AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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mummyoftwo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Just got through per 10. Sorry been vey busy with everyday life. But now I'm done with this chapter and what a chapter it was..!!
Very well written and I have to agree with u. My favorite chapter aswell.
The first endearing part was the little mehndi girl and zoya scene. It was so sweet and innocent.
And of course the sangeet and asads singing was amazing! How can one not fall in love with asad?! I did.
Asad-Azlan and pari part was also so good. Both brother are acting like they don't care for one another but it fells like the case is opposite. Chachu? Asad? I really hope so.
Everything in this chapter was amazing. Loving the build up on zoya and asad emotions/feelings/ attraction. I hope zoya stands up for herself in this FF and unlike the series.
Can't wait to read more.

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piyalijpr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

At which tym u will update??? .. please update as soon as possible..

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Prettyzoya
Sorry for the late comment
Been busy with studies
Anyways coming to the update I just loved every bit of it.

It was just awesome.
I just didn't want it to finish.
You are just an awesome writer. 👏
Keep up the good work and
Please update the next part soon
I like long updates.

I understand! Studies come first (for those lucky souls who have the strength to put it first, unlike the lot of us 😆). But I am more happy about the fact that you enjoyed the update! Thank you for all the kind words..next part is up now! Hope you enjoy it and please do leave a LONG 😆 comment. I like long comments 😉.

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Little caught up with some thing
Will comment together in a day or two for last two parts
Plz pm me update

I understand..just drop a comment whenever you get a chance. I love reading them and knowing what you're enjoying and what you're wondering..what will earn me eggs and shoes 😆! Part 11 is up, hope you enjoy it. Will wait for your comment.

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: preetiasya
i am so sorry yaar daisy ididnt comment on this chap😭😭😭
but i will comment on next chap fr both 10&11😆😃😉
shortly chap 10 was superb cont sooon
😉😃👏

Apology accepted if you leave a nice long comment only 😆😆! Glad you're enjoying it. Part 11 is up. Go read it quick and comment soon 😉!

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo
Just got through per 10. Sorry been vey busy with everyday life. But now I'm done with this chapter and what a chapter it was..!!
Very well written and I have to agree with u. My favorite chapter aswell.
The first endearing part was the little mehndi girl and zoya scene. It was so sweet and innocent.
And of course the sangeet and asads singing was amazing! How can one not fall in love with asad?! I did.
Asad-Azlan and pari part was also so good. Both brother are acting like they don't care for one another but it fells like the case is opposite. Chachu? Asad? I really hope so.
Everything in this chapter was amazing. Loving the build up on zoya and asad emotions/feelings/ attraction. I hope zoya stands up for herself in this FF and unlike the series.
Can't wait to read more.

Lol..I understand. Not everyone is as vele as some of us 😆. Grateful you still took time out to read AND comment. Appreciate it from the bottom of my heart! So touched by all the kind words. Very glad it is your favourite chapter too..but chapter 12 is coming up to be almost just as favourite for me too (let's see how you like it once I post it). I personally also loved the Zoya and the little girl scene. Loved writing it.

Coming to Asad, you stole the words out of my mouth. Can you tell, I LOVE him. I literally cramped my fingers rushing through the first 10 parts just so I could write that scene 😆.

Lot's of Asad -Azlan & Pari coming up part 12 onwards. A few details about Asad-Azlan revealed in this part..about their dynamic. Their love and "hate" for one another. Chachu revelation seems to be tensing everyone 😆.hmm maybe I should delay it further than part 12..

Thank you for your kind words. Touched. Happy you are liking the AsYa build up. Lots of twists and drama to unfold there. Don't worry Zoya has a backbone in this FF as compared to the series.

Hope you enjoy the coming parts..don't forget to comment.

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: piyalijpr
At which tym u will update??? .. please update as soon as possible..

I updated at 4:45 am Ma'am. I expect a looonnng comment from you as soon as possible 😆😆😆.

Hope you enjoy it 😉!

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piyalijpr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Nice part..Bt who is "S"..I realy hope asad is not pari's father.. n yesss i enjoyed it 😉 😳 😊

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anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Res

Unres

Wow reading ur updates just leaves me breathless

Just like how zoya leaves asad

So haseena always a witch just would never stop

She doesnt want a working daughter in law

One day azlan will just edplode

So back to the wedding house

Mehendi nite asad and zoya mashallah

Him retorting to everything she says is like a duty

Love the song and dance never thought he would have teased her in song

Love the brothers bond and the brothers and sister bond

So much sadness amount the happiness

Wow the money disappearance and shazia words asad got angry

But still in the end he believe she stole it

He always acts befores he thinks

His stepfather appearance just paralyzed him

He has so much demons to slay may god help him

He thinks zoya has so much happiness and no worries if only he knows

Loved the family picture time

She was shocked seeing asad reaction

I could imagine what tht pic looks like with asya staring into each eyes

So will asya be married in ur story ...it was amazing to see how he was so affected when gathering her in his arms

What I love about this story is asad his reaction in anger and by just looking into zoya eyes tht anger dissipates

He was so angry at her being touched and the way he reacted thinking she was spoken for

Dilshad has seen their both actions and she finally has hopes gor asad future

Waiting for more impatiently

Edited by anopama - 8 years ago

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priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#190

so yaar daisy u r getting ur comment

this gonna be long one

upto now i didnt written this long update to any one

congrats to u

enjoy its fr u

so here comes ur comment

in part 10:

this scene was most favorite in part10

"ankoon ki panoom mein" song sequence was fab

its marvallous u know.i loved tat

so starting was abt pari

tere is a mystery who is chaachu & who is papa?

hope asad is chaachu<fingers cross>

i am loving the bonding b/w anwar & zoya by each part it is incresing

tey r amazing

i has a doubt in some scenes if anyone touches zoyas hand she takes back ten only - why?

another one is it a hindu marriage or muslim marriage?

so zoya found tat mysterious voice tat is haunting her nice

in shopping scene zoya is such a nice girl

i think aisha & zoya became nice friends

except asad she was liked by all

in asad heart- he had liked zoya, i cnt say totatlly but i can say mostly.but wat to do he never listens to heart

so according to its precap i thought tat he would blame &tats true

tats so rude i cnt accept tat one yaar

then coming to chap 11:

asad is handsome man why doesnt girls go gaga over him

even zoya drools over him ten why not tey

its nice tat asad is liking zeenat and gave her liking gift on the day of mehandi

why did asad thinks always bad about zoya tere should be limit iam getting angry now.

asad hates zoya frm mind & loves frm heart

i dont know wen this heart wins over mind hppe it comes fast

asya song sequence was really nice

again her brothers &hr connection was nice.

i hate this scene(money missing) in this story upto now

i doesnt want to talk abt it

in anger we talk anything &ten regret it tats not nice

we should think before talking atleast twice(asad should think ten times)

this ajaz he is disgust on name of man

zoya ke saaat chichi shame on him

zoya is such a pure soul

she forgives anyone so easily yaar how can she do like tat?

asad is lucky tat he gets her really i feel tat

tat jhoote churane vale scene was so nice

asad shows so much attitude

tats nice tat asad sang on request of zeenat

asad will definitely accept zoya as a family oneday it will happen

wow asad picked zoya in a bridal style nice scene

wat is the s responsiblefr death?

who is tis new entry?

pari suspence should come out soon

zoya haunted by multiple jinns wat is tat?

hey daisy tats not fair, i week time fr next chap

it took so much time fr me to remember scenes & wrote this

so update fast yaar fr mee pls plspls

see i gave very big comment

so u have hurry fr next chap

another doubt -approx in how many chaps does asya marriage will happen i wnna know pls say it yaar

so update sooon

Edited by preetiasya - 8 years ago

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