New Asya OS ~ Final Destination ~ - Page 4

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

I 😳

dekho dekho kon aaya 😎

wese meko pehla spot by chance mila tha

I know tune bol rakha tha par mai pehle yaha aaya res kiya and phir tera msg dekha 😆

anyways jese bhi hua

I'm first yeahhh 🥳

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Me

mene jab prologue part read kiya tha meko laga yeh simple sa case hai

like Zoya shadi se bhaag kar aayi hogi

Asad usko mazaar pe betha dekh raha

or

or

or

Zoya ke bhai wagaira ne Asad ko thapad maara 🤣

par tune toh meko ek dum se shock kar dia

or haan yeh banner toh mene shayd pichle saal dekha tha 😲😆🤣

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Myself 😎

abhi review time

amazing concept bestu

tussi chaa gaye 👏 👏

Shukriya😎🤗

jese ke mai pehle hi bol chuka hoon tu bohat improve kar raha hai

pehle bhi acha lagta tha par ab lagta hai dill se likha hai ❤️

samajh nahi aaya na

read Z3 (mera fazool sa happy shappy AsYa wala case) and then TSB ( mera asli wala love 😳)

teko khud hi samajh aa jayega

Boht ache se samjh aa gya ab main badi writer hun dil ki gehrayion se likhti hun Bidu 🤣 samjh gyi na😆

back to this OS

meko Asad and Dillu ka jhoot bohattt acha laga

wo kehte hain na kisi ke bhaly ke liye bola gaya jhoot jhoot nahi hota

bilkul wesa hi laga

Are aisa kab hua ki maine Dillu-Zoey ko ekdum best show nahi kiya... kabhi kabhi i feel i make them more loveable than Asya🤣

awww my baby Asad loves Zoya

bohat si sweet sa confession tha

simply wow type

jab kuch spcl nahi hota toh i write simple hi besides simple jyada dil se hota hai bestu no typical rehearsed lines & all😉 (giving a pat on my back😆)

ab plz dosra OS post kar na

i'm dying to read wo rota hua Asad 🤣

chal me off now

lots of love se bhi zaida love u ❤️

hugs 🤗

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

haye o meri bak bak queen 🤣 kitna bolti hai

sab se pehle huggie 🤗

ab jaldi se unres kr de

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome OS Dear👏😊

Thanks Juhi😃

Pehle muje laga ki Zoya ya fir shaayad koi 3rd person bhi Asad ko chamaat maar sakta hai par vo Zoya hi thi😆. Par Zoya ne vahi react kiya jo koi bhi ladki karti thi.

IK it was so unexpected 4 any1 2 guess it right 😆 & yo chmaat was so realistic acc 2 situation😉😆

Loved how Asad convinced her to stay wid him n he kept an eye on her so dat she don't try to suicide again. Zoya cud not say anything to him as she cud not trust anyone.

Asad got her in a woman's shelter where she met Dilshad😃

Zoya's situation was too bad. Aise rishtedaar ho to dushman ki kya jarurat hai😡. Asad ko uss tharki buddhe ko bhi jail me daalna aur uski biwi ko sab bataana chaahiya😡.

See i did made them pay😳 but since d OS was already getting way 2 long toh i focused more on Asya & them taking step 2wards their future😊

Asad n Dilshad healed Zoya n she started living like a normal girl even doing jobs😊

Asad n Dilshad did right in not revealing to Zoya abt their relation for time being. Dilshad's explanation was nice. If they told her she may wud not have opened up so soon.

Asad n Zoya's confession was so nice n beautiful😃. Zoya got betrayed by her own relatives but she got some good people who genuinely loved n cared for her.

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

A beautiful os

Written well

Asad n Dilshad helped Zoya to build herself

And that prank on Asad was really lovely

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Keeep writing dear

Waiting for your updates

Originally posted by: asya555

Awesome

Originally posted by: Amina...

WOW!!!
BEAUTIFUL OS DEAR...!!!
VERY WELL WRITTEN...!!!.
LOVED IT...!!!

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr

Loved it

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice os

loved it

Originally posted by: -jerry-

l❤️ved it

Originally posted by: anopama

Loved it

Patiently waiting for more asya

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

awesome OS dear

loved it

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

Originally posted by: raspi

nyc

Originally posted by: Linsie

Lovely OS...
Thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: preetiasya

tat was awesome

Originally posted by: binuuu

awesome os jas..
loved it...
asad saved zoya and they fell in love...
totally enjoyed dear :)

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

This was so beautiful dear

Loved reading it to the core

Firstly, coming to the banner, it is very attractive and beautiful giving a fair share of idea of what the story actually holds

And coming to the plot, it was really very heart touching and emotional

Loved how beautifully you executed such a sensitive topic and combined it with such a beautiful love story

Loved every bit of it with the song perfectly complimenting the situations as well as the emotions

It was seriously a treat to read

I am got no idea whether you take requests or not, but, would really feel glad if you write something with the title track of ae dil hai mushkil

It is a beautiful song with beautiful lyrics and, I feel that it would compliment asya perfectly

Looking forward to your upcoming writings

And thanks for such an amazing story😊