New Asya OS ~ Final Destination ~

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finally I m herešŸ˜Ž.. come on give smile... scowl se welcome nahi karte writers kašŸ˜†šŸ˜† even if they r lazy🤣 cuz they can always run back wid ur lack of excitementšŸ˜†


Waise I know this Forum has been dead latelyšŸ˜’ Yeh wahi jagah hai jo kabhi Gulzaar hua karti thi show end hone i mean our Asya end hone ke baad bhi but sigh ppl moved on abounding this beautiful & Happy place


But we aren't here 4 pity party... Some amazing writers r back & readers, stalkers bhišŸ˜‰ so lets make this place alive again 🄳... I know i have stories pending but worry not I'm working on them also till than I m taking OS writing ka sahara 2 get back in d formā˜ŗļø. Ab OS toh mil rahi hai na ghuro matšŸ˜†... Chalo let me Khush karo u some more abhi nxt pura week kuch na kuch u log ko milegašŸ˜‰... I have some Os's in store ab agar mera Dil, dimag & fingers ne saath diya toh next week hoga Gule Gulzaar ... Bolo bolo how u like it... Khush toh boht hoge tum haha🤣


So b happy after every 3-4 days i'll post something something... what😲 laziness se itna aage aa gyi now that's a achievement ok


All u who have been constantly waiting 4 my other works I'll just say thank u so much šŸ¤—that u still r wid me & wishing me 2 continue them.. this shows ur love & I really really appropriate thatšŸ˜›... Hang on i'll b coming soonšŸ‘šŸ¼


Now getting a little serious this OS i have posted is on a little sensitive topic.. I just hope I've done some justice 2 it... cuz i m little apprehensive 😳.. I'm hoping u guys will like it😊


And lastly b4 moving on 2 d nxt post wanted 2 say that this OS is dedicated 2 Mayur 4 turning a sizzler.. Welcum 2 d grp buddyšŸ¤—...
I know I'm late cuz u have been promoted 2 din pehle & at 1st i thought celebration thread banate hain but than realized ki ab toh yahan log hi boht kam hain islye I thought ki main OS hi dedicate kar dun woh toh mere haath main hai.. So here u go a dedication from All of us..(Me, Ashi, Bano, Tehsu, Riddhu & Suri)šŸ˜›


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~*~ Final Destination ~*~


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Opening sliding glass doors of the balcony of his lavish suite in Bhopal's five star Hotel The Royal's Asad came out to get some fresh air. He was working on a project file for the past few hours & his muscles were stiff with constant working. Stretching his arms wide he twisted his neck side 2 side to relief his neck muscles & sighed when it helped.


He was an ambitious & ace architect who works in a multinational company as Chief Manager in the designing department. His Company was very happy with his work & in just few months he has made a strong position & reputation there.

His friends & Seniors applauds him while his peers often feel jealous & the female staff go gaga over his Greek god like looks. However he always takes their positive & negative criticism healthily, still that never bothers him because he knows he need to just keep focus on his work. Therefore he always keeps himself grounded not letting their praises get onto his head.

His Company was thinking to widen their business & was interested in building a new Office in Bhopal. And Asad was to design that building so he was working on that from past one month after the purchase of the land has been finalized.

He was relaxing himself when he heard some muffed sounds coming from somewhere nearby. He looked here & there but found no one. When he followed the sound he found them to be coming from the adjacent balcony of the next suite.

Holding the steel railing he tried to watch but got confused cause no one was there on the other side. He was about to step back when his ears heard a sobbing sound & he was sure it was some girl's sound. He stepped onto his toes to look inside & finally saw a girl who was dressed beautifully crying badly in the balcony.

He got tensed, confusion clouded him while millions of questions rose in his head.

What's wrong with her? Why is she crying? Who is she & What she's doing here? Is she married or ran away from her wedding with her lover who ditched her at last moment?


So many questions were there but he has answer for none. He knew pocking his nose in someone's matter is wrong & he never done that before but watching her like this curled up as a ball & crying inconsolably tugged his conscience to help her.

But will she want to take my help? Maybe she wanted to stay alone?

These things were swirling in his head but still, he just wanted to make sure she was fine.


He was about to move back, thinking she'll not like him to see her like this when she got up difficultly with the support of railing.


-What she's upto now? He thought & kept looking her keenly.

Soon his eyes widened seeing her pull her lehanga up to climb out all ready to jump off from the 20th floor of the Hotel.

Not thinking or taking a moment Asad jumped out of his Balcony into her's in a lightning speed to save her. His feet touched the floor for a mille second & the next moment he has his arms around the girl's delicate waist pulling her inside with all his might.

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi


He felt a strange sensation when his hands touched her naked waist but the girls shrieks didn't gave him time to think over it. Due to the sheer force & speed both landed on floor with him under the girl, her back against his front.

Her hairs covered his face & he sighed in the fragrance of her shampoo, feeling happy that he reached on time, another second & he would have lost her. Hey where did that came from?

Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi


Her shrieks & nails which were scratching his hands to free herself brings him back from his thoughts. He quickly realises her & only than realised how tightly he had trapped her in his arms as if his life depended on her.

Toh khuda se maang lun,

-Leave me. She said turning around to face him.

And finally now Asad could see her face clearly earlier he saw her side glance a little only. But now seeing her from front up-close he completely lost his senses. She was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen. Even though she was not looking the best at the moment.

Mohalat main ik nayi


Her eyes were red & swollen from all the crying & her liner has rimmed her eyes black at the edges, her cheeks has stains of tears & her running Mascara yet he was sure she would look beautiful without any make up.

Rehna hai bas yahaan, Ab door tujhse jaana nahi

He was busy in his lala land when a hard slap on his cheek broke his reverie.

-How dare you? How dare you touch me?

Asad was stupefied with the sudden slap & sensation it left on his cheek.

-Kon ho tum...Who are you? & how you came in this room? She asked frantically.

Asad was already angry with the slap & her question that she asked in accusatory tone made him angrier. No one has dared to talk to him in such tone & here she was accusing him when he saved her life...

heck! he was a fool to help her Asad thought in his mind.

He was all ready to give her a peace of mind for attempting suicide & accusing him while she should thank him but her next question shocked him.

-Did he send you too? She asked him fearfully. The way she was shaking with fear & vulnerability hugging herself in a protective manner while tears were continuously running down her face shook Asad to the core.

Jo tu mera humdard hai...Jo tu mera humdard hai


-hey... Asad tried to touch her arm but she quickly crawled back shaking like a leaf. Seeing her state Asad pulled back his hand & felt genuinely bad to see her condition.

-No...No one send me... My name is Asad... I live in your adjacent room... I saw you were about to jump... so just came to save you... Trust me no one sent me... I'll not harm you I promise. Asad calmly explained trying to make her believe him with the gentle-less of tone.

She looked at him unconvincingly, still feeling difficult to trust anyone after facing the biggest betrayal of her life.

Suhaana har dard hai

Understanding her mental situation at the moment Asad tried again..

-I understand You don't know me... I m a stranger for you... but believe me I have no bad intentions... I just want to help you... I know you must have a very strong reason to do that... but please don't punish yourself like this... atleast think about your family. Asad reasoned but she started crying more hearing him only.

-I have no family. She said bitterly in between tears.

Asad felt worse now. Her pain & vulnerability filled him too with grief.

-Koi toh hoga na aapka? Ammi Abbu?

-They are dead since i was a young. She said shaking with sobs & Asad closed his eyes realising the extent of pain she must be feeling.

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Sighing to get some strength he asked another question again so he could help her.

-Than how come you are here? In this dress? Did you ran away from your wedding with someone?

She looked up at him hearing this & Asad shuttered feeling like a fool.

-I'm...I'm sorry! Look I know I have no right to ask you this but i just need to know this to help you. Please tell me? What's your name? And what are you doing here?

**


The whole night Asad kept trying to find out but she never spoke anything. She didn't wanted to be left alone as she was fearful of someone unknown coming to get her. Neither was Asad in favour of leaving her alone or she might attempt something reckless once again.

After a lot of pleading & persuasion he succeeded in agreeing her to stay in his suite for the night. He promised that there was no need to fear as it was a double bedroom suite with complete safety. The girl was looking miserable & he didn't want to leave her alone like this.


**


Next morning she looked a little better but was still not ready to open about last night. Asad ordered Breakfast for both of them, but she didn't even touch it.

After thinking a lot & a bit hesitation Asad finally spoke...

-I don't know why you don't want to talk about last night, but i understand your sentiments & i won't force you... But i request you please don't be so hard on yourself... please eat !!

She looked at him & he nodded encouragingly on which she put a morsel in her mouth making him smile.

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri

-Actually I know a place, ...it's an organization which helps girls who faced problems in their lives & it's really good... It's a very helpful & reputed organisation... I m also connected in that organization you know as a Volunteer... So i know everyone their & they are all nice people... and I... I was thinking If you want i can talk there for you... See please don't get me wrong but i know you will not like to stay with me like this & you said you don't have anyone else... He was speaking hesitantly shuttering many times.

-No You are right! She finally said anything for the first time in the morning in a sweet soft voice. I can't go back from where i came... You please leave me in this place.

-Very well than we'll just go after you are done with your breakfast. Asad smiled which was not reciprocated & than both looked back into their plates.

-Zoya

-Hmm?

-My name is Zoya...


Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili



-Oh !... Nice name. He smiled again & when she again looked back into her plate without any reaction he cursed himself.

What's wrong with you man ! Why are you making fool of yourself?

**


The car journey was silent. Zoya kept her eyes down on her folded hands in her lap. She was now changed in a plain peach suit which they got from her room from the little bag that she was carrying. Seeing the room & her bag raised questions again in Asad's mind but he didn't asked in order to not make her uncomfortable.

Their car stopped at a signal & the roadside kids came running to sell flowers before the signal turns green again.

A small girl, who looked weak & was dressed in old dirty frock, carrying a basket full of roses, came to their window...

-Sir.. sir, please buy na sir... it's just for 20 rupees... please sir...

-Sorry beta... I don't need it.

-Please sir... See they are so fresh... just take one for your wife. She'll get happy... she said pointing towards Zoya who was looking at them & get shocked just like Asad.

He was about to refuse but when he saw Zoya who was looking emotionally towards the girl he remembered her saying last night that she has no one, & now seeing between Zoya & this girl pinched his heart painfully.


Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan


Turning around he brought a bunch of Roses & paid her heftily. Zoya couldn't help but look at him in admiration.


**


Their car stopped at Aashiyana Organisation & both moved inside after parking it. Leaving her in the waiting area Asad went inside to meet the head of Organisation. Sometime later Asad came out with a lady who was in late forties dressed simply in a salwar suit.

Zoya rose as both of them made way towards her.

-Zoya.. She's Dilshaad Khan head of this organisation, she manages everything here... & Mam she's Zoya.

Dilshaad smiled kindly to her & hugged her gently which Zoya reciprocated emotionally...

-Welcome Zoya... Waise toh i wish no girl needs to seek help in such organisations but I assure you this is no such place... We are all family... & from today you are also part of this family.


Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri

-Thank you.

-There is no need to thank beta... This is the first rule here... that there are no thank you's... because a family is that who stays there for each other... now that you are also my family there is no need for formalities.

-Ok than i leave her at your care than... I m sure you'll take good care of her?


-You don't need to worry Asad... She's my daughter now. I'll personally look after her.

-Thank you. Asad said to which Dilshaad raised her brow making him shutter shaking his head. No i mean... thankfully someone called her at that very moment saving him the scolding.

He turned towards Zoya once she left.

-You'll be fine right? He asked uncertainly?

-Yes i guess... She's nice!

-Yes she is! ... Zoya... please take care of yourself... & remember one thing no reason or person is so important that you give away your life for that... It's really precious... please promise me you'll not pull that stunt like last night?

-I promise i'll never leave hope.

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui


He smiled exhaling noisily.


-That's the spirit... I'll see you around... & call me if you need anything my number is there with Dilshaad Mam..Ok?

-Hmm.. she replied with a nod.

-wait i'll be back.. saying so he quickly ran outside.

Few minutes later he came back with something in his hand. Zoya looked confusedly trying to find what was he hiding behind his back. Soon she startled when not troubling her much Asad forwarded the bunch of yellow roses they brought earlier in front of her.

-No no... don't take me wrong please... yellow symbolizes friendship & i just want to be your friend. I'll be happy if u accept me.. my friendship i mean & if not than...

Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

She gave a hesitant smile for the first time since they met & Asad truly felt happy seeing a slight progress. Taking her smile as yes he forwarded roses towards her which she accepts with a faint Thank u & when he hmmed disapprovingly raising his brow Zoya remembered the new rule no thank you's.


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At first Zoya was traumatized to stay alone therefore Dilshaad asked her to shift for some time in her Home where she stays alone. After some initial hesitance in the start both grew fond of each other & admired for the person they become after so many hardships.


When Asad got to know about the struggle & happening of that fateful night his heart squeezed in pain thinking how tragic it must have been for her to face such cruelty from her relatives. He wanted to kill those people for the evilness they showed & filth they put Zoya in.

Jo tu mera Humdard hai...Jo tu mera Humdard hai


Apparently Zoya was an orphan whose parents died when she was quite young. Her distant relatives adopted her to acquire her property but to their bad luck it was all on Zoya's name & till she turns 25 no one could use it. This made them bitter but still they pretend their fake love so that when the time comes Zoya happily name it to them out of respect.

But their greed stoop them so low when a Billionaire NRI came to their door with an offer. He was in his late fifties, married but didn't have any child all these years because his wife couldn't bear one after a miscarriage at young age. Now that he was getting old his wish to have child forced him to have a child out of wedlock because he wanted to have his own child not adopted. He offered a very big amount in exchange of giving Zoya away so she could bear his child while his wife never gets any hint of it.


As Zoya's relatives were greedy they happily agreed & created a big show in front of Zoya saying they are arranging her wedding with a young NRI. Zoya being grateful to them for taking care of her also agreed not understanding it was all a trap to fool her for their selfish needs.

They staged a drama for her where they showed as if she was getting married but truth was there was never any marriage to take place she was just being used.

At that fateful night she got the shock of her life seeing such old man in place of her Husband & when he told the truth she completely broke down. Still she succeeded in sending him away by threatening to jump from the Balcony where later that night Asad found her crying over her fate.

This was the cruelest Story that both Asad Dilshaad heard in their lives. They were really proud of her that she not only saved herself but also was trying to start a fresh. Not only this both got really close & protective about Zoya too.

Suhaana har dard hai

After few days Zoya found out that Asad got her relatives arrested for trying to ruin her life. She cried the tears of relief that her culprits were behind bars now. Her heart was content & Happy that she had a friend like Asad who genuinely cares for her.

Jo tu mera Humdard hai


**
It has been six months that Zoya was staying in Aashiyana Organisation. With Asad & Dilshaad's encouragement she started job as a programmer in IT department in Asad' company. Once he discussed a problem with Zoya & she told she was an IT graduate & after that Asad kept asking her to join his Company because he really needed a trusted person to which she has to agree in the end.

Dilshaad was waiting for Zoya in the garden to come back from office. Each day it was Asad who used to take & drop her in Aashiyaana. Just then she saw her walking inside...


-Zoya aa gyi tum!... How was your day bache?

-Very tiring Ammi & I m feeling so hungry... Asad ne aaj paani puri bhi nahi khilayi.. She complained pouting adorably.

-Awe my bacha... come on lets go to Khan Villa today... We'll have a girl's night out tonight.. She winked at her.

-Really Ammi Superb... main bas abhi apna bag pack leke aati hun.. & she ran inside through the corridor making Dilshaad chuckle.

**


The next day Asad was summoned to arrive in Khan Villa.

-Salaam Ammi ! What happened ? You called me so urgently... Everything fine?

-Kya Bataun Asad ? I don't know what's wrong with Zoya? She said she doesn't want to stay in Aashiyana anymore... She want to shift somewhere else..

-What? But why?

-I don't know? For that only i called you here.. Did you say her something?

-Ammi why will I say anything to her? Infact she was all fine yesterday...

-I know... infact even I brought her Home last night for dinner & to spend time with me..

-What Zoya is here? Ammi aap bhi kmaal karti hain ! What if she saw me here?

-Yah Allah kahin usse hum dono ke rishte ke baare main toh pta nahi lag gya?

-But how will she Ammi ?

-I don't know but i m sure this must be the reason only? Tum bhi na Asad how many times I've told you to tell her but you never listened to me.

-Oh so you didn't wanted me to know about your reality right? You are such a cheat Asad i can't believe I've trusted you? Zoya arrived from behind the pillar where she was hiding.

-No Zoya it's not like that I can explain.

-Oh yes please explain me why you would cheat me like this.. Zoya was really enjoying this while Dilshaad gave thumbs up behind Asad's back suppressing her giggles.

-I just wanted to help you.

-By hiding such a big thing from me. I had the right to know this. I don't know how many more lies you must have said.


-No Zoya there were no lies...why will i lie to you when I LOvvv...

-Hmm... What did you said ?

Asad was boggled with his slip of tongue & looked towards Dilshaad hoping she hasn't heard it but her angry glare made him close his eyes sheepishly. He hasn't yet confessed to his Ammi about his feelings for Zoya & now he knew she will not leave him for hiding it.

Great angry Zoya ke saath Ammi free! What an offer!

-Asad Ahmed Khan speak ! Dilshaad said with dead pan face.

-Ammi woh... main


-Ammi se nahi aap mujhse kuch kehne wale the... I m waiting? Zoya interrupted.

Standing like a lost puppy he looked between Zoya & Dilshaad wishing the earth to swallow him with all the embarrassment.

Seeing his innocent face both the ladies couldn't control anymore & burst out in fits of laughter making him look at them in total confusion. Finally feeling bad for their poor man they made him sit telling the interesting tail of last night.


**

-So You didn't told me how was your day? Dilshaad asked passing Zoya coffee mug. Both were sitting in the garden of Khan Villa after having dinner.

-theek tha Ammi... but I m very tired she said keeping her head on Dilshaad's shoulder.

-What did you think about Asad Zoya?

-Asad.. what about him?

-Don't tell me you are a such a dhakan!.. Either you are blind or you don't want to accept it. But the truth is that he loves you with all his heart... His eyes clearly shows Zoya that he has written your name all over him...

-Ammi.. How can I ? You know what happened with me after that...

-After that what Zoya... I know it was very tragic for you but it was not your fault bache...

-But how can i trust him ? Jo kuch bhi mere saath hua... I feel so scared... I don't know i don't have it in myself to trust anyone.

-Itna waqt saath guzaarke bhi tumhe lagta hai he's not worth it?

-It's not like that Ammi.. Don't get me wrong...

-Asad will never cheat you Zoya... Of that i can assure you. Seeing Zoya's puzzled face she continued. His father cheated his mother & from that time he pledged he will never repeat the same thing in his life.. He has always respected & valued each relation in his life... Not only his own but he cares for other people in his life.. You yourself saw.. the way he pretends to be strict with his staff & if any situation arrives he's the first person to stand next to them for help... Agar woh apne liye kaam karne walon ke liye itna karta hai toh socho how much love he would have for his family.

-But i never met his family.. I just heard him sometime talk with them over phone but never saw them?

-Maybe they are near you & you couldn't have recognized them? Dilshaad said confidently.

Zoya's brows frowned more in confusion.

-Miss Zoya Farooqui meet me...I M Dilshaad Khan... Asad Ahmed Khan ki Ammi...

Zoya eyes widened while her mouth touched the floor in shock...

-mhh... Muh band makhi ghus jayegi...she teased after clearing her throat.

-Ammi... Aap... Asad.. Khan? Finally the wagon wheels in Zoya's brain started working & she realised it. Par aapne pehle kyun nahi btaya? She felt cheated again.

-Because Asad didn't wanted to... You also know when he found you, you were not in the position to understand this.. If we would have told I m his mother you wouldn't have opened up to me like this... Or maybe you would have refused to take our help & we couldn't let that happen Zoya cause you were not in condition to left on your own. I know you Zoya are feeling bad but our intention was not wrong... We were just trying to heel you.. Dilshaad held her hand to comfort her

He never planned to fell in Love with you... he just wanted help you as a friend as a human should do for the other, & i was doing as a woman who also faced betrayal by her husband because i know the pain...

-But if you still feel we cheated you than i m really sorry... I'll ask Asad he'll never bother you.

Saying so she got up to leave but Zoya held her hand.

-I trust you Ammi... In this whole world no one cared for me like you did... You can never have bad intentions for me... I m sorry i made you feel like that..

-No Zoya you don't have to apologize... I totally understand your position & if me or Asad took care of you it's because we love you, it's our duty as a family. I m sure if it's you in our place you'll do the same. Haina?

Zoya nodded & than hugged her emotionally happy that she has her permanently in her life now.

After the truth was revealed Zoya complained a lot for being fooled by the mother son duo & pleaded to Dilshaad to repeat the trick with Asad now. And Dilshaad who was in win win situation agreed for that.


**


That night as Zoya retired for the night even after being tired her thoughts kept wandering to Asad. How he saved her that night... & than how difficult it was for him to convince her to share his suite...

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri

She giggled remembering how he expected her smile the next morning... those flowers that he gave she kept in water pot as a memento of their friendship & her promise to him.

Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

Her eyes filled remembering how he helped her in building her confidence again.


Even while she used to ignore him still he used to bring DVD's of her fvrt Hero's movies after he got to know that from Dilshaad & he planning it with Dilshaad used to arrange Sunday night campfire in garden where together all ladies of Ashiyaan used to watch films on the giant Tv Screen.
He used to bring dresses for everyone only with intention that Zoya will start dressing up again like the girls of age as she has completely lost interest to groom herself after the tragedy.

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye, Teri meri jaan jo ek hui

With his constant efforts she slowly but steadily she started looking positively towards life. She started him trusting him & with his encouragement joined the job he offered. Not only that when he got to know her hobby of dancing he forced her to take classes of Underprivileged children who has the talent but couldn't afford to pay for dancing classes & out of all she was happy for this thing.

The memory was still fresh in her mind when she got closed in the store room of Aashiyana & how she completely lost it her composer finding herself alone in a mildly lit room. The way Asad helped her & kept talking from across the door to console her still warms her heart.

Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan

And when she finally came out he hugged her so tightly as if his life depended on her. Even she was relieved in his arms like she found her Home in them.

Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

**

-That was a very bad joke... Asad complained now.

It was raining outside & Dilshaad has some work in Aashiyana so she left them to spend some time together. And they were sitting on the swing in their mini garden at the backyard seeping their coffee's enjoying the beautiful view.

Jo tu mera humdard hai...Jo tu mera humdard hai

-It wasn't joke it was payback... she quipped giggling.

-I Love You Zoya. He said looking intently at Zoya who was in his embrace with her head kept on his shoulder.

Suhaana har dard hai

-I know... & I love you too... She confessed geedily.


-I can't tell you how happy I m to have you in my life. Thank Yuu... she kept a finger on his lips stopping him to continue.

Jo tu mera humdard hai

-No... Thanks to you.. She said emotionally & Asad kissed her eyes before hugging her softly in his embrace.

-Hey No Thank you's. Asad said after sometimes making Zoya laugh loudly throwing her head back while he admired her innocent beauty in his arms in the backdrop of freely falling rain drops.


hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...





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#7
Me

mene jab prologue part read kiya tha meko laga yeh simple sa case hai

like Zoya shadi se bhaag kar aayi hogi

Asad usko mazaar pe betha dekh raha

or

or

or

Zoya ke bhai wagaira ne Asad ko thapad maara 🤣

par tune toh meko ek dum se shock kar dia

or haan yeh banner toh mene shayd pichle saal dekha tha šŸ˜²šŸ˜†šŸ¤£
Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Myself šŸ˜Ž

abhi review time

amazing concept bestu

tussi chaa gaye šŸ‘ šŸ‘

jese ke mai pehle hi bol chuka hoon tu bohat improve kar raha hai

pehle bhi acha lagta tha par ab lagta hai dill se likha hai ā¤ļø

samajh nahi aaya na

read Z3 (mera fazool sa happy shappy AsYa wala case) and then TSB ( mera asli wala love 😳)

teko khud hi samajh aa jayega

back to this OS

meko Asad and Dillu ka jhoot bohattt acha laga

wo kehte hain na kisi ke bhaly ke liye bola gaya jhoot jhoot nahi hota

bilkul wesa hi laga

awww my baby Asad loves Zoya

bohat si sweet sa confession tha

simply wow type

ab plz dosra OS post kar na

i'm dying to read wo rota hua Asad 🤣

chal me off now

lots of love se bhi zaida love u ā¤ļø

hugs šŸ¤—
Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
haye o meri bak bak queen 🤣 kitna bolti hai
sab se pehle huggie šŸ¤—

ab jaldi se unres kr de
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
A beautiful os
Written well
Asad n Dilshad helped Zoya to build herself
And that prank on Asad was really lovely

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