New Asya OS ~ Final Destination ~ - Page 5

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank you so much for the RES Jas and also for the Dedication...

Aur koi ni yeh lelo ji meri taraf se aapko ek GIF...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Coming to the OS...

Finally i also reached my destination i mean this OS at last...

Mujhe sarcasm ki buu aa rahi hai🤔😆

Khair keeping that aside...i really enjoyed reading this OS Jas...

Maine jo likhi hai 😎

It was an Amazing and Well written part...

Meko thoda Balcony jump ko imagine karne mein pareshani hui thi ki Asad ne kaise manage kiya tha...

Creative liberty bhi koi cheej hoti hai Mayur... is it necessry ki choti choti batein bhi note ki jayein😕... u pick out so many mistakes

Par socho Bandey ne itni mehnat ki aur badle mein ussko chaped padd gayi...😆

Harkat bhi toh aisi ki thi aisi situation main aur kya milta usse😆

But yes the condition which Zoya was going through is serious...and it was like an immediate reaction...

Sahi pakde hain😆😉

On a serious note the social thing discussed here is such a curse in our society , I toh have read and seen even worst scenario of like a married 50+ guy with a 15 year old...but keeping that aside...just like the one Bano is discussing in her story...so Kudos to you too for bringing up this topic...👏👏

I really don't know how i managed I thought i'll mess up & it will look unconvincing.. naya genre tha 4 me u see😆

I just wish all of those women and girls who comes out of this hell get a lady kum Farishta like Dilshaad in their lives...toh inki life sudhar jaaye,..

Ameen😊 but on 2nd thought wish aisa kisi ke saath ho hi na

Dilshaad's bond with Zoya is always a treat to read...and no matter what Dilshaad Zoya ko dekhke apne sagey bete ko bhool toh jaati hai...😆

I gave same reply 2 Bestu ki main Asya se jyada Dillu Zoya bond jyada lovable create kar deti hun... but yeh khud b khud ho jata hai😆

I liked that prank part to...

All and all a lovely update..

Continue soonish with the update of #HUMNAWAH and #SAB TERA and that other OS too...😊

Laalch buri bla hai ROFL🤣🤣

Take care...

And enjoy your SWISS TRACK...😆👍🏼

Swiss ki baat na kar BKT mila hume 😭😭

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

INDEED 😆 THQNKS FOR THE RES !



tumhare liye special kiss humare hero se

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

first of all, once again congratulations Mayur for turning into a sizzler !! 👏🥳



yeh party tumhari occasion ke liye, Zoya ki nahi ! 😆😉

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

Jaana ki Jaana ka kya kehna ? 🤗👏

Nahi nahi kaho please 😆 chup na rahoo.. bilkul na raho😆😆

see ?the first after so long, tumhara work padha ! 😆 ab itne arsey baad comment kar rahi hoon ke main woh art hi bhool gayi hoon, koi baat nahi, Asad hai mujhe comfort dene ke liye 🤣

MAin hun na hausla bdane ko Janna😆😛 & nahi bhi toh koi ni apna hi thread hai koi competition nahi hai🤣 kayi baar maine bhi bakwas comnt diye hain... uff remembering them right now😳😆


ab yeh na kehna ke iss gif ko dekh kar tum dreamy naho ho gayi 😉😆

Pika Pika🤣


anyways, this was a beautiful work Jas !! 👏
It feels so good hearing something anything from u after so long😭.. I missed u..& Love u 4 d reveiw🤗 main ganda bhi lagun u sab log acha hi bolte ho😳😆

it's hard when u have no REAL family to rely on, aur yahan pe tog Zoya ke duuur ke rishtedaar 😡😡😡
aise kaise bech sakte hain kisi insaan ko ?😡 grrr😡
Less said about them is better just wish no1 has 2 b wid such ppl😔

lekin pehli mulakat toh bari pyaari thi, Asad bein all Main hoon hero tera
loved the slow-building of their friendship and then it turning into love ❤️
and Asad buying her flowers was just awww
this image says it all 😳 (i don't care ek phool ya guldasta, ya color, feelings ko samjho !! 😆)
I got it Janna & yes it so fits in d scene par add karne ka mann nahi tha mera gifs cuz already OS was so long😆

beautiful OS ! beautiful work ! beautiful writer !😳

Love u❤️...Love u❤️...Love u❤️...😎

love u Jaana ki Jaana !!🤗

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Jas Darling 🤗

sorry sorry...I know I am late...no super late...

but I wasn't well and didn't come here...

now m gonna read it today and then comment...

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Finally I am here Jas with comment 😊

This is just Awesome 👏👏

The topic was sensitive one...and the way you presented...so well...

Zoya's past life was painful but from the moment Asad came in her life...everything changed...

And the special fav part was Dilshad-Zoya...their bonding is amazing...loved it...

enjoyed prank part a lot...

Beautiful read...great work dear...!!!!

waiting for other updates...

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Res

Originally posted by: jas91

Awe its OK Mayur... dedication ke liye thank u nahi karte 😆spclly when u deserve it😉 & upar se jab gift ki ho🤣

Us din nahi thi but aaj main bhi chunn ke laayi hun 4 u

Originally posted by: jas91