Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81 - Page 31

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Love it Plss continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asya555

Awesome update Love it Plss continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 6
Dilshad and Nazma followed him,they were in shock because asad never let anyone enter in Zoya's room from last five years and today he himself brought a stranger to the same room.Asad placed zoya on her bed and make her head comfortable by readjusting her cushion.He tenderly removed the hairs from her face and seeing the face of the person Dilshad gasped"Zoya"Nazma also shocked to see zoya.Dilshad turned to Asad for answers but he was busy in settling zoya's blanket.Dilshad was looking at her son keenly,it is true that she was happy to see zoya back in their life but she was confused too,her son who 8 years ago hated zoya suddenly stopped hating her five years ago and today he brought her and she had no clue of it."Asad tum kuch bataoge bhi ya nahi, what happened to zoya, why she is in hospital cloths"asked Dilshad sternly.Asad stared at his mother painfully. "I found her at mental hospital today"replied Asad.Dilshad gasped again how it could be possible asad zoya mental hospital mein kaise ho sakti hai??"I myself do not know ammi i did not know even that she is alive" ."Zoya ko toh uske abbu le gaye theina phir aisa kaise ho sakta hai, or what do you mean by that you did not know that she was alive?"asked Dilshad.Asad sighed dejectedly and told her everything.

Flashback starts

It has been one month since zoya left but asad has not melted a bit.Dilshad's health improves slowly and she was out of shock.When she came to know about Zoya's absence from their house and the reason behind her departure she got angry on Asad and was going to bring Zoya back from Siddiquis but Asad stopped her saying that he will not stay in this house if the killer of his father come to his house.Dilshad tried her best to make him understand that it was not zoya's fault but it was too late because asad's mind was full with hatered for Zoya and he was not ready to understand anything so Dilshas dropped her decision praying to her Allah that he will keep her safe from the clutches of selfish Gaffoor.

After three years
It has been three years since a father left his son alone to face the problems of the world ,it has been three years when a boy turned into a man of full rudeness and it has been three years since a beautiful home broke.Asad joined office after some time of Rashid's death,he made himself so much busy in office that he had no time to dwell into pain of losing two people of his family.One day
he was searching for his file and accidently come across a file which he did not give much attention before.After going through the file he came to know that it contains adoption papers of zoya.As he read further he came to know that Gaffoor had filed a case against Rashid three years ago regarding Zoya's custudy,as Gaffoor suddenly started to claim that his daughter has been forcebly snatched from him by Rashid .Asad was shocked to know that,he called his father's lawyer to know the detail about the case.The lawyer told him how Gaffoor threatened Rashid that he will take Zoya back from the Khans and file a case against him.Gaffoor had not any affection towards Zoya but he was interested in the property which was on Zoya's name.Zoya's grandfather made her heir of his all property and being a greedy man Gaffoor wanted the property so he claimed that Rashid tortured his daughter in his home but Rashid being a wise man saw his greed behind his fake concern.When Gaffoor filled case against him Rashid'd problems increased as Gaffoor was the biological father of zoya and his side became heavy.After hearing this asad realised why his father was so tensed on the day of his accident.Asad regertted his decision of letting zoya go.He did what Gaffoor wanted from a long time,he ruined his father's all efforts by letting his dost go away from their house to the greedy father.Now he also doubted whether Rashid got into accident or someone was behind all this.That night he was restless,he did not know how to mend his mistakes.After giving so much thoughts he hired a detective to know the real reason about the death of his father.After seven days he got detail of the accident that it was not zoya's fault but the truck was intended to crush the car in which rashid was traveling,and the accident was planned by none other than Gaffour siddqui.Asad's fingers fisted in anger and broke the glass of his window He was angry that zoya was innocent but her father was the one who committed a crime .But this time he decided to mend his mistake by bringing zoya back to their home.He will do anything to do this.He opened the Almirah and took the letter she left three years ago.He neither read it nor tore it but kept it aside in his cupboard.But today he want to know what she wanted to say that day.He unfold the letter and the first thing he noticed that she cut "Ashu" and wrote "Asad" instead.He remembered painfully how he forbid her to take his nik name.Sighing he stared to read:

Dear Asad
I am sorry Asad i swear i did not do it intentionally,i never wanted to Dost go away.I know i am responsible for yourr ab..abbu's death.I am going out of your life forever so that you do not have to see my fac..face again,i promise i will never show you my face.I am going with the person who says that i am his daughter.Take care of pho..your ammi and sister.Bye..
Zoya


Asad carresed the letter with his fingers tendery. Tears flowing out of his eyes realising what she had been gone through while leaving this house.But he was determined to bring her back from her greedy father.Next day he got another shock that the detective he hired had been killed in accident,this was huge blow on Asad because he was going to give him proof against Gaffour Siddqui today.Asad did not take a moment to realise who did this.He marched toward Siddqui's house and got another shock.The people of the house informed him that Zoya was dead one year ago.Asad could not believe what he heard.He did not believe them but Gaffour showed him all proofs of zoya being dead.He showed him her death certificate as well as all reports of zoya being hospitalised.Asad went hospital and met the doctor who treated her but he also gave him the same answer,this broke his every hope.

Ye Kaisi Kashmakash Hai,
Ye Kaisi Rehguzar Hai
Ye Kaisi Kashmakash Hai,
Ye Kaisi Rehguzar Hai
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Huyi Kya Mujhse Aisi Khata
Khuda Bhi Na Dikhe, Dua Bhi Na
Lage
Jahan Tak Jaaye Nazrein,
Dhuaan Hi Dhuaan Dikhe

Asad came out of hospital and walked aimlessly on the road without the care of anything.He remembered how he shouted at her last time how he wanted her to go away from their life.He came to hospital in hoping to find the truth as he did not believed the disgusting Gaffour but he lost every little hope.He broke down completely on the road

Ret Ka Mahal Woh Tha,
Lehron Mein Shayad Jo Beh Gaya
Ret Ka Mahal Woh Tha,
Lehron Mein Shayad Jo Beh Gaya
Khwaahishon Ka Aashiyaan,
Chand Saansein Lekar Ke Deh
Gaya
Rabba Khud Ke Hi Saaye,
Lage Aaj Paraye
Rabba Khud Ke Hi Saaye,
Lage Aaj Paraye
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Huyi Kya Mujhse Aisi Khata
Khuda Bhi Na Dikhe, Dua Bhi Na
Lage
Jahan Tak Jaaye Nazrein,
Dhuaan Hi Dhuaan Dikhe

He walked towards her grave and sit there crying his heart out."I will never
show you my face" reminding his mind the words written in the letter."ZOYAAA"cried Asad in his full lungs.

Zindagi Ne Ishq Mein,
Mujhe Aise Manzar Dikhaaye Hain
Zindagi Ne Ishq Mein,
Mujhe Aise Manzar Dikhaaye Hain
Palkon Pe Meri Sada,
Ashqo Ke Badal Hi Chhaaye Hai
Rabba Chain Na Aaye, Din Rein
Sataye
Rabba Chain Na Aaye, Din Rein
Sataye
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Huyi Kya Mujhse Aisi Khata
Khuda Bhi Na Dikhe, Dua Bhi Na
Lage
Jahan Tak Jaaye Nazrein,
Dhuaan Hi Dhuaan Dikhe

He remembered every taunt,every insult he shed at her when she tried to iniate a conversation with him."Come back zoya, please come back to me"cried Asad bitterly."Laut aayo zoya sirf ek baar aa jao"chand again.

Dard Ka Hai Silsila,
Seene Mein Ghum Be-Shumaar
Hai
Dard Ka Hai Silsila,
Seene Mein Ghum Be-Shumaar
Hai
Chaahatein Ek Mili Haan,
Mile Zakhm Mujhko Hazaar Hai
Rabba Pal Hi Mein Jaise,
Sau Khwaab Hai Toote
Rabba Pal Hi Mein Jaise,
Sau Khwaab Hai Toote
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Main Uljha Hoon, Pareshaan Hoon
Huyi Kya Mujhse Aisi Khata
Khuda Bhi Na Dikhe, Dua Bhi Na
Lage
Jahan Tak Jaaye Nazrein,
Dhuaan Hi Dhuaan Dikhe.

Asad reached his home and directly walked towards his room,Dilshad tried to stop him but he did not listen to her just said "not now ammi" and went to his room.Dilshaad became worried to see him in dishaveled state.Inside the room Asad broke everything in anger.He lost the person who was precious to everyone especially to his abbu and he was responsible for her death.He did a sin and there is no escape.From that night he never slept a peaceful night.

Flashback ends

Dilshad sat with a thud on the bed after hearing this,she had never thought about this possibility.Asad never told her anything.Asad sat near zoya's bed and holding her hands as if assuring himself that she is alive and with him.He will not let anyone to harm her in anyway including himself.He patted her face lightly to lulled her into a peaceful sleep after so many painful years.
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Done
ignores the mistakes please
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mera bhi Res
Baake Sab ka bhi Res
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Posted: 8 years ago
Muje lga aaj Arpi karegi bcs she was there when i resed
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Muje lga aaj Arpi karegi bcs she was there when i resed


Hahaha but Me jeet gaye aqj bhi
But I ress arpu ke lie bhi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav



Hahaha but Me jeet gaye aqj bhi
But I ress arpu ke lie bhi

Accha hai tumne kar diya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing part
Flashback was painfull nd almost clear everything
Asad get to know about gaffur
Rashid was upset due to Zoya's custody case
Nd gaffur is behind rashid death
Asad's heartbreak is beautifully written
To be honest he deserves it
Nd their is no Zoya in this part
now what happened next?
How will Zoya react when she woke up?
Waiting
Continue soon
Edited by sanayasurbhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
mera res..
unres..
Awesome update...
So Asad realised the truth that it was her father who is behind all the mishaps in his life
And felt guilty that he let all the efforts of his father go in vain
Loved this part..
So I hop Asad's part of past is cleared now..
Looking forward to know what exactly happened in Zoya's life..
Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago

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