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Wonderful update!
Firstly, I have to tell you that I'm obsessing over your story. I check your reserved pages every other hour to see whether or not the update has been put. You've literally got me addicted!
Coming to the update, I really like how Asad and Zeenat's relationship is shaping up. Slow but steady.
However, I can already see the wheels in Asya's relationship turning south. On one hand, I love how their relationship will see the lows and a huge bunch of emotions before they're really get together. BUT, on the other hand, I want them to realise and confess their love for each other already! I do hope that Asad apologises for his behaviour in good time. At the same time, once Zoya discovers his past she'll understand his behaviour and probably not even expect an apology.
Asad's stepfather is a CREEP. Money-minded leech. I hope he meets his end soon and Asad can move on in life. I'm guessing that Dilshad was forcefully married to him by her greedy parents when Rashid abandoned her. Reading about Asad's childhood made me super sad. No wonder the man never eats!
Your last paragraph is making me doubt whether Asad is S 😕
I don't think he's capable of hurting young girls and a child. S might just be the same person who's Zoya's blast from the past. I just can't tell whether the "brotherhood" is a positive bunch or not. However, I do think Asad, Mallik and Ayaan are working together to save Kasauli.
Coming to Tahir and Zoya, I'm starting to think that he might just be her father. Or related to her in some way. Especially after your last scene in Part 10, I feel like he could be a hurdle in Asya's relationship once they're together and (if) Zoya reconciles with her former "family".
So excited to read more about Pari, Asad and Azlan in the next part.
More than anything, I'm waiting for the part where Asad really starts to protect Zoya from the world as family, or something more! Would love to see that happening soon
Firstly, I have to tell you that I'm obsessing over your story. I check your reserved pages every other hour to see whether or not the update has been put. You've literally got me addicted!
Coming to the update, I really like how Asad and Zeenat's relationship is shaping up. Slow but steady.
However, I can already see the wheels in Asya's relationship turning south. On one hand, I love how their relationship will see the lows and a huge bunch of emotions before they're really get together. BUT, on the other hand, I want them to realise and confess their love for each other already! I do hope that Asad apologises for his behaviour in good time. At the same time, once Zoya discovers his past she'll understand his behaviour and probably not even expect an apology.
Asad's stepfather is a CREEP. Money-minded leech. I hope he meets his end soon and Asad can move on in life. I'm guessing that Dilshad was forcefully married to him by her greedy parents when Rashid abandoned her. Reading about Asad's childhood made me super sad. No wonder the man never eats!
Your last paragraph is making me doubt whether Asad is S 😕
I don't think he's capable of hurting young girls and a child. S might just be the same person who's Zoya's blast from the past. I just can't tell whether the "brotherhood" is a positive bunch or not. However, I do think Asad, Mallik and Ayaan are working together to save Kasauli.
Coming to Tahir and Zoya, I'm starting to think that he might just be her father. Or related to her in some way. Especially after your last scene in Part 10, I feel like he could be a hurdle in Asya's relationship once they're together and (if) Zoya reconciles with her former "family".
So excited to read more about Pari, Asad and Azlan in the next part.
More than anything, I'm waiting for the part where Asad really starts to protect Zoya from the world as family, or something more! Would love to see that happening soon
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