Beyhad: a dark tale of unreciprocated love - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

yeah go ahead nd write ur idea, ATB :-)

tysm dear 😊

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

this is obsession to the extreme

this is so dark here

He would do anything for her

Only he havent kill yet

He even forced himself on her

Cont

thanks a lot dear hopefully you liked the concept asad's darkness is the reason I was not sure abt this os
And the os is completed dear

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Its something i have nt read till now...

Soo dark yet soo beautifully written.

The possessive asad was something i have not imagined...

Thanks for the pm dear.

~JAZ~

thanks a lot dear 😊
Glad you like it 😊

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Finally caught up with this amazing pieces work

This story has indeed left me breathless

The depth of emotions and obsession from asad was truly the main highlight of the plot

Felt really sad for zoya in the end

And asad's character was scary, vunerable, hated and at the same time the most loved character

Speechless with this work of yours

And in love with the plot

Guilty for not reading it before but lucky that I finally read it

Thanks for such a powerful and dark tale of unreciprocated love

Please do write more like this on asya

Looking forward to reading more from you

Sorry for the late reply and thanks for the pm😊

its ok dear I can understand we all are busy nowadays
Glad you took time to read 😊
Thanks for understanding asad I thought he'll be hated only nobody will the lovable side of him but really glad you noticed
Really pleased by your comment thanks again 😊

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

mera os kider hai 😭

I was working on it but couldn't complete it cuz of ma practical assignment but I will post the os soon very soon please wait for few more days dear I m sorry I am making you wait this much but really can't help it but I promise I'll post it within this week

I kinda crush on bad guys a lot you know, I guess everyone does 😆 I understand asad, he needed help I wish Zoya could be that and didn't act impulsively atleast after him pleading her not to hate him! Though she is human and completely justified for her impulsive behavior... you left a scope for alternate ending where she doesn't die and love or never ever has that accident and leaves, Asad is frustrated and doesn't bother her but hurts himself, zoya thinking sensibly and coming back helping him and eventually loving him or atleast take him out of insecurities. Okay fine I know zoya shud never return cos the chances are supposedly dim or she hates him but she can adopt the selfless and giving characteristics of Indian TV heroines right? can we have dramatic version? think abt it!

@-Starryphoenix- yeah he needed that and those tv drama type ending. ...I m extremely sorry dear but that doesn't goes with me ... that kinda frustrates me when they show their extra selflessness and mahaanta n all ... so I don't think I would be able to justify that kind of ending. Sorry again to disappoint you dear.
Thanks a lot for reading this
I hope you liked it
And if this ending or plot had disappointed u then I am sorry for that.

Wow that this Asad was bit hatke loved this do write more and do PM

Originally posted by: Sp8699

Wow that this Asad was bit hatke loved this do write more and do PM

thanks a lot dear
yup will surely pm you