AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank You! Glad you liked the part! Happy you're liking AsYa's banter and Zoya's pagalpan! I said they don't know his truth..because they don't. Just like you don't either. 😆😆 I decided to put ya'll out of one misery atleast and reveal something! There are a few parts to revealing S so I decided to reveal Pari's secret! Yes he does love her a lot!! A LOT!! More about when and why Azlan came into the picture will be revealed later! Zoya and Faizan scenes always make me sad! Ayaan is a great friend who ALWAYS puts the haveli folks in place for what they did to Asad! Yes, he knows MOST of Asad's past. NOT everything! You will also have to wait to read more on Malik. He is an important character! "S" will be revealed in probably another 2-3 parts! Ayaan has never seen this side of Asad before and is going to have the time of his life messing with Asad! What more could he wish for anyways..his best friend & his sister, two people he loves most! Okay lets just clear this I don't mean play boy/douchebag/cheater when I say bad boy. For me the term bad boy means - a boy who means trouble in OTHER ways..so you can take your pick and guess who Ayaan meant by my lips are sealed😆! Yes, I hate Shazia too and I cannot wait for Asad to set her straight! Not literally because of Zoya but Zeenat had 3 miscarriages and she blames Zoya's manhoosat and presence to be the reason! LOL I answered as many as I could..the rest you'll have to read on! Don't want to ruin the suspense!</font>

Well i guessed during reading the update that he is none other than asad waiting when you reveal it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

I must say that i am in love with this part bcs it was full of asya and new twist and turns.i hate this gaffoor.he is using king for his selfish purpose.he is confident that the youth will vote for himbcs he was the only one who is opposing the government.Is asad is going to stand against them?
what happened with zoya in past?
the guy sameer is disgusting
whom he was talking about zoya's knight in shinning armour?
i wish asad stands for her that time
zoya's evil mind cannot help to torture poor asad.she is testing his patience and will be in trouble in future.zoya and naina introduced each other.hope for their bonding in future
asad's past really very cruel
poor child's desires remain unfulfilled whether it is painting music or video game.i really felt for him watching zoya playing video game the child inside him was craving for it.
zoya is making plan to go to ayaan's party.
talking about him ,he is true friend of asad
his bickring with azlaan was awesome
what happened to pari?
thanks for pm
update soon


😳😳 Glad you are in love! Who doesn't love anything that has to do with AsYa? The twists will only increase further and further from here on! Yes, Ghafoor is a creep! Of course he is using the King. You didn't think he actually cared for them did you? Well you'll just have to see if Asad stands for government or not 😉! Take a wild hint as to who I would allow Zoya's knight in shining Armour be 😆! Oh Sameer, hasn't even started his harketein yet! He is a CREEP!!!! You will HATE him! Zoya is playing with fire! Tsk.Tsk. Poor Asad! Zoya and Naina will have a nice bond but it won't be until WAY later! I know 😭😭😭 bechara Asad. All because of Rashid all his dreams remained unfulfilled. But don't worry Zoya haina. 😆! She fulfills Asads wishes with a BANG! Ayaan is an AMAZING friend..as you will see in later parts! LOL wait till you read Azlan and Ayaan in Part 13! Pari has a condition..more will be revealed about that later too!

I am in the process of proof reading 13 one more time. Hopefully it will be up in an hour..hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your views!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">😳😳Glad you are in love! Who doesn't love anything that has to do with AsYa? The twists will only increase further and further from here on! Yes, Ghafoor is a creep! Of course he is using the King. You didn't think he actually cared for them did you? Well you'll just have to see if Asad stands for government or not😉! Take a wild hint as to who I would allow Zoya's knight in shining Armour be😆! Oh Sameer, hasn't even started his harketein yet! He is a CREEP!!!! You will HATE him! Zoya is playing with fire! Tsk.Tsk. Poor Asad! Zoya and Naina will have a nice bond but it won't be until WAY later! I know😭😭😭bechara Asad. All because of Rashid all his dreams remained unfulfilled. But don't worry Zoya haina. 😆! She fulfills Asads wishes with a BANG! Ayaan is an AMAZING friend..as you will see in later parts! LOL wait till you read Azlan and Ayaan in Part 13! Pari has a condition..more will be revealed about that later too!
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am in the process of proof reading 13 one more time. Hopefully it will be up in an hour..hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your views!</font>

I am in love with part 12 thats whay i am so eager for next update let see what will happen in mext chap in one hour ok but i will be able to read it after four hours bcs now i am sitting in my claas in clg my lecture is going to start in ten minutes and about reviews i will do it after reading the update two times ab jab tumne dil khole ke update diya toh mai bhi dil khole ke comment karungi 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Is chapter 13 up? I can't find it in page 40
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Loved it as aalways
Wished more english still
Zoya miss her old jiju
Glsd she fits in with dillu and aisha
Asad thts a whole other story
Gaffur and his good deeds and society looks
So he is holding something over the khan khandan thts y he seems in charge
Zain rubbing azlan abt ayaan + friend
And observant of naina poor girl
Asya god help me with them and their bickering
Loved the gf bf jig the weight jig
Aww BECHARI the fun begins in khan mansion
Asad through the slums were heartbreaking
Didnt understand fully as hindi
But what he did such a good deed
He has to be the one all consider the son of kausali.
Yay I was right asad is chachu so pari belongs to azlan
But asad genuinely loves her she is the only one who make him extremely happy
I jus want to hug zoya when she talks to her jiju
Ayaan too much busy lst nite shower
Nice answer zoe to appi
Omg ayaan at the palace
He rub azlan with asad and his charms to naina had azlan seeing red
And surprise humi is not smitten by him but taunts him
Zoya and ice cream too much love song
Love asad shoes name
So malik calls zoya zainab guessing zoya mother and he knew her
So malik has feelings for Dilshad and he never got her
Even malik along with dillu sees a small change in asad
Maya is so nice she hs no kids of her own but she loves and care the others a her own
Love the morning b4 classes the emotions were high
Asad cant help tht feeling he gets for zoya
Sexy in her disheveled state
Loving his names is he...haha
Love naina speaking up abt asad Azlan and rashid got told
Dr love is right ZOYA
What does the haveli people think it is so easy to get asad back
Love the asadness and the almost kiss'
Ayan and zoya an adorable pair of bhai behen ...love his rules
The bad boy of kasauli now who might tht be ...
Asyaan an amazing friendship ayan cares for asad and his health tht he reports baxk to Dilshad
Zoya feeling out of place at the new school
Anwar and her convo nice
Horror from The past
Gaffur is such scum really has the haveli clan in control
He thinks only he is prestige if only he knew asad was invited to speak too
Gazia haseena all want to be put in a barrel light it afire and roll them down a hill.
Thought only asad get under azlan skin but ayaan too
Does ayaan know abt pari bcuz tht was a low blow to azlan abt family and responsibility
So ayaan smitten by naina irritates azlan and even humi now thought she couldnt stand him
Naina told azlan well said so azlan used to be asad best friend yeh I remember a memory of asad going to get ice cream with azlan and zain
Aww asad what has zoya done to u she has drawn blood
Bechara
It is sad to see him thinking he dont deserve her he will taint her
Ps4 why the sadness though
So tht was what zoya picked up his phone
Oh boy the I am sorry zoya phase god help her with the fuming lion
Aww zoya made a fren naina
But the past reaches her sameer hell from 7 yrs ago and a S who plans to claim zoya as his but lost the chance b4 but plans to cash in
And an S who has already claim her with the necklace with intense chocolate brown eyes
So 2"S" one good one bad maybe one is trying to frame the other eith the murders
Zoya shouldn't worry though she has another knight to look out for her he sees her slight pain at a glimpse
Zoya can irritate tht man a meeting in half an hour and he is not even in office
If she make asad lose this deal he might just kill her
Pari asad and azlan what a pair azlan get jealous of the live between the others
Pari an ocd like asad...haha
So they were friends in college too azlan wants zoya number and the lion plays he dont care.
Aahil complimenting aisha plz dont lets have an aahil anaya aisha trio
It is sad to see asad couldnt fulfil his dreams
Being a rockstar an artist playing video games
Hope soya makes him fulfil at least some of his dreams
Oh asad not allowed for concert how can we miss honey singh
Love his reaction anytime zoya responds to males around
Shazia crying watching video her happiness her light gone is she speaking of faizan or zoya
Aahil is definitely speaking of zoya
Omg I know why dadi may hate Zoya she is zainab daughter their dead daughter's daughter so their grandchild but maybe she is illegitimate so tht is y maybe zainab was disown and had zoya and die... maybe seeing zoya reminds her of tht and tht is y the general has a soft corner for zoya bcuz she is his only daughter child his only granddaughter.
Azlan outraged ober his sis not sllowing to go out with aahil
But still for his sis he has to calm
Zoya is gonna be strangled by asad soon dont she give tht phone back
Also u think zoya can be a little respectful to the people and the home she is staying in I think she needs to clean up after herself and keep her surrounding clean I also used to think the same abt the show when her room so untidy and her just walking away leaving her dishes on the table
Omg the trio wears costumes to go out in public so as not to be recognized so sad
Asad dont give a damn but azlan is scared of family and status
If he was so worried he shouldnt have done the act
Asad told him right their blow up made pari scared
Double trouble will be there for zoya in future she plans to sneek aisha out and maybe herself
Shelia and zoya talks were nice assuring her tonot change be herself
It is just a town of hypocrites
So zoya believes her abbu come from high
Society
Nice u give zoya a job here good to see hwr being independent
Oh god deep shit for zoya asad lost the deal to siddiqui
Nooo
Haseena and her dirtyness has her pimp of a bro digging up the dirt
So the arrest and bail is out
Love dilshad cancel the meeting even before it starts the past comes to haunt her
And haseena wants popcorn to go with it her bro taunting azlan on the other side
So asad is foing to speak at the college too .nice
Omg a call has azlan running and feroz on his tail
Every time I think things cant get worst for zoya where asad is concern it does
God she is definitely dead now
Pari collapsed he couldnt be reached in time
Azlan lashed out after his collapsed in his brotherly moment
It was good to have them in tht equation being there foe each other like old times
Each other support but is was all caught on tape by tht slime
So only options left for pari is surgery
So what does she have some heart deffect
Asad slam azlan for being absent for 4 yrs
Now it is zoya turn may her allah miya be with her
Cont soon


Thank You! I swear I try my best but I just can't help the words..they just flow out in english or Urdu and if I deliberately try to change them I don't like the outcome! I always like Dilu-Zoya and Asad's sisters bond from the show and so I wanted to keep it in this too! LOL - Pretty soon it will be Asad who will be all over his Ms. Farooqui. Ghaffur is a hypocrite (Spoiler!). LOL why else do you expect the royal family to take all his B.S? LOL everyone seems to love the GF and BF wala bit! Including me! Yup the fun is in the Khan Mansion! Zoya's arrival has finally brought life into that dark and dead house! Asad is an angel! LOL I would never do that to you guys..make Asad her father. Nope. Yes, Asad loves her to death though! Zoya and Faizan always break my heart too! Especially in part 13! Humi is smitten by him. She is just a little proud so must taunt him! Yes..he is a good friend to Asad which is why he always puts the haveli people in place. No, No. Malik calls Dilshad Behen 😆😆! He loved someone else..I thought it was clear in part 12! Maya is the only sane person in the Haveli! Asad just doesn't know what actually hit him when it comes to Zoya and he can fight it all he wants he's been a goner since he first saw her! Ayaan-Zoya are adorbs! Hmm..yah I too wonder who the bad boy of Kasauli is. Haveli people are all scums! Ayaan does NOT know about Pari (Clarification). Yes Azlan, Asad and Zain used to be friends. Hence the tension. I know eh my poor Asad. He feels sad about the PS4 as will be revealed in the later parts because he always wanted one and unfortunately could never have one. So now when he sees Zoya playing it he remembers his unfortunate circumstances and wishes to be able to play. Naina and Zoya are NOT friends yet. Yup as long as her knight is there nothing will touch her. Lets just hope she doesnt end up forcing that same knight to kill her! Trust me Aisha, Aahil Anaya will be handled tastefully in my fanfic compared to the show! Pari and Asad 😆 Hmm..you may be onto something about Zoya-Shazia. LOL I can't believe you picked up on that about Zoya's messiness..its just I'm just the same so I guess I just never paid close attention to it. Yes..it is a town full of hypocrites..and Azlan with his costumes..🥱 Haseena is a vamp! LOL things with Asad-Zoya are going to get MUCH worse..before better. Azlan-Asad's bromance is more tensed then AsYas love story 😆 . Yes she has a heart condition and yes may Allah Miyan protect Zoya!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Is chapter 13 up? I can't find it in page 40


No I am updating it now. Should be up within the hour. Just proof reading the last bit.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sally111

I sooo loved this😛😛 thnx for thia big update 😊


Thank You & You're welcome!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: piyalijpr

Superb 😆
Bt when will asya's luv story start??.. I want to see them together badly


Thank You! LOL, their love story has already started but there is a WHILE till they are together together. But don't you want to read their journey of falling in love? Don't you want a Mangalpuri Asad 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

I'm in awe.
What a wonderful update. I wanted to say that this is my favorite update, but it feels like I say it after every update. So in short I'm loving every bit and part of ur story. And ur an amazing story teller. I can se this ff playing out in my mind. It's amazing. U r amazing!!
Part 12 was filled with what I love, AsYa. Loving their interaction and their attraction towards each other. The funniest scene was the ice cream on show bit. I laughed out loud as I could just imagine all their expressions. though asad is going to blow a fuse now. He must be so very angry at soya now cause he missed the call regarding his baby.
Paris secret is out. So Asad has been caring for her since she was a baby and azlan only came in the picture. What a douchbag of a father sweet pair has. But luckily she has asad. And the poor kids is suffering from something?! I hope asad takes her home but I can't se it happening.
Ayaan is reyling asad up about his misunderstanding of his and zoyas relation. So funny.
Haveli ppl are just infuriating. Especially that raziya and ghaffur. And haseena, just want to strangle her and her sidekick brother.
Can't wait for the next part!!

Amazing amazing amazing


LOL That is me with every update too! I am especially loving 13 & 14..some of Zoya's antics in the coming parts are just 😆😆! Thank you for such sweet words I literally am like 😳😳! I am happy that you guys are able to visualize it happening. That was my goal all along! LOL I too laughed whilst writing the ice cream bit. I am glad you are enjoying AsYa and hopefully you enjoy all that is to come 😉 because I can't wait to write it! He is FURIOUS at Zoya but...bechara..dil ke haaton majboor hai..he can't kill her. Azlan is a douchebag but not completely, there is more to his story. Unfortunately, Asad can't take her home. Ayaan is having the time of his life! I too hate the Haveli people! Hate writing on them too!

Part 13 is going to be up any minute..hope you enjoy it and thank you for the kind words once again!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Oh my. What a dhmakedaar update. So much happened and so much reveled. Let's see what Asad is going to do with Zoya. Hope Zoya survives.


Thank You! Hope you enjoy part 13..let's see if Zoya survives the lions attack or not..😆

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