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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Keeep writing dear

Waiting for your updates

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

Pehle muje laga ki Zoya ya fir shaayad koi 3rd person bhi Asad ko chamaat maar sakta hai par vo Zoya hi thi😆. Par Zoya ne vahi react kiya jo koi bhi ladki karti thi.

Loved how Asad convinced her to stay wid him n he kept an eye on her so dat she don't try to suicide again. Zoya cud not say anything to him as she cud not trust anyone.

Asad got her in a woman's shelter where she met Dilshad😃

Zoya's situation was too bad. Aise rishtedaar ho to dushman ki kya jarurat hai😡. Asad ko uss tharki buddhe ko bhi jail me daalna aur uski biwi ko sab bataana chaahiya😡.

Asad n Dilshad healed Zoya n she started living like a normal girl even doing jobs😊

Asad n Dilshad did right in not revealing to Zoya abt their relation for time being. Dilshad's explanation was nice. If they told her she may wud not have opened up so soon.

Asad n Zoya's confession was so nice n beautiful😃. Zoya got betrayed by her own relatives but she got some good people who genuinely loved n cared for her.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Beautiful shot

I really like dilshad and zoya bonding

Really loved it

Jas hope you are fine

Lol

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Mere comment jarne k baad muje PM aata hai. Muje laga ki tune doosra OS likha hai😆.

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asyafeelz

@asyafeelz

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Mere comment jarne k baad muje PM aata hai. Muje laga ki tune doosra OS likha hai😆.

& I loved ur comnt 🤗 sabse hatt ke jo hote hain 😉
& dusri OS bhi ready hai 2 din main who bhi post kar dungi 😉

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asyafeelz

@asyafeelz

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: --Sumi--
Beautiful shot
I really like dilshad and zoya bonding
Really loved it
Jas hope you are fine
Lol

Sumi u r back 😲
Hugs dear 🤗
me fine tu kaisi hai?

& comnt ke liye thanku 😛 .. maine toh expect hi nahi kiya tha 2 see u here 😆

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Loved it

Patiently waiting for more asya

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

This was so beautiful dear

Loved reading it to the core

Firstly, coming to the banner, it is very attractive and beautiful giving a fair share of idea of what the story actually holds

And coming to the plot, it was really very heart touching and emotional

Loved how beautifully you executed such a sensitive topic and combined it with such a beautiful love story

Loved every bit of it with the song perfectly complimenting the situations as well as the emotions

It was seriously a treat to read

I am got no idea whether you take requests or not, but, would really feel glad if you write something with the title track of ae dil hai mushkil

It is a beautiful song with beautiful lyrics and, I feel that it would compliment asya perfectly

Looking forward to your upcoming writings

And thanks for such an amazing story😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: jas91
Special Res 4 Mayur😛
Sorry dude i'm right now tired warna tere jaise gifs zaroor dalti😆

Res 4 Bestu, Allo, Suri, Tehsu, Janna (U don't read but i'll make u read this 1😆), Depu, Aishu (kahan gayab hai tu🤔) Anopama, Juhi

Baaki i don't know kon kon reader bacha hai forum main but Res 4 all u too😛

Thank you so much for the RES Jas and also for the Dedication...

Aur koi ni yeh lelo ji meri taraf se aapko ek GIF...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Coming to the OS...

Finally i also reached my destination i mean this OS at last...

Khair keeping that aside...i really enjoyed reading this OS Jas...

It was an Amazing and Well written part...

Meko thoda Balcony jump ko imagine karne mein pareshani hui thi ki Asad ne kaise manage kiya tha...

Par socho Bandey ne itni mehnat ki aur badle mein ussko chaped padd gayi...😆

But yes the condition which Zoya was going through is serious...and it was like an immediate reaction...

On a serious note the social thing discussed here is such a curse in our society , I toh have read and seen even worst scenario of like a married 50+ guy with a 15 year old...but keeping that aside...just like the one Bano is discussing in her story...so Kudos to you too for bringing up this topic...👏👏

I just wish all of those women and girls who comes out of this hell get a lady kum Farishta like Dilshaad in their lives...toh inki life sudhar jaaye,..

Dilshaad's bond with Zoya is always a treat to read...and no matter what Dilshaad Zoya ko dekhke apne sagey bete ko bhool toh jaati hai...😆

I liked that prank part to...

All and all a lovely update..

Continue soonish with the update of #HUMNAWAH and #SAB TERA and that other OS too...😊

Take care...

And enjoy your SWISS TRACK...😆👍🏼