AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 43

Daisy 11nov se pehle update nahi mil sakta kya 😲

BTW 500 comments ho gaye daisy 😊

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Daisy 11nov se pehle update nahi mil sakta kya 😲

Nahi...Tab tak I MAY have finished writing par 50-80 pages edit karne mein kitna time lage no Idea which is why November 11 at the earliest but maybe even after that weekend..no promises!

Update acha hoga behen..lots happening so sabar rakho 😆 - Don't egg me for teasing again! Can't help it!! 😆

Originally posted by: Always_asya

BTW 500 comments ho gaye daisy 😊

Aur 500 comment aapka 👏

I am so so emotional and happy right now..Thank You Thank You Thank You everyone who has ever commented on my ATTEMPT of a story! Hope you continue enjoying the coming parts everyone! Thank You again for 15000+ views and the comments 😆 😳

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Aur 500 comment aapka 👏

I am so so emotional and happy right now..Thank You Thank You Thank You everyone who has ever commented on my ATTEMPT of a story! Hope you continue enjoying the coming parts everyone! Thank You again for 15000+ views and the comments 😆 😳

Hahaaa yes 500 mera
i thought why left on 499
well with readers it was your hard work that compelled them to comment
your long updates are the one main thing according to me that all readers appreciated the most
secondly your story line is amazing thats why i am torturing you asking for update again and again 😊
although my exams coming in first week of Dec. but my mind is always in your story
now you can see likes on your story are also increasing

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Hahaaa yes 500 mera
i thought why left on 499
well with readers it was your hard work that compelled them to comment
your long updates are the one main thing according to me that all readers appreciated the most
secondly your story line is amazing thats why i am torturing you asking for update again and again 😊
although my exams coming in first week of Dec. but my mind is always in your story
now you can see likes on your story are also increasing

😳 😳 I still want to compel more readers. If only I were a vampire 😆 Yaar FF itna lamba hai that if my updates weren't this long it would never finish. Also, I feel like the longer it is the more you get to enjoy warna feel beech mein hi reh jaata hai while you wait for the next part. Longer updates means lots happens. It's enjoyable to read par mere haath toot jaate hain likhte aur edit karte but my love for KaBhi is too insane to care 😆 mere bhi exams aa rahe hain par dimaagh books ki bajae it's always in my story..stealing every second to write! I am so appreciative of you and everyone who takes time to read, comment, like anything! Very encouraging! I hope you enjoy 15 😆 trying my best to have it done by the end of the week!

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

😳 😳 I still want to compel more readers. If only I were a vampire 😆 Yaar FF itna lamba hai that if my updates weren't this long it would never finish. Also, I feel like the longer it is the more you get to enjoy warna feel beech mein hi reh jaata hai while you wait for the next part. Longer updates means lots happens. It's enjoyable to read par mere haath toot jaate hain likhte aur edit karte but my love for KaBhi is too insane to care 😆 mere bhi exams aa rahe hain par dimaagh books ki bajae it's always in my story..stealing every second to write! I am so appreciative of you and everyone who takes time to read, comment, like anything! Very encouraging! I hope you enjoy 15 😆 trying my best to have it done by the end of the week!

Hay do not crack your fingers much dear otherwise how will we get update 🥳 jokes apart update when you are comfertable
i

Impatiently waiting

LOVING the chemistry between Asad and Zoya with every coming part!

Zoya trying to fulfill Asads long lost dream is the cutest thing ever. Your story is clearly marking several milestones in terms of why and how they fell in love with each other. I honestly don't believe in love at first sight. Hence, the fact that you're writing about their initial attraction followed by these moments and actions mean so much more in their journey.
The "Fault in Our Stars" book has this lovely line which exactly describes them-- 'I fell in love like you would fall asleep: slowly and then all at once.'

I can't wait for Asad to find out about Zoya's part in fulfilling his dream. In the same way, I want Zoya to know about Shawn and 'S'. I'm 10000% sure it's Asad but I'm going to wait and see in your next part.

As always, loved Ayaan's bonding with Asad and Zoya. In some ways, I like Ayaan far more than Azlan. He's loyal, funny and so true to himself. I won't be surprised if Naina really does fall for him 😛

On the other hand, Azlan and his father need to get their heads out of their asses. If Rashid was a real man, I'd have probably kicked him where it counts a million times.

Poor Anaya! I really feel for her. A crazy family and a nutjob of a future mother in law (if, at all). Aahils really going to bring trouble on himself if he doesn't tell the people he loves (Aisha and his family) about what he really wants. I really like that the Zoya in your story pointed that out to him. Gul's Zoya would probably cook up some random dramatic plan to make him confess that would backfire badly.

Dying to read more. Please update soon!

P.S- Sorry I couldn't comment earlier, have been super busy with work and life in general