that has been bugging my mind! Idk when it will be posted though!

LOTS OF LOVE AT YAAA! <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Chillichick
This was simply A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.'
Downright real and honest and nothing too over the top...

I liked the way how you made sure that every character from Asad's team had a chance to interact with Zoya.

This was like the perfect length for an OS!

Though can't say I wasn't disappointed that this ended...

Also certain scenes had to re read in order to figure out exactly who was talking because i was so excited to know what happened next that i probably missed a few lines here and there...!

You have got to write more of these!

Aashka

Hey doll! Hope you're doing well.

Thank you for your lovely comment! You always leave the perfect words for me to go all goo gah over! I didn't want to stop writing this one but it was just getting too long. (I cant even attempt to go back and fix my mistakes).

I will have more coming your way! I know I don't post or interact often, but I do appreciate your comments! Thank you!

Love XOXO