AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 60

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -jerry-

well pictures are
&
also this Sameer Anand thing is seriously getting out of hands.
so, I want Asad to beat the crap out of him then make(oder) Zoya to slap him by her sandal after that Zoya kicking that bas**rd real hard on his balls and all this on a public place sothat that son of b**ch Sameer Anand tastes actul feeling of humiliation being manhandled by Asad infront of the people who used to fare him. 😉


His end will be worse than what you asked for but it will not be for a while. He gets SERIOUSLY far more out of control before Asad beats the crap out of him. Hope you don't kill him till Asad does and hope you enjoy 16 whenever it is up!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Wow what an awesome long update. So much revelation poor Zoya and asad. They both deserve each other. Hope Asad let her in and he finds himself. Love him.


They do..I can't wait to write on them when they get together and when he lets her in! LOVE HIM, yes that is correct 😆! Glad you enjoyed the part I hope you enjoy 16 whenever it is updated!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preetiasya

hey daisy update was nice

bt i didnt read full
i will read it after sometime & comment
i am little angry on u 😡
go to page 77 u will get to know abt it
wait fr comnt


Will wait for your comment. 😲 itne lambe update ke baad bhi angry? I don't know you had a lot of complaints on page 77 which one are you talking about exactly? I replied to your comment so let me know if I answered it or else you can let me know what you are angry about and I will try my best to placate your anger.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy


His end will be worse than what you asked for but it will not be for a while. He gets SERIOUSLY far more out of control before Asad beats the crap out of him. Hope you don't kill him till Asad does and hope you enjoy 16 whenever it is up!

far from out of hands<
hope you aren't planning to get Zoya raped by that ba***rd
cause
don't know about Asad but I'll kill you myself for sure
kidding..,
hope nothing that bad happens with Zoya
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -jerry-

far from out of hands<
hope you aren't planning to get Zoya raped by that ba***rd
cause
don't know about Asad but I'll kill you myself for sure
kidding..,
hope nothing that bad happens with Zoya


My lips are sealed..but please don't kill me for (not saying she does get raped) but A LOT does happen.
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Posted: 8 years ago
20,000+ Views. OMFG. 🥳!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy


My lips are sealed..but please don't kill me for (not saying she does get raped) but A LOT does happen.


a lot but not a rape please
you cannot let that ba**trd broke Zoya like he said he'll
you are a writter you can Zoya save at the moment & give that ba**rd ass whooping he deserve
&
hopefully you'll think about it atleast
So, I am counting on it & counting on you. :-)
Edited by -jerry- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
btw,
for 20,000+ Viewers😊
Edited by -jerry- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Daisy still awake
well iss baar toh kamaal hi kar diya tumne
so long update
maja aa gaya
took four hours to read
and you were right it was worth waiting
i shall give comment after reading two or three times 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -jerry-

btw,
for 20,000+ Viewers😊


Aww, Thanks! I still can't believe it. Am in total shock..I still remember when I posted the intro, characters and first part I thought literally no one would read it and that it was complete garbage and I can't believe today I have 20,000+ views and so much love for my FF! Shall celebrate after I fail my exam tomorrow 😆..I will celebrate all weekend long!

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