Beyhad: a dark tale of unreciprocated love

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Hello peeps as I promised I m up with another asya piece this is for the first time I m writing a pure dark fiction and I m he'll nervous like really I m not expecting much but all my readers I have a request for u to please comment with suggestions I really need it plzzz please please be honest plzzz

BEYHADD:a dark unreciprocated LovE

A doctor injected medicine in the pale skin of a woman who was lying on her bed almost lifeless. There were numerous needles that were piercing her skin several wires were connected to her body with a machine ... a ventilator

"Mr Khan its been 5 years I think its high time we should set her free. Her body is already paralysed. These medicines are keeping her alive but no one deserves a life like this. Let her go Mr Khan. She won't wake up ever..."

Asad was listening to him patiently but with his each and every word his patience was wearing off and finally with his last words he lost it. He stood up from his chair and walked closer to the doctor. Doctor was scared really scared from him he knew he had said something he shouldn't have but he couldn't help it afterall he was a human too. From past five years he was giving this medicine to this patient he knew she is not going to wake up ever and the medicine was keeping her alive with the help of this ventilator otherwise she's just a body without soul. This ventilator that was keeping her alive but was just adding to her miseries her soul was caged in this lifeless body so finally he decided to help this caged soul which was begging for set herself free. Asad stepped closer to the doctor and slapped him with such a force that he fell on the ground. He again walked towards him and leaned upto his level grabbing him by his collars.

"You have dared to speak something like this today never do that again or else you have no idea what I can do to you. No one can separate her from me not even death. I know I am causing her so much pain that its worse than death but I can't help it I love her I can't live without her. I have to do this to keep her with me forever even if it hurts her..."

To say he was scared would be an understatement this man was obsessed with the girl to an extent that no one can imagine he was ready to punish her with the with full of miseries and pain to keep her with him the innocent soul was caged. He claims that he loved but was that really love or was it obsession even if it was love then his obsession has overpowered his love. He gave one last look to the girl feeling pity on her and went away.

Asad watched the doctor furiously as he went away he then turned towards the girl ZOYA his zoya the light of his darkness, the oxygen of his fire, his love his OBSESSION.

20 years ago

A skinny boy of almost 7 years was walking towards his classroom when a group of boys of his own class pushed him on the ground that was when an angel of almost his age came running to help him

"You're okay" she said in her melodious voice

He stood up with her help and looked at her clearly. Pretty beautiful these words weren't enough to describe her she was more than that. She had an aura that was pulling him to her he wanted to be around her but hell he didn't knew maybe she was a relative of any teacher over here as she was in her casual wears

"Yeah I m fine" he said finally

She gave him a beautiful dimpled smile and turned to the boys who pushed him looking furiously at them.

"How dare you !!!!!!! how can you him like don't you have manners."

"No we have not what will you do huh"

They laughed at her and pushed her this time the boy who she heled immediately ran to her and helped her

"These are bad boys please don't fight with them because of me."

"You don't know me just wait and watch"

Saying so she got up and pushed the guy who had pushed her and ran away. Those boys too ran behind her. She must be in danger thinking so he too ran behind those guys. She stopped near a class room they surrounded her. He was worried they were laughing at her

"Now tell us were are you going to run now you pushed me na now pay" Said the boy whom she had pushed

She sat down on the ground and started crying loudly. He was shocked he hadn't thought that she'd start crying like that ,was that her plan. They started laughing at her even more loudly but their laughter stopped hearing a loud voice

"What's going on here"

They all turned to see their principle. She too got up and started telling their story except the part where she pushed the boy. She told him how they pushed him how she helped and upon being asked they pushed her also and were going to attack her again so she ran away. The principal turned to asad to confirm what she was saying he said nothing but nodded in a yes. Then he (principal) asked those boys to follow him. As they were gone asad thanked the girl once again and went away.

Next day he heard that those boys were suspended for a week and also a new girl was going to come well he already knew who she was though not by face. She was Zoya Siddique the only grand daughter of their principal Mr Gaffur Siddique who was coming to dehradun for the first time after birth before she used to live with her maternal aunt because her parents died after an year of her birth in a car accident. Siddiques were family friends of khans they knew each other inside out.

As the teacher along with a sweet pretty girl entered the class the whole class started hustling bustling. Asad was shocked to see the same girl who helped him yesterday. How could he miss this he should have guessed. He heard teacher asking her to take a seat he almost jumped in excitement maybe she'll take a seat beside him but as he saw other students making place for her he became sad why would she sit beside a geek boring boy like him when she had a option of almost whole class. But soon the girl came to his bench asked him to make a seat for her he was gaping at her did she wanted to sit beside him soon he made a seat for her, she sat beside him and extended her hands for him.

"Hi I m Zoya Siddique... friends?????"

"Asad Ahmed Khan and yes friends"

Asad hadn't expected this the whole class wanted to be friends with her but she chose him... him who rarely had a friend because they thought he was weird and boring. She was basically his only friend over here. He was glad that zoya has chose him to be her friend and he will make sure that he always will be her friend even if she doesn't want that. That day was a start of a new relation between them friendship ,a friendship which was going to be filled with possessiveness .

After a week those boys were back to school. It was lunch time she was going to the canteen they again started bullying her though zoya taught them the lesson again but in the process she hurt her knees badly. When she went to the corridor where asad was waiting for her he saw her knees and asked her about it she told the whole story and how she hurt her knees cuz of amad (one of those bully boys). Hearing that asad got furious and asked her to go to the as he needs to go to the library to which she obliged as she went to the classroom he too went straight to the corridor where amad was alone.

"You hurt her" asad asked furiously

There was something in his tone that scared amad.

"She herself hurt her knees I didn't do anything"

"But it was cuz of you"

"Yes so what" amad too got furious now

"You shouldn't have hurt her. No one dares to hurt my friend."

Saying so he started moving towards him (amad) due to this action of asad amad got scared as no one has ever seen asad like this , he started moving backwards but he couldn't move far away from him as there was stairs. But asad didn't stopped he kept moving and pushed amad from the stairs and soon he realised what he had done so ran from there before anyone could notice him. Next day they got to know that amad has fractured his right leg and his hand too is badly injured cuz he fell from stairs of corridor.

Asad has always been a loner after his parents' divorce his father got his custody who soon got married again. He never paid attention towards asad as he was too busy in enjoying his married life with his new wife who too wasn't interested in him true his father provided him all the luxury but he couldn't provide him the security attention and care that he needed. This made asad feel unwanted that's why when zoya showed him the care and choose to be friends with him he felt wanted and cared for the first time so he couldn't help but feel attached to her.

5 years later

"Asad I m going to my grandma's place for a month I m sooo excited to meet her"

"What how could you zoya how can you leave me alone"

"Its just for a month asad and we will Skype each other everyday right"

"But still won't you miss me zoya I am your best friend right"

"Yes I m going to miss you but I want to meet her too it's been five years I haven't met her after my aunt's marriage"

"Okay I too am coming"

"Really you would. ... but your dad he won't allow you."

"Who's going to inform him I won't"

"Asad you're mad that's not right you should take his permission."

"Zoya please don't go how will I spend a month without you"

"Asad I need to go please understand"

"I was right you don't consider me as your best friend that's why you are leaving like everyone did"

"Asad please don't say that you are my best friend but I need to meet my grandma too she is missing me and she is not well"

"Okay fine go"

Next Day she was leaving to her grandma's place but before that she went to meet asad but was shocked to see asad had badly hurt his head he was in his bed his legs and hands were also injured

"Asad what happened how did you hurt yourself" she was literally on verge of crying

"I fell from the roof"

"What?????? Are you mad asad what were you doing there"

"Why do you care huh you were going to grandma's place right... go..."

"Are you mad how can I leave you like this I'll tell nanu that I can't go there I'll meet her any other time she just got mild fever beside you need me more "

"Really you aren't going"

"Yes you idiot I can't go there leaving you like this"

He smiled he knew she couldn't leave him if something happened to him that's why he knowingly fell from the roof to stop her.

5 years later

"Asad look at that girl don't you think she's pretty"

"Maybe why are you asking this"

"Maybe asad ofcourse she is are you blind or you need your specs back."

"Zoya please don't remind me of my specs I m still offended that you made me leave them and now I have to wear contacts."

"Oh really here you should be thankful to me that I made you leave that old fashion and here you're getting offended on me seriously asad just look around these girls they so badly want your attention that it almost irritates me listening to pleas on talk to you about them and you won't believe me some even hate me cuz they think that I m your girlfriend."

Asad was firstly irritated as she was again trying to hook him up with someone but smiled hearing that some believed that she is his girlfriend. That sounded good to him his zoya belonging to him. With time many things had changed he wasn't the same geeky scared guy anymore infact he was a hot handsome rough and tough guy who was ready to break anyone's bones to protect her she liked this side but it somewhere irked her as he was always overprotective, she has grown into a really beautiful lively girl. But few things hadn't changed that was his obsession with her it has increased with each passingday. He never let her befriend with anyone especially guys and as they all were scared of him so never tried to come near her and whoever tried he has to face asad's wrath much to her irritation she always used to complain about it as she needed some fun in her life but he just used to say that he is protecting her. And zoya being zoya started trying to hook him up with someone so that she could clear her way but much to her disappointment he wasn't interested in any girl over here. Girls of almost whole college and some guys too šŸ˜‰ threw themselves on him but he wasn't interested in them. Little did she knew that asad has already chosen her for him yes with time he has realised that he was in love with her but he never said that aloud cuz he knew she didn't felt the same and these proposals which she always came up with always declared the same. True that hurt him but he decided to be patient as he was sure that anyhow she'll become his all his till then all he has to do is to make sure that no one could snatch her away from him.

Sighing she got up and was about to go but asad caught her hand and made her sit beside him. She sat beside him and put her head on his shoulder making him wrap his arms around him.

"Why are you so abnormal."

"Abnormal me??????"

"Hmmm look around asad so many girls throw themselves on you but you never pay attention every guy prays for the attention which you get and here you don't care about it."

"Zoya you know I don't like these stuff"

"I know that's why I am askin ... why??????"

"You know why cuz I want only one girl to belong to me and for I need to belong to her only too na. Zoya I have seen how much it hurts to be played around whenever I meet my ami. She still couldn't get over my abu whereas he keeps changing his wives or girlfriends once he satisfied with them I don't want to do that with anyone"

She sat up straight gaping at him and immediately hugged him tight with tears streaming down her face. She never realised what he must be going through all these years of his life

"I'm sorry asad I never thought that I was just busy in finding ways to have fun around that I never. ... I m sorry"

"Hey it's ok please don't cry zoya you know I can't see you crying please stop"

She broke the hug and gave him a beautiful smile even with a tear stained face. He smiled at her cuteness and wiped her tears

"I never knew asad ahmed khan can ever think so romantic and deep. You know now I m glad that you didn't agreed cuz I liked that idea of yours belonging to someone"

Yes you will too belong to someone zoya and that would be me only and only me he thought

3 years later

"Asad I can't deny nanu it's kind of a family tradition my whole family has studied from that university only."

"Even I can't make dad agree to let me take admission in your university cuz I have to change my subjects if I do so as seats in our subject are already full. I should also have applied in same university as you but I thought first I should convince dad or you would convince nanu... I myself dunno when dad applied there on my behalf"

"Isn't there any other way"

"Only one we'll have to study from india only."

"Nanu won't agree"

"He won't let me miss this opportunity asad."

"Even dad won't but I m still going to do that can't you do that"

"I can't deny my nanu asad you know that. He has been dreaming about this day for long time and when his dream finally got fulfilled how can I deny him. But I'll talk to him for you but I am pretty sure he won't agree and asad please don't miss this golden opportunity for me"

"So you're leaving me fine go I won't stop you"

" Asad we'll stay in touch"

"Bye"

"Asad listen to me... Asad"

He had already hanged the phone till now.

Gaffur Siddique was crossing the road and was about to reach his car when a speeding car hit him and before anyone could stop the car or note its no it flew away from the sight of everyone present there. No one noticed but the car stopped few km away from them and asad stepped out of the same car he wiped his guilty tears as he knew he has done wrong but he had to that or zoya would have gone faraway from him and this time not even his death could have stopped her so he came with this way.

"I m sorry nanu I know I have done wrong but you shouldn'thave tried to snatch her from me how can you even think anything like that... she's like breath to me I can't live without her. I had to do this you left me no choice. Now cuz of you I had hurt her too but I promise I'll be with her always" he said to himself wiping his own tears

Few minutes later zoya called him informing him about her nanu's condition hearing her sobs he wanted to kill himself he never wanted tears in her eyes and here he knowingly had given them to her. He immediately rushed to the hospital straight towards icu where her nanu was admitted. As zoya saw him she ran towards him and hugged him as if her life depended on him. She never needed him as much as she needed him now. She needed him to tell her that her nanu would be fine moreover she needed his emotional support. He somehow managed to make her sit on the nearby chair and made her drink a glass of water. Few hours passed but there was no news of her nanu he was consoling her but he too was scared. After few minutes doctor came out and told them that her nanu is fine but he can never walk now. Zoya stumbled on the ground as she heard that she couldn't believe God could be that cruel. Asad again enveloped her in his arms caressing her hairs trying to console her

"I know zoya I have hurt you by hurting your nanu but he left me no choice I am sorry zoya... I am sorry"

Few days later they got admission in one of the prestigious college of India for their masters as she can't leave her nanu when he needs her the most and also she can be with asad as he too hasn't taken admission in London to be with her saying that right now he needs to be with her to which she was glad.

2 years later ... the day

"Ayaan proposed me"

"A...and what did you say."

"What would have I said... I said I need time"

"You should have said a clear no to him he's not a right guy for you zoya and how dare he to propose you"

"Then who is it asad if not him then who ... every time if anyone tries to come near me you scare him and make him run away such that from next day either I don't see him again or he's so scared to even look at me. Why is it always you who decide what's good for me what not for God's sake I m big girl I can make my own decisions"

"You want to why I am always like this right then listen to me zoya that's cuz I love you dammit!!! I love you not from now but since the time I have laid my eyes on you that time I didn't knew what it is but I knew that I wanted to be with you. You're my everything zoya every damn thing and trust me zoya no one in the whole can love you like I do what do you mean to me you've no idea."

"Asad. ... how I mean... I " She was too shocked to react her best friend was openly declaring his love for her and she didn't know what to say whether to be happy that he has got someone who he loved with all his heart or cry that she can't reciprocate that love cuz she didn't loved him like he did

"Look into my eyes zoya can't you see immense love for you in it. You only used to say na that you can read me like an open book once you look into my eyes so what do you see in them. I love you so much zoya that it scares me sometimes that even I don't have any idea about how deep can I go in your love"

She looked into his eyes and saw immense love, passion, care and lots of emotions in them but more than that there was something else something dark which she couldn't name something that was empowering rest of emotions but she didn't cared about that as rest of emotions made her eyes teared up which was noticed he immediately cupped her face and wiped away her tears

"Shhh zoya you know I can't that in your eyes love" She was feeling more guilty how can she tell him that she didn't loved him. They both were looking into each others eyes, she was trying to find out something in his eyes which once used to give her the ease to speak anything but couldn't as right now he wasn't her best friend he was her lover. She watched him as he dipped his head towards her taking her into a dominating kiss. She was too shocked to react neither could she respond nor could she push him away she was scared to hurt him. He nibbled her lips asking her to respond making her gasp and taking the opportunity he entered her mouth she didn't knew what was happening she just stood there like a statue trying to gather all this. He broke away from the kiss breathing heavily she wanted to say something but couldn't as she again felt him moving his hands towards her waist in a seductive manner and again he dipped his head in her neck kissing and suckin her delicate skin. Tears streamed from her eyes, her mind was screaming to stop this and that this is wrong she's giving him false hopes but she didn't had the courage to stop him but as she felt him moving towards her chest and kissing the skin just above her breast she pushed him. She herself dunno when he opened first few buttons of her shirt.

"This is wrong this can't happen this is wrong" breathing heavily she whispered as she buttoned her shirt hastily

"Zoya nothing is wrong we love each other. " He said moving towards her trying to kiss her once again but she pushed him

"No I don't asad I don't love you. I am sorry" Asad didn't wanted to believe that this is not true his mind screamed she is just making a hasty decision

"No this is not true... zoya listen to me just think about it with a calm mind okay. ... if you didn't liked whatever just happened it's ok I won't try to come near you unless you want me to but please don't make such decisions cuz of that"
He pleaded that made her even more guilty but she can't keep him in dark she can't tell him that she loves him when the fact is that she didn't ,true she cared for him more than anything but that's not love and she dunno whether she'll ever love him back or not. If she said yes now for his and couldn't love him ever that would mean that she'll be betraying him and that will hurt him even more or probably that'll break him cuz she knew what she and that relation means to him. It's better to hurt him now than breaking him later maybe he'll break their friendship, atleast he'll move on but will she be able to survive without his support and friendship she can't imagine herself without that but she can't be selfish right now. Sometimes friendship and friends become such an important part of your life that you can't imagine yourself without them that relation becomes more than just friendship but that can never be termed as love their relation was just like that.

"Its not cuz of that asad ... its just that I don't feel the same way you feel for me I can never imagine you as my lover I am sorry asad but I don't love you I can't. "

"Is it cuz of that ayaan I am not going to leave him if it. ..."

"If it what asad?? What if it is cuz of him what are you gonna do to him" It wasn't cuz of ayaan she's never been interested in him she said she needed time to him cuz he has proposed in front of many people in canteen and if she'd have denied in front of everyone then that would have meant she is insulting him. In fact she was not at all interested in anyone as right now she just wanted to focus on her career and her nanu who needs him although there are people to take care of him but she loved her nanu and taking care of him made her happy. Right now she felt something odd in his behaviour she had never seen him like this what he wanted to do with ayaan if it's cuz of him.

"Is it "

"What if it is."

"Tell me clearly zoya is it"

"Before you tell me what are you gonna do if it is. "

He said nothing just grabbed her hands and pulled him towards his secret room in the house where he never let anyone to enter not even his father or zoya. It was big room completely filled with pictures of them and also there were also many things that she thought she lost along with the gifts that she's given him.

"You wanted to know what's in this room right go on its all yours"

He freed her hands indicating her to go on further. She took tiny steps inside the room and gasped seeing their huge portrait when did he made that. The portrait was of the day when they'd first met and she helped him to stand straight her eyes filled with the tears she was feeling more guilty now she was cursing herself why can't she love him back she didn't deserve all this she didn't deserve his love neither his friendship he has always cherished each and every moment of their friendship and in return she's just hurting him. She moved to another portrait it was of the day when they became friends on of the best days of their lives next one was of their first friendly hug it was when he gifted her a bracelet which she wanted for so long but couldn't get it as someone already bought. He forced shopkeeper to tell him who the person was though shopkeeper couldn't tell him much but he told him about the looks of that lady who bought it. Without her knowledge he searched her for whole two days and finally found her. He spent his all savings to get that bracelet back he paid that lady much more than its actual price. A bracelet that worth just few hundreds he made it more priceless much more precious than any other jewellery, she still wore that bracelet even though it was old, colour had faded and also looked old fashioned but it was most precious jewellery on earth for her. She again moved towards other portrait it was of the day when she had kissed his cheeks in excitement the whole day she had ignored him not knowing how to face him much to his frustration there were many other potraits that held so many memories of them. Now she moved towards her pictures which she herself dunno when he had taken. Now she moved towards the paintings that were uncovered she turned towards him. He came forward and removed clothes from all the uncovered portraits one by one. She gasped as she saw the portraits those were pictures of what seems like asad had thought would be their after they will become one. Asad moved towards the picture where he was on his knees confessing his love to her

"Zoya these are my dreams , my life these are what I had dreamt for us since the day I had realised I loved you my only aim and only dream have been to fulfill these. See this portrait clearly zoya this is how you wanted your dream man to confess his love for you right in amidst of clear night sky stars twinkling above us you looking ethereal in the white gown and your dream man looking like a prince in white on his knees confessing his love for you. Sorry I changed the colour of the suit cuz you only said black suits me the most and also I couldn't confess to you like this zoya I wish you would give me a chance to make it up to you... I myself dunno zoya when I made your dreams mine or when I become part of your dreams but I did now these are only what I have"

She closed her eyes letting tears fall from them his pain was hurting her too. He moved to another portrait.

"No asad you. ..."

He cut her in between

"This is how you wanted your first date to be again in a open night sky with moonlight showering us at the beach a setup decorated with candles I have always dreamed this zoya but with an addition that I would throw you in the water I know you would hate it but its fun to tease you"

"Our first close dance as a couple"

"Asad please stop" She pleaded him but he didn't paid a heed to her pleas

"Our first kiss again I ruined it for you but I will make it up to you"

There were many such pics like him proposing her, their marriage, Her first birthday after marriage, she holding their child, their perfect family, them getting old etc. She kept pleadin him to stop as those portraits were making her even more guilty but he didn't stopped until the last portrait. All those portraits were like asad had painted her dreams in them but with him being her dream man but reality was not that in reality she didn't loved him she wished she could.

"Don't love me this much asad I don't deserve any of these"

"That's upto me to decide isn't it "

"Its hurting you"

"I only choose this pain"

"I wish I could reciprocate your love but I can't"

He came towards her and cupped her face joining their foreheads he said

"Why zoya am I that bad that no one loves me first ammi choose her freedom over me abbu choose his lust over me and now you've chosen that ayaan over me"

"Its not about ayaan asad its about me I can't betray you cuz the fact is that I have never imagined you like that I can't, right now my only priority is my career and my nanu I want to take care of him he needs me in bw all these I never had time to think about love I always thought that it will find Its way in my life but it didn't atleast not till now. I don't want to give you false hopes asad you're my best friend you mean a lot to me I really dunno will I ever be able to see you like that or not I really don't"

Asad's mind was numb to register everything what she said he didn't wanted accept that she didn't felt the same way he felt for her. In between whatever she said he just registered her nanu's name it was cuz of him he got furious and moved away from her

"So it's your nanu huh that man always tries to take you away from me I guess previous lesson wasn't enough for him that time just his legs were broken I'll see to it that this time he won't remain alive to take you away from me"

A loud slap echoed in the room she slapped him . Zoya couldn't believe that her best friend who happens to be her idol could do that to her nanu.

"How could you asad"

"He was taking you away from me "

"You almost killed him." She shouted

" I'll do that to anyone who will dare to separate you from me infact I have, remember today you said that whoever tries to come near you is either too scared to even look at you or is not seen from next day that's cuz I do something like this to them"

"Are you the same asad who was my best friend or I failed to recognise you" she can't believe he was her same innocent asad who was her best friend she thought she knew him inside out but this guy was someone else who she didn't knew

"Zoya I am the same asad your asad" he said cupping her face

"No my best friend was so innocent that he can never try to hurt anyone even in his dreams but you did that already. You almost killed my nanu. I hate you asad I hate you." She said in a low voice removing his hands from her

"No you don't"

"I do"

"Zoya please don't say that just forget everything what I said please but don't hate me"

"I hate you asad you only made me do that. And tomorrow I m going to leave this country forever with my nanu"

Saying so she turned away to leave him but he cached her wrist and pulled her towards him

"You're not going anywhere" he said in a dangerous tone making her shiver in fear

"I will."

She said in a determined voice she herself dunno how she got such courage to answer him back. Soon she started struggling in his grip but he didn't let her move away . Gaining her all strength she pushed him with all her might making him stumble on the ground and was about to run away but her feet got stuck in something and she fell on the ground hurting her head badly with away metal object. Asad felt as if his world fell apart in just one day the girl who he loved with all his might, the girl for whom he crossed all his limits has first rejected his love and was now lying lifeless on the ground. He tried to wake her up but she didn't he immediately picked her up in his arms and went towards the hospital. He didn't informed her nanu about this cuz for him he is the reason behind everything happened today he wanted to kill him but he somehow controlled himself cuz he wanted to be with zoya now. Doctors had taken her to the OT. After what seems like eternity one doctor came out and informed him that she doesn't have much time and he should meet her one last time. To say that he was furious can't justify for what he felt that time he grabbed the doctor's collar and threatened him that if he wants to see himself and his family alive he has to make sure that she is alive. The doctor tried to make him understand that she can't be saved but asad was in no mood to understand. Finally the doctor told him about a cure he told him that he can give her a medicine which will help her to keep alive but only on ventilator and also that she'll never wake up. He immediately agreed to that he just wanted her alive with him forever in whatever way possible.

PRESENT

"How can that doctor say something like that zoya he wants me to kill you I know you are sleeping in a peaceful slumber and won't wake up ever but my only hope to remain alive is you how can I let you go. I need you for myself you are that drug to me that keeps me sane that helps me to breathe. How can I let you go I know you hate me for this but still I won't let you go ever." Said asad holding her hands near his heart

After that day at the hospital he had taken zoya away from dehradun no one knew where they were. They tried to search them but couldn't find them. Asad too had disappeared he had changed his name identity everything now they lived in New York away from everyone in his own world which just has his zoya and him. Gaffur after some days got to know about zoya's accident but he didn't knew that she's alive. He tried to contact asad but to no avail he knew that asad loves her madly and he trusted him he can't do anything wrong with her so he guessed maybe whatever happened asad couldn't take that which must be the reason that he left everything behind. He had no hope that she could be alive as hospital staff already told him about her condition what they didn't told him was what asad did. That he had gifted her a life full of miseries and numbness.

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I never knew u write on this forum u ought to continue nd complete this girl!

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Reading the title I thought it ws an FF but seriously what a splendid dark piece!! I can definitely understand why u didn't expect much cos I had gone through a similar mindset during Apetalous :-) nyways coming to this it is so so so unique I kindaa have a thing for passion and dark :P I have just read it more than five times and cannot get enough of it :-)

PS can u write something on teacher student love story? phuleez I wanna read something like that but sadly there isn't such stuff around :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow that was truely dark
Asad was mad man
He became psycho in order to keep zoya to himself
Amazing story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm always dieing for dar dark stories.
Loved it.
Amazing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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resss...little busy these days...
will comment soon...
i was also one of the big fan of asya...i used to watch Qubool Hai...but left it in the middle when KSG left the show...
will comment soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

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I never knew u write on this forum u ought to continue nd complete this girl!

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Reading the title I thought it ws an FF but seriously what a splendid dark piece!! I can definitely understand why u didn't expect much cos I had gone through a similar mindset during Apetalous :-) nyways coming to this it is so so so unique I kindaa have a thing for passion and dark :P I have just read it more than five times and cannot get enough of it :-)

PS can u write something on teacher student love story? phuleez I wanna read something like that but sadly there isn't such stuff around :-)

Yup I do write here too I m a huge asya fan but only till ksg was a part of it later on they ruined it with black magic stuff
lozzz ff is not my thing it suits writers like you
Apetalous was your splendid job really you didn't needed to be unsure about that but when u try something new you can't help it
dark and passion well I love them too and especially with asya I always imagine them like that only cuz their was something in their pair they had lot more potential than what they show on tv lot more passion but...
More than five times imma dead🤢
Thanku thanku thanku thanku Thanku 🤣
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Teacher student well tthat's something I haven't thought of but surely will write but you'll have to wait yaar cuz kinda busy with studies as exams are nearing but will write
and I would be greatful if you could help with it like what do you want to read in it


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Wow that was truely dark

Asad was mad man
He became psycho in order to keep zoya to himself
Amazing story

Tysm dear
I really am glad that you liked the concept cuz I was so unsure abt it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

I'm always dieing for dar dark stories.

Loved it.
Amazing.

🤣 Me too
tysm dear glad that you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U did a great job
I am speechless..
1šŸ‘for the great work
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Its perfectly fine though I'm an impulsive best I can have patience here I know the beyhad dominance university got in our livesšŸ˜† what you want me to elaborate? umm abt the cliche angle? maybe where Asad is a lecturer and Zoya the one who bunks class they aren't related to each other but whenever they collide immense sexual tension resurfaces, college gossips name keeping for teachers, drooling and some intense confessions :P

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