AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 42

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessSumbal

Hi😳

Yr btao na k next 15 update kb mile ga😒
Ab wait nai ho rha hai😭



Abhi 2 din bhi nahin hue logon! Abhi toh maine 15 likhna shuru kiya hai..abhi toh bauhat saara baaki hai! Sabr karo sabr beta..sabr ka pal bauhat hi meetha hota hai. 15 aur usse agle kuch part bauhat hi dhamakedaar hone wale hain (Dhamake nahin hone waale but..bauhat kuch hoga) 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally got through the whole chapter. And what an amazing and long chapter it was!!
I'm rendered speechless every time at how you get all this complicated relations of so many broken souls, together so beautifully.
So pari and zoya meet in this update. And Farida bi knows zoya from childhood, from the orphanage where zoya might have lived as a child?
My heart breaks for azlan and asad, they just need to sort their issues out, but I understand it's not that simple and they are to deep in the negative spiral so it might not be easy to turn it around. I'm happy asad has ayaan.
Dilshad knows about zoyas cutting! I hope she will be the one to heal the part in zoyas soul that craves a parent. The part with her. Ightmare was so well written. It feelt so real and her anguish was so palpable.
As always. A very nice update and I have probably forgot to comment on a lot of the happenings. But I'm on a mohabatein high now :-)
Thanks for ur hard work and bless ur amazing skill. Storytelling is one of the talents i admire highly.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



Abhi 2 din bhi nahin hue logon! Abhi toh maine 15 likhna shuru kiya hai..abhi toh bauhat saara baaki hai! Sabr karo sabr beta..sabr ka pal bauhat hi meetha hota hai. 15 aur usse agle kuch part bauhat hi dhamakedaar hone wale hain (Dhamake nahin hone waale but..bauhat kuch hoga) 😆

How will we keep patience when you are teasing us with teaser and saying that the upcoming part is going to be more interesting
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
abse leke update tak mere mun pe taala hai!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

How will we keep patience when you are teasing us with teaser and saying that the upcoming part is going to be more interesting

😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yr pr isa lagta hai 2 din nai balke 2 hafte ho gy hai

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

abse leke update tak mere mun pe taala hai!

Yes you should have otherwise we will torture you with repeadly by asking for update 😆 BTW when you are planning to update the next part
on 7nov my net pack is going to expire
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Posted: 8 years ago
So I have caught up
Comments on pg41 & 60
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Yes you should have otherwise we will torture you with repeadly by asking for update 😆 BTW when you are planning to update the next part
on 7nov my net pack is going to expire



Next update is not till NEXT weekend (Nov 11 weekend) at the EARLIEST..no promises. Updates ka size dekha hai na beta.. Just started writing it toh time to lagega hi..I still can't say when the update will be
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Anaya came to dilshad for her lahenga & she almost agreed but razia insulted dilshad she saw her with rashid. The lion roared & told his decision. Asad was hell angry & as usual zoya did the mistake. Rashid & zoya scene was good. Asad saved her & then their bickering was nice. Zoya spoke to Ayaan abt asad singing again. Wow, he created a magic with his voice. Asya eyes met as he felt her presence. Zoya & pari scene was nice. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks

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