AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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PrincessSumbal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Yr zoya ko ya to malik ki beti bana ya phr king k bare bate ki .

Us ghuffur budhe ki na bana.

Ur zoya us palace mai rhne jahe tu us ghuffr budhe ko sai tang kaur raziya budhiya ko k in dono ko nani yad a jahe.

Aur plz ab update kr b do

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Just restarted my computer AGAIN! Jaise hi update karne lagti hoon..it crashes! 😳

Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: MOnkEy_rAngEr
Super duper awsm update
Reading all the chapters together
Very well written
Continue soon :-))

Thank You! So Glad you are reading! Hope you enjoy!

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

res mine

i will read in evening.. abi office me hu :(

i luv thus story alot ,, glad u updated it .. nw dn't take much time 2 update the nxt prt ..

do pm me pls ,, i dnt get the pm for this

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Posted: 8 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good going..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: preetiasya
very very very well written daisy
tat was nice chap
zoya waking up on sunday morning fast and seeing cartoons was so nice
zoya is really daring person she asked asad -r u going fr meeting ur gf?
asya encounter on dining table was nice
did asad didnt talk about zoya dressing?
upto now zoya didnt make any frnds in clg
tere is some ting in past tat zoya is hiding
who is this sameer anand yaar
tere is something serious wit this guy?
pls reval it sooon
asya encounter wit phone is very nice
zoya will defenitely regret fr behaving likethis
ofcourse his mistake also tere
she will sorry fr tat
make them atleast friends soon yaar
i cant see this much fighting
again i am asking approx in which chap tey will get married
cont sooon
eagerly waiting

Thank You! Yes Zoya has guts! Glad you're enjoying AsYa. He was trying not to..but alas..part 13 mein saari kasar nikal gayee! Yes Sameer Anand is a serious character..very important. Very important part of Zoya's past. But you will have to wait for that. Unfortunately yes Zoya hasn't made any friends in college. 😆😆 Zoya. Both are at fault and both are equally egoistic! Trust me I am DYING to write their friendship scenes more then you want to read because it will be beautiful. Just a few things need to be taken care of before..and Mangalpuri Asad still has to happen..😆 Beta shaadi mein BAUHAT time hai..like 30+ Chapters but trust me their dynamics will change in every part and each change will be enjoyable!

13 is FINALLY up. Hope you enjoy it. Can't wait to read your reviews!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Hey BTW azlaan was asad's best friend before ayaan how?

LOL You will have to continue reading to find out. But Azlan is Asad's first friend, the oldest & closest. How do you think their Pari dynamic works if they always hated each other. How would Pari have ended up with Asad to begin with? They had a falling out 7 years ago..for reasons that will be revealed later..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: addicted_93
Excellent chapter!
My favourite bits were the ones where Ayaan pisses the Khan family off by talking about Asad. I love that he does it to defend Asad in his own way. Asad deserves friends like these after his seemingly horrible past.
Love that he didn't reveal to Asad that he's Zoya's brother. Asad's jealousy is adorable.

Sameer Anand and Zoya? I feel like he was with her in New York or boarding school and must have harassed her while she was there. Can't wait for Zoya to put him in his place and of course, for Asad to beat the crap out of him

Loving the way Naina is putting Azlan in his place. About time he accepts that he has feelings for her. I absolutely love this side of her. She's matching up to Azlan.

I feel so bad for Aahil, Aisha and Anaya. I can see their story shaping up soon. This love triangle is going to end up hurting a lot of relationships.

Zoya and Asad. What do I even say? There's no part about their story that I don't love. Zoya is playing with fire and she's going to have to face the consequences soon. I hope Asad isn't too mean to her. I'm sure it'll be worth it in the end though.
Knowing that they have disturbing pasts, I know they'll love each other like there's no tomorrow. It reminds me of that dialogue from Jab Tak Hai Jaan "Love that breaks you,still keeps you together, love that create distances, still brings you closer...love that is true and forever"

Azlan and Asads moment at the hospital was so touching. Please don't kill little Pari off with some disease. It will literally break my heart.

Awaiting the next update!

Thank You! OMG I love those bits too..Ayaan is such a sweet friend! LOL Ayaan is having the time of his life finally getting a chance to mess with Asad. You may be onto something about Sameer but we will have to wait and see for sure! Let's see if you agree with Naina's tactics in part 13! Yup AAA are going to brn many bridges! 😳😳😳 Glad you are enjoying AsYa! LOL Asad would've KILLED anyone else in Zoya's position without a second thought..par ab woh dil ke haaton majboor hai. YES! OMG it is like you read my mind about how they will love each other and those Jab Tak Hai Jaan words always come to my mind when I write ANY scene of theirs!

LOL do you think I could ever have the heart to kill off little adorable Pari? Especially knowing how much Asad loves her! Azlan can be a douche but his and Asads bromance and love for each other is an integral part of the story so I'm happy you're liking it! Glad you liked their hospital hug.

Part 13 is up..hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your reviews!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: anuv6
first of all a big thanks and hug fr ur another long update
coming to ur update its just amazing asusual, interesting and exctng too
after read even a long update, cant satisfied . i mean, it makes want to read more nd more esp ASYA. the way u writing ASYA na... its really an another QH. the same asad nd very similar zoya bt a diff,cute and very intense plot ...must say You are an awsome write dear.
the way u tailored the story, each chars, ASYA's attraction esp Asad's pull to zoya ...awesome nd intense
i luvd ayaan nd zoya's relation nd the jealous asad too nd when ayaan asked asad ," hey, how is my girl, i mean zoya...",i can imagine wat'll be asad's reaction,,... very funny bt cute too. LUVD jeal asad.
nd a new negat char, what'll he do? i mean he is such a ,.,.;, bt still no worries asad is there na nw,.
waiting to knw wat'll happen nxt,.
update sooon na

Aww your most welcome! And thank you fro all the lovely words! LOL If the updates got any longer I would never be leaving my bedroom. That was my initial plan..I wanted to keep the feel of QH alive in my story because I am still salty about what Gul did to my show and my Asya! I too love Ayaan & Zoya's bond and enjoy writing them a lot! A jealous Asad = A cute Asad! He does A lot but don't worry Asad haina..😆

13 is up! Hope you enjoy!