AsYa (KaBhi) Lyrical FS : Tu Hi Re... Part 3 - A/B, Pg 18 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Wonderful start..

Aaj kal sab cheek mein suspense dalti rehti ho😆

Mast start..

And seems Assad is very very lonely..

Next part kab aa raha

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Hello and welcome to Tweetie's new FS 🤗
Thanku fr supporting her always and wud be happy to knw the love keeps showering on here too.
I have loved the way This Story is flowing with the lyrical beauty and hope you all enjoy that much as well. please leave your valuable comments and likes to this brilliant writer who keeps coming up with interesting plots to keep us entertained. 😃
RES fr all who've been on every journey of my tweetie. nt only her bt I too read the comments u leave so looking frward to ur words here too 😉 .

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

mera finally 😆
pehli baar apne khaaye hue posts sahi istemaal kiye h mene 😆 😎
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mera unres toh mene already kr diya tha review deke...
pr ofcourse I hv to say that the end is touching
last ka I didnt got to read.
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I love asad ...how he is with suhaani. 😃
the little one is going to play cupid apne buddy k saath milke 😆
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next update bhi bohat achi h...I shud better shut up nh to abhi chalu ho jaungi. 😆
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aur jisne bhi last line padhi meri idhr aao kuch bata du...that next update is ready n awesome.
fatafat ispe acche acche likes barsaao so that tweetie khush hoke update krde 😉

Such a beautiful start ..but itani jaldi finish kyu kr dia ..

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Sweetie...yeh achha kiya tune jo intro de di characters ki 😊

wo last part maine 10 mints me add kar diya...you know na sandwich khate khate 😆

Sweetie next ready hai but next to next ka kya...ab toh likhna hi padega...

hehe mene socha k ko dekh ke kis kis ke mann me love triangle k bhayanak khayaal na aajaye 🤣 to de dala intro😉😉
bas toh fir aur sandwiches khaa aur likhte jaa. mene jaan much k bola ki ready h part so that tu 3rd wala bhi likhle 😎

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Awe Swetiee 🤗🤗

Love you ❤️

tweetiee 🤗 🤗

love u too ❤️

A new story
Beautiful Deepti
first part did not give much clarification but it was lovely
loved asad and suhaani's bonding
he is her ashu
she was convincing him to meet zoya i think
eager to know what happened between them
please update atleast one part of 'you are mine'
thanks for pm and res too
update soon

A beautiful start...

Thanks for the RES too..😃

Loved it..
I can understand Hindi but not in depth..
So can't really understand poetic ones like this..
Can u plz if possible give translation to those lyrics...
Plzz
N yes plz update you are mine too ...
Can't wait to read next updates of these two...